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Masterpiece... A bunch of emotions and a great plot. Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ...
Just finished reading and what else can i say but it's a great story with good characters and world building.When i saw the number of chapters i was sceptical of the quality of this fanfic but you made me think otherwise with the length of your chapters Wich are quite lengthy.All together a great thanks to the author for this brillant work 👍👍👍👍
Everyone already says it's dropped. but there are a few don’t like it. Such is how mc acts and his power level . I mean luffy has become so powerful after time skip. but in the story Mc is so weak even after more than 7 years training with Garp. love interest!
Really enjoy this one from beginning to end. Very good comedy and Characters. The MC is funny and seems ´real´, and the story which progresses parallel to the straw hats voyage is interesting and original. My only minus is how the love interests in the story were handled. Up to the first third of the novel everything was pointing at Nami, with her admitting her feelings, and MC after several private breakdowns and his own development as a person slowly accepting his own feeling. It seemed genuine and good... until it suddenly ended and he says he sees her as a sister. No explanation, no build up, no climax or fall apart. MC woes another Girl (bonney), and gets together with her. Now dont get me wrong. The story and build up between MC and Bonny is also exteremely well written, and really wolesome so i personally got over, and even liked it. But considering everything with Nami, it felt a little incostistent especially with how the two of them remained after he brought bonny to the straw hats. I never read the novel before it was remastered so i could live with it but i also can understand why so many people rant over it. I STRONGLY recommend this one to anyone. Top notch Comedy, Romance, Originality and Character writing
I love this fanfic ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
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The "Remastered" Version is not even near the original Version. I really don´t understand why you stopped the Original ..................................
This is personally one of the best Fan-fictions I ever read. Also overall one of the first that I read through and I can tell you that I cried more and harder than the previous twins of the sea. I got also goosebumps from the epic scenes and laughed at the funny comedy. I really loved to read this, it was a great story and I hope I can introduce it to my friends who dont even like to read novels/ Fan-fics.
La verdad me encanto es muy buena aunque tiene un par de hoyos en la trama es muy entretenida una pena que ya no continue ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I arrived until the chapters and I say WTF and Nami is painted or that good at the end is its history but man, built a beautiful relationship with Nami and Puffff, it is clear that I'm going to get the redundancy in the chapter where it says you can not love anyone else if someone changes that I say that for wonderful history but and nami **** ....
Honestly, in the beginning it was a little bland, but after that it was great. The twists, the story, as well as all the action is great. The writing quailty is pretty good and comedy is on point. Over all a great read.
Honestly I loved it. Some people may not like how Nami didn't end up with him in the end or Robin, but I thought overall it was very well written and super entertaining to read. :) P
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Ya llevo unos pocos años leyendo y por el momento e llorado solo en esta serie y sin duda alguna es mi favorita especialmente el final me reí demaciado y recomiendo a todos que lo disfrutes.
Para los hispano hablantes , muy buen fanfiction , el mc bien diseñado ,buen humor y etc , la verdad disfrute mucho leyendo es de los mejores de este tipo que ay ahí afuera 10/10
Finished reading 12/02/2020 *This review is mostly for myself just in case I wanna read it in the future* • Like the start of the story • Not really a fan of OC going around f*c|<ing girls he is interested in. • I really love the story between the OC and Persephone. Love from past life. • Sad that Ace and Whitebeard also died here too. • OC is too overpowering in my opinion in most of the scenes. • I really don't like the time when OC became a one-month slave. • I really really love the humor and jokes in this story. • OC keep saying he's the most handsome makes it annoying after several chapters, kinda like male version of Hancock. • Glad that Bonney didn't die. • Kinda sad that Nami didnt end up with Sanji, but it's still okay I guess with Luffy. • His savagery against Big Mom is the one of the best interactions in this story... love it. • The times when his savage way to teach other people, killing people easily, and using bad people as an experiment is kind of too much for me sometimes but I couldn't help sometimes that he is in right in someway but not everything he does is right. Overall, love the story. I'm pretty sure that I will be rereading this story again in the future. Keep up the good work author-san. I'll wait for your other stories to be done. P.S. No offense but I'm don't really have a patience to wait for several days for a chapter. My style is to binge read.
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wow just wow... if you are not reading this novel then you are really missing out on a lot of amazing things.ok let's see.. 1. it has long chapters around 1500 to 2500. this is a win in my book. 2. the character development is amazing, I actually feel like the MC Zeus is actually a real person. He might seem ruthless but he has emotions and a motive for them. 3. this deserves recognition and it's the backstory, it actually nearly made me cry. 4. the character interaction is really believable and my favourite catch phrase ever. "do you believe it?" this is actually a significant part of his character. ok big spoilers if u dont want it just skip the bracket line. (I actually think it was for the better for Bonney and Persephone to end up with Zeus instead of Nami, dont widen your eyes at me and give hate to the author for it, their relationship gets really good) the only complaint would be that it is not as interesting at the beginning but this is easily overshadowed by the brilliance of the latter chapters. I have read all 82 chapters and I really enjoyed this book, i was always waiting for a new chapter everyday. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND IT. READ THIS NOVEL. IT EVEN HAS JOKES, COME ON READ IT DO IT, JUST DO IT.
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This is probably the one of the best fanfics I have ever read you have done a amazing job keep up the good work rhrrjjfjjfjfnfjfjfjfjffjjiff
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact s9033107ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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genial, me gusta mucho su historia, aunque no se original, pero igual me gusta sigue escribiendo bro........................................[img = actualización]
Yo dont delete this book its actually pretty good so come on man dont do it i really enjoY this book so keep writing so i can have some to read when im bored in school 😂😂😂
This story is a trash. There are many events in the first seven years that are important to building the story and developing the character and the writer has skipped it completely
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To be clear this novel deserves a read from anyone that enjoys one piece I read this before it was remastered and am current on the rework. For the most part I like what the other has done Character growth is more present in this than many novels let alone fan fiction I do have reservations on how a couple love interests have been handled But I dont want to be a spoiler The MC has made some mistakes here and there And plot armor is present But the novel is genuinely fun to read Thank you author
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I have reads many one piece fanfics but i can easily say that this one is on my atleast in the top 3
Masterpiece... A bunch of emotions and a great plot. Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ...
Just finished reading and what else can i say but it's a great story with good characters and world building.When i saw the number of chapters i was sceptical of the quality of this fanfic but you made me think otherwise with the length of your chapters Wich are quite lengthy.All together a great thanks to the author for this brillant work 👍👍👍👍
Everyone already says it's dropped. but there are a few don’t like it. Such is how mc acts and his power level . I mean luffy has become so powerful after time skip. but in the story Mc is so weak even after more than 7 years training with Garp. love interest!
Really enjoy this one from beginning to end. Very good comedy and Characters. The MC is funny and seems ´real´, and the story which progresses parallel to the straw hats voyage is interesting and original. My only minus is how the love interests in the story were handled. Up to the first third of the novel everything was pointing at Nami, with her admitting her feelings, and MC after several private breakdowns and his own development as a person slowly accepting his own feeling. It seemed genuine and good... until it suddenly ended and he says he sees her as a sister. No explanation, no build up, no climax or fall apart. MC woes another Girl (bonney), and gets together with her. Now dont get me wrong. The story and build up between MC and Bonny is also exteremely well written, and really wolesome so i personally got over, and even liked it. But considering everything with Nami, it felt a little incostistent especially with how the two of them remained after he brought bonny to the straw hats. I never read the novel before it was remastered so i could live with it but i also can understand why so many people rant over it. I STRONGLY recommend this one to anyone. Top notch Comedy, Romance, Originality and Character writing
I love this fanfic ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
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The "Remastered" Version is not even near the original Version. I really don´t understand why you stopped the Original ..................................
This is personally one of the best Fan-fictions I ever read. Also overall one of the first that I read through and I can tell you that I cried more and harder than the previous twins of the sea. I got also goosebumps from the epic scenes and laughed at the funny comedy. I really loved to read this, it was a great story and I hope I can introduce it to my friends who dont even like to read novels/ Fan-fics.
La verdad me encanto es muy buena aunque tiene un par de hoyos en la trama es muy entretenida una pena que ya no continue ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I arrived until the chapters and I say WTF and Nami is painted or that good at the end is its history but man, built a beautiful relationship with Nami and Puffff, it is clear that I'm going to get the redundancy in the chapter where it says you can not love anyone else if someone changes that I say that for wonderful history but and nami **** ....
Honestly, in the beginning it was a little bland, but after that it was great. The twists, the story, as well as all the action is great. The writing quailty is pretty good and comedy is on point. Over all a great read.
Honestly I loved it. Some people may not like how Nami didn't end up with him in the end or Robin, but I thought overall it was very well written and super entertaining to read. :) P
Reveal Spoiler Ya llevo unos pocos años leyendo y por el momento e llorado solo en esta serie y sin duda alguna es mi favorita especialmente el final me reí demaciado y recomiendo a todos que lo disfrutes.
Para los hispano hablantes , muy buen fanfiction , el mc bien diseñado ,buen humor y etc , la verdad disfrute mucho leyendo es de los mejores de este tipo que ay ahí afuera 10/10
Finished reading 12/02/2020 *This review is mostly for myself just in case I wanna read it in the future* • Like the start of the story • Not really a fan of OC going around f*c|<ing girls he is interested in. • I really love the story between the OC and Persephone. Love from past life. • Sad that Ace and Whitebeard also died here too. • OC is too overpowering in my opinion in most of the scenes. • I really don't like the time when OC became a one-month slave. • I really really love the humor and jokes in this story. • OC keep saying he's the most handsome makes it annoying after several chapters, kinda like male version of Hancock. • Glad that Bonney didn't die. • Kinda sad that Nami didnt end up with Sanji, but it's still okay I guess with Luffy. • His savagery against Big Mom is the one of the best interactions in this story... love it. • The times when his savage way to teach other people, killing people easily, and using bad people as an experiment is kind of too much for me sometimes but I couldn't help sometimes that he is in right in someway but not everything he does is right. Overall, love the story. I'm pretty sure that I will be rereading this story again in the future. Keep up the good work author-san. I'll wait for your other stories to be done. P.S. No offense but I'm don't really have a patience to wait for several days for a chapter. My style is to binge read.
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wow just wow... if you are not reading this novel then you are really missing out on a lot of amazing things.ok let's see.. 1. it has long chapters around 1500 to 2500. this is a win in my book. 2. the character development is amazing, I actually feel like the MC Zeus is actually a real person. He might seem ruthless but he has emotions and a motive for them. 3. this deserves recognition and it's the backstory, it actually nearly made me cry. 4. the character interaction is really believable and my favourite catch phrase ever. "do you believe it?" this is actually a significant part of his character. ok big spoilers if u dont want it just skip the bracket line. (I actually think it was for the better for Bonney and Persephone to end up with Zeus instead of Nami, dont widen your eyes at me and give hate to the author for it, their relationship gets really good) the only complaint would be that it is not as interesting at the beginning but this is easily overshadowed by the brilliance of the latter chapters. I have read all 82 chapters and I really enjoyed this book, i was always waiting for a new chapter everyday. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND IT. READ THIS NOVEL. IT EVEN HAS JOKES, COME ON READ IT DO IT, JUST DO IT.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact s9033107ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Just amazing MNzbzbzbzbsnsnzbznzbbzbzbzbzbxbxbxbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdbdbdbdhdbdhdbbdnd
genial, me gusta mucho su historia, aunque no se original, pero igual me gusta sigue escribiendo bro........................................[img = actualización]
Yo dont delete this book its actually pretty good so come on man dont do it i really enjoY this book so keep writing so i can have some to read when im bored in school 😂😂😂
This story is a trash. There are many events in the first seven years that are important to building the story and developing the character and the writer has skipped it completely
good stuff ..... .... ......... . ............................ ....mmm.............................................
Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami Nami
To be clear this novel deserves a read from anyone that enjoys one piece I read this before it was remastered and am current on the rework. For the most part I like what the other has done Character growth is more present in this than many novels let alone fan fiction I do have reservations on how a couple love interests have been handled But I dont want to be a spoiler The MC has made some mistakes here and there And plot armor is present But the novel is genuinely fun to read Thank you author
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I have reads many one piece fanfics but i can easily say that this one is on my atleast in the top 3