Twilight of Steel

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Vastoking

It only took one day or 2 to get the mc and the girl to fall for each other, which in my books is stupid, I gave a 2+ cus i like the idea of kryptonian, however i dont like such a being in twilight and the change from heat vision to fire breathe was such small brain.

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Authorwolker

Hey I am the author of this book reviewing myself.This is my first fanfiction.Story will follow the orginal canon at the beginning with certain changes.Sorry for the grammar mistakes .Please leave a review😁

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Marven123

Its a great novel. I hope you don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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The_Gamer_Bell

my advice is get a beta reader or run it through a writer program. I can't even get into reading because of the poor writing quality. Believe me, I TRIED it felt like I was having a stroke.

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Austin_Gage

I like it just don’t drop the story and I’ll keep reading ………………….………………….………………….………………….………………….……………….[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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WiLLY

I think it has a lot of potential, keep doing it. I hope you don't drop it cause it's really good for a first fanfic :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

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titan10

Good work man hope u update daily if u can..................................................................................................

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Thumbiko_Mkhala

i like the idea of superman but the rest i dont.... and its just too cheesy just like most of twilight fan fics.... ...so a 2 star for me ..

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yokedjaguar

Grammar is atrocious. I don't know if the author can't tell or their lazy. Half the spelling errors could simply be fixed if they re-read what they wrote. The interactions are forced and uncomfortable to read. Kryptonian powers in twilight.... Need I say more.

LV 4

Mr_sleepyhead

Great fanfic................. the only problem is that the plot is a bit rushed.

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Gd_Sys

More eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Mor eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Mor eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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James_Schultis

i wish this kept going. i actually liked it a lot

LV 4

Mastergamer1

Please update this story I really want to see what happens when Alex meets the volturi

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Alex_Penrod

I Genuinely want to read more of this.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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donut_obsessed

bro story is v...nice come back from break quick!!!🔥🔥

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maxphantom

gaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Arch_Tysonoo

Well here is my review- -There are alot of grammaticall mistakes. -The story development is fine but sometimes it makes progress to quickly. -Addition of 'Man from Star' is good to be honest and have alot of paths to develop. -Updating stability is something that's the problem here, need more! Well, I would recommend you to try this fanfic as it's pretty good and has alot of potential. Thanks for reading this out

LV 1

DaoistGsSe3J

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