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Trapped in a mansion with my 19 other classmates.
Author: ihatepower_45
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A group of twenty students are transported to another world. What will they do ? will they return can they return?
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The plot is interesting and the I liked the concept. You should pay attention to the grammatical errors and punctuation errors. One piece of advice would be to add some more descriptions to the synopsis. Good luck, Author!!
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shameless author giving story 5/5 how unoriginal especially on webnovel don't worry though I will change the review soon as I finish chapter 10 or around so.
I think it was a pretty bold move to write this in first person while there are like 19 characters in it, so I would appreciate that. I feel that the start was a bit rushed in, things got to move pretty fast which I believe there could have been a build up, and as it's just 6 chapters all the mistakes can be forgiven, but that doesn't mean you should work on improving things! I like the way you gave a detailed synopsis of the characters also as you introduced them in beginning. I am also liking the way story is slowly unfolding, and I am looking forward to upcoming chapters!