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Top Agent In Ancient Days

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Author: Zui Li Lun Dao

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The top agents of the 21st century accidentally crossed over.
In her previous life, she had lived for scum. In this life, she was determined to become a rich and unrestrained immortal.
But what Su Mingyu didn't expect was that in the middle of her journey, a person had suddenly appeared.
This old man who was almost ten years older than him always had a smile plastered on his face.
She wanted to rely on the idea of 21st century clothing design to get money, this Gu Ruobai in the blink of an eye to monopolize her fabric merchant, became her biggest boss.
She thought of herself as a new agent in the world, a boss.
However, Gu Ruoyun had somehow found out about this, and she'd sent him a steady stream of heads.
After a long period of time, her organization could only receive a few people who wanted to take revenge on the thieves.
What about the crippled prince?! You don't have to lie like that!

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    JesReadin

    This seems to be a poorly executed version of the transmigration trope. Tough woman of the future walks in on the man she likes doing the dirty with the trusted friend, dies, soul transmigrates into a deceased body of a woman betrayed by those she trusted in this ancient life. Seems that they have a lot in common, so why is the FL judging the original soul as stupid for being easily deceived? Cue painful memory recall; cue unforseen act of strength from this weak body; cue meeting betraying step family; cue the kindness expressed by a maid that has this unloved orphan from the future feeling warm and fuzzy; cue sudden determination to avenge original soul 🙄 Apart from this being so eyerollingly generically ‘cut and paste’ from the plethora of transmigration novels out there, it’s appallingly translated and sadly lacklustre in writing quality. Why bother reading (and ultimately paying for) a lazy piece of work when other writers and translators put in effort to deliver a more enjoyable proofread reading experience? I know that I have better things to do 🤷🏼‍♀️ Added note from a section where the FL notices a ‘fatty’. Judgemental language is a bit of a turn off in a FL. There are better ways to describe this person, after all it’s his drunken leering that should offend, not his weight. For example; ‘Su Mingue turned to see a clearly inebriated man stumble his way towards her’. Then you could describe his physical attributes or even slip it in as ‘inebriated heavyset man’. Either way, we judge his negative behaviour first before his unfortunate appearance. Just a suggestion 🤷🏼‍♀️

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    Slushy_Apollo

    Novel is ok but the writing quality is an automatic one star

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