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As normal times have passed, transparent doors had suddenly appeared across the globe with unknown figures spreading out causing chaos...
Soon there will be an Entity which rises up. From where? When? And who? All will know through the passage of time.
As this is how the timeline states. The timeline is ethereal.
The Timeline System!
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Good Day Everyone, I hope everyone could give this a thoughtful read as I try to transgress through timelines with all of you!
The cover for the novel, is a picture i have found, but if anyone owns it I'll take it down, nonetheless until I'm able to afford someone professionally to make me one. It will stay up.
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Write a reviewHello. I find your work engaging. The premise is interesting, and the MC has a good driving reason 'why'. I enjoyed reading your novel, and read all 7 chapters before I realized it. The action starts right away as well, which is good for grabbing attention, and as always, there is something to fear from an enemy that can't be reasoned or bargained with. Please continue writing, dear author!
A very action packed novel. If you like action this is great. The beginning pulled me in from how the author described certain events. The fourth chapter was quite good!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The story has potential! It has an outstanding prologue that made me hooked! It has action right off the bat. The author has splendidly made the narration to be smooth as a sailing ship on a calm sea. Despite of the language barrier, the author has a good grasp of the english language! Kudos author!
Writing quality: Easy to read, no complicated vocabulary, you can dive in without much worry. Updates: On time Story development: I like the way the story it's headed, personally Character design: Only slight adjustments needed, more description of appearances World background: it may seem cliché as a post-apocalyptic but believe me it's different
You write like a pro! Gosh, I envied this.. very realistic and simple. Your style is neat which took my liking. I look forward for the next chapters :)
Author ElleDoves
Honestly I really see potential in this, if you give a read for the firat chapters, you can see that the story is quite unique and it could be slemthing Good, Keep it Up! — Gg