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bullshit. he has evey opportunity to kill hisoka and illumi. there was no valid reason why he is holding back. just for fun? not realy base on his character development etc
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too rushed of a story, first 20 chapters as a time skip is simply trash, better to directly start at the age after time skip. no mention of how he trained and how he developed his nen ability. hatsu is unknown for 40 chapters (stopped there). rushed plot and bad description of fights. absent mentions of nen techniques, doesn't give the impression of a hxh fight, just punching and kicking with "basic nen technique" in conclusion a certified trash novel, a waste of time
I don't really normally write reviews, however I saw a lot of one star reviews which in my opinion is a bit of injustice towards this novel. What motivated me to write this review is that the author did not delete the negative reviews (like other authors on this app) which I really appreciate. Now on the actual review: The story is not bad as we follow the rise of a person from the slums to the top of the world. The main character and the original supporting characters are well done in my opinion. My issues with this novel ar3: 1- The MC's impact on canon is minimal (especially when he transmigrated a long time before the canon starts). 2- His paranoia at the beginning of the novel to hide himself from the hunter association. This does not make sense as there is no prior indication that the association targets unofficial Nen users. 3- The long flashback which spanned around 35% of the novel. A flashback should be short and add context to the story, not tell the story from a flashback as all the tension disappear. Overall an average story that could be much better 3.8/5.
Great book ìdea he just went at it the wrong way similer to his kuroko fic of always hiding his power which doesn't work in action like these and irritates the hell out of readers adding Ocs to an anime with a variety of characters and flashbacks But good writing needs to work on action scenes which is due to him holding back alot but as of now since flashback ended it got alot better as he clarified the abillity but he still is holding back and is on an whole bunch of words with not much to show for it as i doubt he can beat netoro as he said but hopes it get better or author moves on from these always holding back fics and all secretive for 200 chapters like the kuroko fic but it seems to be imporving.[718]
Great Fanfiction. A must read fanfic in my opinion if you are a fan of HxH.
I made it a grand total of 8 and a half chapters before stopping at the part when the mc didn’t want to higher a hunter to teach him nen simply because "I don’t want to attract attention"…… from who? 8 chapters in and you’re already hiding from imaginary people that keep there eyes out for kids learning nen. Seriously… who cares about you man!? Your a nobody who could possibly be looking for you? Author give me 3 reasons on why he shouldn’t of hired a hunter to learn nen in chapter 8 and I’ll continue reading. If you can’t then there was no reason other than you felt like it. And why just why would you make the mc partner up with someone who already failed in making a business? I’m extremely tired of people making excuses to prolong arcs in a story because they "don’t want to attract attention"
The writing is a little to flowery for my taste,besides a lot of explanations are lacking
The writing seems so robotic for me. I’m 90% sure the author has ai assisting him in writing this fic so that’s an automatic pass for me. But I’m sure a lot of other ppl prefer that so to each their own
I'm incredibly interested. What happens next in this story? She had an effect on me. very impressive, never seen anything like it. among hunter x hunter fanfiction I'll be looking forward to updates and wishing all the best to the author. of this creation
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I like the story so far, but wished that there would be more action and details in development. I also prefer the way it doesn't follow the plot and the way the author is not afraid of changing some things for the story. It makes it more distinctive from other fics that I've read and makes me really feel that this is a story inside another story. I would like to see more interesting interactions with other characters from HxH and how the story will be ending after altercation. Hope there wouldn't be any awkward romance or harem though cause it just wouldn't make sense in the situation.
Up to now, it's really good. Well, the only lacking in my opinion is the MC grow too fast, perhaps because too much time skip. Oh also character design/personality is kinda lacking but not bad. Anyway, thanks for the hardwork author ✌️
It's not a bad read, but it needs more dialogue. It feels more like a summary than a book.
Jusqu'à maintenant c'est une superbe fanfic . Mon seul problème reste l'intrigue je me demande si avec se rythme assez rapide l'auteur pourra faire durer sa fanfic à plus de 100 chapitres comme nous l'avons vu avec l'autre sur kuroko no basket , qui a vraiment fait monté la barre haute dans nos espérances So far this is a great fanfic. My only problem remains the plot, I wonder if with this fast enough pace the author will be able to make his fanfic last more than 100 chapters as we saw with the other one on Kuroko no basket, which really raised the stakes. high bar in our hopes
old and loyal fan, here if you want a new and refreshing take on hxh fanfic, join me here together with the author to explore his very own hxh fanfic. will continue to review as chapters have stacked and a part of the world background has been explained. so stay tuned!!
great work. really impressed with the previous translation of kuroko fanfic. hopefully this will be the same
Hope you don't miss this time around! Great story on your last one, just do half as good would do the trick hahaha
Pretty good so far, though it would be best if it's not too rushed. But well, hoping there would be at least some flashback on it so we weren't left hanging about some of the details.
I have nothing to say..I just want to give the author the 5stars he well deserved. im not sure if i have given his other story a 5star..but that 1 was amazing too.
Well to be honest I didn't like it, it's rushed and it's feels like it's written by an Ai.
The Tsun- at the beginning got me🤣 here's 5stars for mythoast because i know it gonna be good but i just hope you post more chapters at important fight scenes
Can the author please check chapter 11 and 12 You have rewritten a part of chapter 10 in both chapters By the way, I have read your previous work and it was amazing Thanks for the amazing book
bullshit. he has evey opportunity to kill hisoka and illumi. there was no valid reason why he is holding back. just for fun? not realy base on his character development etc
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too rushed of a story, first 20 chapters as a time skip is simply trash, better to directly start at the age after time skip. no mention of how he trained and how he developed his nen ability. hatsu is unknown for 40 chapters (stopped there). rushed plot and bad description of fights. absent mentions of nen techniques, doesn't give the impression of a hxh fight, just punching and kicking with "basic nen technique" in conclusion a certified trash novel, a waste of time
I don't really normally write reviews, however I saw a lot of one star reviews which in my opinion is a bit of injustice towards this novel. What motivated me to write this review is that the author did not delete the negative reviews (like other authors on this app) which I really appreciate. Now on the actual review: The story is not bad as we follow the rise of a person from the slums to the top of the world. The main character and the original supporting characters are well done in my opinion. My issues with this novel ar3: 1- The MC's impact on canon is minimal (especially when he transmigrated a long time before the canon starts). 2- His paranoia at the beginning of the novel to hide himself from the hunter association. This does not make sense as there is no prior indication that the association targets unofficial Nen users. 3- The long flashback which spanned around 35% of the novel. A flashback should be short and add context to the story, not tell the story from a flashback as all the tension disappear. Overall an average story that could be much better 3.8/5.
Great book ìdea he just went at it the wrong way similer to his kuroko fic of always hiding his power which doesn't work in action like these and irritates the hell out of readers adding Ocs to an anime with a variety of characters and flashbacks But good writing needs to work on action scenes which is due to him holding back alot but as of now since flashback ended it got alot better as he clarified the abillity but he still is holding back and is on an whole bunch of words with not much to show for it as i doubt he can beat netoro as he said but hopes it get better or author moves on from these always holding back fics and all secretive for 200 chapters like the kuroko fic but it seems to be imporving.[718]
Great Fanfiction. A must read fanfic in my opinion if you are a fan of HxH.
I made it a grand total of 8 and a half chapters before stopping at the part when the mc didn’t want to higher a hunter to teach him nen simply because "I don’t want to attract attention"…… from who? 8 chapters in and you’re already hiding from imaginary people that keep there eyes out for kids learning nen. Seriously… who cares about you man!? Your a nobody who could possibly be looking for you? Author give me 3 reasons on why he shouldn’t of hired a hunter to learn nen in chapter 8 and I’ll continue reading. If you can’t then there was no reason other than you felt like it. And why just why would you make the mc partner up with someone who already failed in making a business? I’m extremely tired of people making excuses to prolong arcs in a story because they "don’t want to attract attention"
The writing is a little to flowery for my taste,besides a lot of explanations are lacking
The writing seems so robotic for me. I’m 90% sure the author has ai assisting him in writing this fic so that’s an automatic pass for me. But I’m sure a lot of other ppl prefer that so to each their own
I'm incredibly interested. What happens next in this story? She had an effect on me. very impressive, never seen anything like it. among hunter x hunter fanfiction I'll be looking forward to updates and wishing all the best to the author. of this creation
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I like the story so far, but wished that there would be more action and details in development. I also prefer the way it doesn't follow the plot and the way the author is not afraid of changing some things for the story. It makes it more distinctive from other fics that I've read and makes me really feel that this is a story inside another story. I would like to see more interesting interactions with other characters from HxH and how the story will be ending after altercation. Hope there wouldn't be any awkward romance or harem though cause it just wouldn't make sense in the situation.
Up to now, it's really good. Well, the only lacking in my opinion is the MC grow too fast, perhaps because too much time skip. Oh also character design/personality is kinda lacking but not bad. Anyway, thanks for the hardwork author ✌️
It's not a bad read, but it needs more dialogue. It feels more like a summary than a book.
Jusqu'à maintenant c'est une superbe fanfic . Mon seul problème reste l'intrigue je me demande si avec se rythme assez rapide l'auteur pourra faire durer sa fanfic à plus de 100 chapitres comme nous l'avons vu avec l'autre sur kuroko no basket , qui a vraiment fait monté la barre haute dans nos espérances So far this is a great fanfic. My only problem remains the plot, I wonder if with this fast enough pace the author will be able to make his fanfic last more than 100 chapters as we saw with the other one on Kuroko no basket, which really raised the stakes. high bar in our hopes
old and loyal fan, here if you want a new and refreshing take on hxh fanfic, join me here together with the author to explore his very own hxh fanfic. will continue to review as chapters have stacked and a part of the world background has been explained. so stay tuned!!
great work. really impressed with the previous translation of kuroko fanfic. hopefully this will be the same
Hope you don't miss this time around! Great story on your last one, just do half as good would do the trick hahaha
Pretty good so far, though it would be best if it's not too rushed. But well, hoping there would be at least some flashback on it so we weren't left hanging about some of the details.
I have nothing to say..I just want to give the author the 5stars he well deserved. im not sure if i have given his other story a 5star..but that 1 was amazing too.
Well to be honest I didn't like it, it's rushed and it's feels like it's written by an Ai.
The Tsun- at the beginning got me🤣 here's 5stars for mythoast because i know it gonna be good but i just hope you post more chapters at important fight scenes
Can the author please check chapter 11 and 12 You have rewritten a part of chapter 10 in both chapters By the way, I have read your previous work and it was amazing Thanks for the amazing book
Shameless review from the author as usual!