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Chapter 3: Edited Chapter 2 The Beginning...

Ps end of previous chapter updated.

MC Looks:

Black haired

blue eyes

sharp jawline

white

POV:?

I was sitting at the bus stop. After a hard day of work. I thought this week had been shit. My car broke down a couple of days ago. And it of couse it was still in repairs. Though still had my wife and kid can't compain too much.

That's when I saw Steve literally fly by. He got flight as his power since he was a co-poilet at a public airport.

I still haven't got my power yet. Through I think I will get it soon. I hope my predictive AI, I'm making, is my greatest achievement.

But Interuping my thoughts was a strange old man. Who sat down next to me. He looked pretty tall. He had a beard,blue eyes, and this strange aura.

I dismiss it as nothing. The old man then says, "Things been tough lately haven't they," I replied "Yeah they have old man. your name?" He replies,"Shaun and yours?" "Henry " I say. But then he says something strange "But your life will get way harder in the future, Henry Mings."

I turn my head to reply to say, "How do you know my last name...?" Only for him to be gone without a trace. I asked the other person sitting next to me. "Where did that old man go?" Only for a confused reply. "An old man? What old man? It was only you and me sitting here?"

I thought I must be delirious. I have been stressing myself lately. But then the bus arrived. Well, at least the bus arrived early.

Though that strange old man was right. This was only the beginning of my suffering.


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Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Powers Unlocked

As I got home from work at 5:30. As I Entereing my house. My wife Crystal and daughter Hazal. My wife looks at short,brown eyes and long brown hair. My daughter has short black hair, hazel eyes and is almost as tall as me. "Honey, you're home. How was work? " my wife said with delight. "It was fine," I replied.As a proceeded to go to the basement.

Anoyance on her face, my wife said, "Going to work on that AI in the basement again.You really should spend more time with the family." I repiled."I know I will. I just need to finish the AI. I'm just so close."

My wife relied "Fine but you better be back for dinner." I reply."Of course I will, love you, She replied. "Love you too. Dinner will be ready in an hour. Finally, going into the basement. I started working on the machine for hours. Only going out for dinner.

After pain, staking hours of typing and coding. Sweat pouring down my head. Coffee running through my veins. I did it,I finally did. Hearing the sweet sound of the system notification.

System notifications:

Achievement created:AI

Power unlocked:Perfect prediction

I quickly went into my status and looked at my stats. I saw this

Achievement: Created the best predictive AI in history

Power Rank:SSS+

Perfect Prediction: It can perfectly predict anything about objects and people. This power can also see and change the future

Limitations: Some things can't be seen or changed.

Age: 42

Height:  6 foot 3 inches

Stats:

Strength: 13

Constitution: 12

Agility: 11

Willpower: 76

Intelligence:  82

Wisdom: 85

Excited I run ,wake and tell my wife, "I got my power,It's Perfect Perdiction." She replied with happiness and concern, "Great honey though it 11:30 you should get some sleep" replieding with acceptance I say " You're probably right honey." Though I don't go to bed. I instantly use my power to make lots of money by using the stock market and other things to make 10k over 6.5 hours.

When my wife wakes, I say to herexhausted clear on my face "Honey I just made 10k I 6.5 hours with my power I will never have to work again" My wife eyes bulge "This is amazing I don't what to say"

replying tirdely "I do sleep".

She then say "What about your job" I say "I already told them I quit" "Oh honey what about 2 week notice" She says "Fuck 2 week notice I want to sleep" I reply.

"Oh honey, I love you," my wife says

But I was already asleep. It looked like my life was turning around....


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
Shaunw Shaunw

Ps This chapter took 2 hours. I am doing probably doing no more chapters this week. I am exhausted.

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