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The Weird Life Of Avery Bane is about a young woman who is 13 years old, in her Freshman year of high school. She is attending school at Princeton High in place of Adam Darkwaters (aka her doppelganger). Avery is to switch identities with Adam Darkwaters so she can attend Princeton High in place of Adam Darkwaters, while Adam attends her school, Evergreen High. Avery is to continue Adam's family tradition at Princeton High, where every male of the Darkwaters family, starting from Adam's great-great-grandfather, had to become The Captain of the Martial Arts Club.
PS: I didn't copy off of the author W1N5T0N because I am W1N5T0N, and the reason why I have a new account is I got locked out of my original account. I'm just saying this because I don't want people to think I was copying off of myself. Which doesn't really make much sense. I hope you will enjoy my novel :) or at least give it a chance.
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Hey, this book is great, got something to add on my library again! Haha, this **** fiction is really lit!❤ ADDED THIS ON MY RECOMMENDATIONS LIST💕
well, it'a good and easy going story. I'm love it so far. It's kinda sweet and not to hard to go story. Chapter are short but are finely written.
Though it gradually improved in later chapters, The writing style was oftentimes bland and repetitive, the sentence structure of dialogue is used consistently along with words like ‘said’, ‘asked’, ‘replied’, etc. The lack of emotion throughout the text causes the writing to appear devoid of life. For example, review the following text, Shocked, Avery asked," How do you know that about me? And what do you want? Are you a stalker? I've got pepper spray!" Though the reaction is correct, there is no strong description of her emotions and thoughts and this is something that the story struggles with, telling instead of showing. Telling the reader that she is shocked isn't the best idea since readers don’t have to infer that her reaction is the way it is. You want the reader to understand her reasons for her reaction besides the obvious reason. The whole idea of telling the reader her emotions, in my eyes, negatively affects the writing and causes a lack of interest since there are no descriptive texts to convey powerful emotions. Most likely the best part of this story is the creative plot. It was unique and interesting, something I’m sure most wouldn’t have thought of. However, there were some issues I had. I believe that Avery trusted Adam far too quickly and not only that makes it seem rushed, but it also causes the story to come off as unrealistic and unprofessional as Avery doesn’t seem to adapt regular human thoughts. What I am saying is that she doesn’t feel like a human being. She should’ve discussed with Adam after school while building trust, not only would that allow the readers to obtain a better understanding of their character, but it would also make the plot and story much more believable and realistic. I really enjoy just how deep the plot can go since Avery is gradually attracted to the I feel that characters could have a bit more depth and personality as most feel like copies of each other. I’d recommend some more interesting characters or give the current characters a set trait or emotion that they express often like being insanely competitive or aggressive. This ties with what I said about the lack of descriptions throughout the story. The character descriptions were nice but a tad too simple and bland. I think the story could use a handful of environmental descriptions to create an image for the audience. The story is very creative and unique in its own way though there are a few cliches that appear in broad daylight like how Avery and Adam met and her opinion on the boys at the school, appreciating their looks. All in all, this novel has the potential to become something successful granted the issues I stated are considered. All the book needs is a few touch-ups and re-writing and it’ll be good to go! I chose to give one star on world background since I didn't see any descriptions of the world in the 8 chapters I've read and also because I have to rate everything by at least one star. This review is based of the 8 chapters I read so I'm sure as I continue to read on, my views my change and I'll update my review as soon as that happens.
I love this story! The characters are adorable and so relatable sometimes too. The author doesn't spend much time on too many explanations and instead makes the story simple! It also has a very unique plot.
I really like this novel, so please continue writing this novel Mr/Ms author, can't wait for the next chapter, Adam and Avery are so cute, they are like real siblings.
This is a very good story, it has well thought out series of events, I like it, it is a really good novel to read if you want to pass the time if your bored, keep up the good work, author.
Excellent storytelling, unique plot line, and overall a great story. To the author I haven't seen people create these types much so kudos to you! Its a good story so keep up the good work!
I love books that depict a sweet platonic relationship. A lovely book that easily lightens your mood. Still in the initial chapters, but I'm already loving it. Great Job Author ❤❤❤