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Just a random idea I had and chose to make it a short story. Feel free to comment and I hope you enjoy it. Thank you.
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My thoughts on this novel are that the story was great. Pacing a bit too fast for my liking. You managed to go in depth with the characters very well. I feel like we could've had much more before she passed away from her disease. A glimpse of what happened during the four years. The tension was there and your way of executing the emotions of the two characters was great. I like the significance of the can but I feel like the money at the end could've been something not included maybe? The ending was solid. Rating:6.5/10