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Okay so I saw the link of the book shared on discord. I had nothing to do so I said why not try it. I did try it out out. Didn't it work it out absolutely ✅ Will I read it till the end✅ Do I love MC✅ Do I love Xin Zhenyi✅✅✅✅✅(hellllllaaaa yaaaaass she's maa fav. Now ) Theme of the Novel: black_circle Arranged Marriage with a reincarnation tadka. {Didn't reached reincarnation part yet. But the author mentioned it.} black_circle Mafia-Romance. (I love the steamy scenes😅) black_circle Family Bond ( Love how the family is one even though the relationships are not cordial) black_circleDark society (There is a society even beyond the moral and right world) Main characters: Five worlds to describe Xin Zhenyi: Ruthless, Merciless, Razerblade tongue, Broken by past yet strongest, Passionate about her loved ones. Five words to describe Long Jie: Discret, Manipulative, Calculative, Family Man, passionate about his cat eyes only(Xin Zhenyi) I read 40 chapters till now but I hate one thing about author ie: SHE IS NOT POSTING 20 CHAPTERS ADAY😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😅 I will give it a four stars because nobody is perfect. Please publish daily. Please 🙏 One warning: the Main characters are ruthless. There ain't anything right or wrong for them. Grey or white or even black areas dont matter to themmmm! And the author said the steamy scenes gonnaa be interstinglyyy steamy(you know what I'm saying).
I wonder how this great book escaped my eyes. I mean I literally had this book in my library for more than a month but was lazy to read. Now that I've started reading it, I can't stop reading. We have a powerful FL who has worked hard to dominate what others call a man's world.
I have to admit that the book is super nice but it need you to use extra brain in order to understand some of the scenes it's so hard to capture the imagination from the scenes in order to get a whole picture without getting a headache but keep it up 👍👍👍
the novel is intriguing and interesting so far and I'm so in love with it,but you need to improve the use of personal point of view to make it more understandable you tend to mix between he/she/I etc
I love both the FL and ML. The dry humor.LOL😁 Zhenyi is the new sexy...😍 Zini and Jie are both new darlings to me. God bless us all!!!☺️
One of the best novels I’v read. I couldn’t stop reading and each chapter was drawing me to not put it off. Amazing story and very thrilled to have read it.
This is a very mind blowing masterpiece, this story is truly amazing and the best past of it is the characters and how they play their part in the story...... Need more of stories like this 🤗🤗 And also keep up with the brilliant idea of writing more intriguing and fascinating stories like this 😍😍👍👍
loved it finished today reading this amazing novel with lot of mysteries love n too many twist and turns which get yr readers on tenterhooks n look forward to what coming next .should be converted to TV serial 👌. tanu thankyou so much 💓cheers
The story has a good storyline but most of the book is confusing and it jumps doesn’t stay on the topic that you were reading and the grammar or language is badly written which confuses you in my opinion lol with how much We pay to read these books I feel it could be put in a new light with it not being confusing
It’s been months I have read a story as eventful, romantic and wonderful as this one ❤️❤️💕😍😍😍 I would suggest everyone to read this and you will surely enjoy this as much as I dis 💞💞 I am soo happy with how the end of the story is turned to be.. thank you so much for this wonderful novel 💝💝
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Please tell us when will be the next update Nice plot. The update stability needs to be improved. Waiting for new chapters eagerly..... Please update
Fell in love with this novel after reading the synopsis. While reading through the whole story, I feel like every chapter is a climax! Aside from the rollercoaster ride that it gives off to its readers. It's hard not to fall in love with this story. Seriously, it's very much worth reading. The way that the characters were made is very interesting. They are perfect!!! The author is very creative, calculative, and impressive! Thank you for always updating.[img=recommend][img=recommend]🤩😍
The writing quality is good! The characters... I cannot like them. Perhaps they are too real, but they are far too inconsistent and conflicting for me. I can't understand a woman who can callously torture a man and count it as business and safety, while fretting emotionally over her relationships with her family. I'm sure there are actually people who live like this. I also don't understand the man who will go against his grandparent, to fulfill his father's demand of choosing a bride who seems to be his enemy. I didn't read far enough to discover the hidden reason this was actually a good idea, but I think a man who had grown up to be a top leader would just marry according to his own judgment. There is obviously a lot of story built up here to untangle...
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Nice story. the description of the characters is well written. Don't look at those harsh comments and write what is on your mind. All the best.
I really liked the storyline of the story and its a different kind of but an amazing story, I have ever read. Just amazing author, Just love it and support you.
the Characters are really well written and I am purely jealous of the author's ability to weave words so well! A fantastic job... surely adding it to my library (PS. The female lead is my favourite!)
The first few chapters didn’t hold my interest. Much has to do with the repetitive grammatical errors; the crazy capitalization and lack of punctuation made reading difficult.
Wonderful story and an actually strong woman? Is that possible or do my eyes deceive me? No, it's really there and I am here for it. Excellent job author.
This book is amazing! I can see how much the author has put her efforts for each characters and the world building. The first few chapters established the characteristics of each characters and boy each one is unique! FL - Love her! Rather than saying that she is a strong woman, the author showed us how she is strong and smart. Ml has his charms and both are mature and I mean the word mature. They act their age and the positions they hold. If you are someone who likes logically right story, this one is for you. And the author has a very unique descriptive way of writing that makes the story flow. Try this book! You will love it! Good luck, author. ❤️
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Truth be told, I didnt read the blurb cos it seemed too long. But with one mind I opened the book itself and I am surprised at what I saw. Such good written book with language so relatable. Not only that, the opening is so captivating that I hadn't bath an eye to rush down to review. I added book to my library and I recommend you do the same too cos I will sure follow this book until the end.
.................................................. Over whelming story. it is written so well. I really like how the author gives their best in writing the story. so far so good. and also I can't wait for more in the future . love the author very much.
The story can be enjoyable if the number of cursing words are lessen. I understand the point of cursing but it is used too exessive that made the experience in reading the novel slightly dimming. I understand the male lead is a weakling and has a trauma but again it is being made too much. I hope he changed and becomes a real man and husband.
The overall story is good. FL is savage and merciless, but loves her family. ML is 'Loyal' and had no previous flings which is quite rare. It's a story of forming a beautiful POWER COUPLE.
Nice discription and plotting of characters. Author is doing a good presentation of world background of the novel. I read initial chapters and really liked it. Thumps up. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is cute and interesting! I like the characters. It's a really unique arranged marriage story. It also made me laugh out loud! The author has a very fresh and unique style!
😍😍😍 I LOVE THESE SORT OF STORIES! And so happy to have come across this novel!! From chapter one I was hooked right from the start!! I love how the FL is strong and independent!! Can't wait to continue reading this. Thank you author for writing such a good novel and keep on writing!! 💪✍️ you got this!
This book is so good! The writing is great and flows smoothly. The characters are well-developed, and the pacing is just right. If you're a sucker for mafia romance stories, you'll love this!
Guys! First of all , I'm sorry if my story is not making any sense. The storyline was in my mind for a long time and not log ago I finally convinced my self to put it into words. To say it was easy, would be an understatement . Because I know how hard it is to write and wait to get recognition from you guys. If writing is hard then not getting recognition from readers is harder. I was never this self conscious but a confident and optimist thorough and thorough but now it's crumbling and I'm left with last bit of sanity. Just read first few chapters, tell me you like it and if not criticize me as much as you want and tell me to stop writing shity books and that I don't deserve to be a writer. I am pleading just read first few chapters and then decide if the novel deserve a small space in your library. thank you tanu
Okay so I saw the link of the book shared on discord. I had nothing to do so I said why not try it. I did try it out out. Didn't it work it out absolutely ✅ Will I read it till the end✅ Do I love MC✅ Do I love Xin Zhenyi✅✅✅✅✅(hellllllaaaa yaaaaass she's maa fav. Now ) Theme of the Novel: black_circle Arranged Marriage with a reincarnation tadka. {Didn't reached reincarnation part yet. But the author mentioned it.} black_circle Mafia-Romance. (I love the steamy scenes😅) black_circle Family Bond ( Love how the family is one even though the relationships are not cordial) black_circleDark society (There is a society even beyond the moral and right world) Main characters: Five worlds to describe Xin Zhenyi: Ruthless, Merciless, Razerblade tongue, Broken by past yet strongest, Passionate about her loved ones. Five words to describe Long Jie: Discret, Manipulative, Calculative, Family Man, passionate about his cat eyes only(Xin Zhenyi) I read 40 chapters till now but I hate one thing about author ie: SHE IS NOT POSTING 20 CHAPTERS ADAY😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😅 I will give it a four stars because nobody is perfect. Please publish daily. Please 🙏 One warning: the Main characters are ruthless. There ain't anything right or wrong for them. Grey or white or even black areas dont matter to themmmm! And the author said the steamy scenes gonnaa be interstinglyyy steamy(you know what I'm saying).
I wonder how this great book escaped my eyes. I mean I literally had this book in my library for more than a month but was lazy to read. Now that I've started reading it, I can't stop reading. We have a powerful FL who has worked hard to dominate what others call a man's world.
I have to admit that the book is super nice but it need you to use extra brain in order to understand some of the scenes it's so hard to capture the imagination from the scenes in order to get a whole picture without getting a headache but keep it up 👍👍👍
the novel is intriguing and interesting so far and I'm so in love with it,but you need to improve the use of personal point of view to make it more understandable you tend to mix between he/she/I etc
I love both the FL and ML. The dry humor.LOL😁 Zhenyi is the new sexy...😍 Zini and Jie are both new darlings to me. God bless us all!!!☺️
One of the best novels I’v read. I couldn’t stop reading and each chapter was drawing me to not put it off. Amazing story and very thrilled to have read it.
This is a very mind blowing masterpiece, this story is truly amazing and the best past of it is the characters and how they play their part in the story...... Need more of stories like this 🤗🤗 And also keep up with the brilliant idea of writing more intriguing and fascinating stories like this 😍😍👍👍
loved it finished today reading this amazing novel with lot of mysteries love n too many twist and turns which get yr readers on tenterhooks n look forward to what coming next .should be converted to TV serial 👌. tanu thankyou so much 💓cheers
The story has a good storyline but most of the book is confusing and it jumps doesn’t stay on the topic that you were reading and the grammar or language is badly written which confuses you in my opinion lol with how much We pay to read these books I feel it could be put in a new light with it not being confusing
It’s been months I have read a story as eventful, romantic and wonderful as this one ❤️❤️💕😍😍😍 I would suggest everyone to read this and you will surely enjoy this as much as I dis 💞💞 I am soo happy with how the end of the story is turned to be.. thank you so much for this wonderful novel 💝💝
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Please tell us when will be the next update Nice plot. The update stability needs to be improved. Waiting for new chapters eagerly..... Please update
Fell in love with this novel after reading the synopsis. While reading through the whole story, I feel like every chapter is a climax! Aside from the rollercoaster ride that it gives off to its readers. It's hard not to fall in love with this story. Seriously, it's very much worth reading. The way that the characters were made is very interesting. They are perfect!!! The author is very creative, calculative, and impressive! Thank you for always updating.[img=recommend][img=recommend]🤩😍
The writing quality is good! The characters... I cannot like them. Perhaps they are too real, but they are far too inconsistent and conflicting for me. I can't understand a woman who can callously torture a man and count it as business and safety, while fretting emotionally over her relationships with her family. I'm sure there are actually people who live like this. I also don't understand the man who will go against his grandparent, to fulfill his father's demand of choosing a bride who seems to be his enemy. I didn't read far enough to discover the hidden reason this was actually a good idea, but I think a man who had grown up to be a top leader would just marry according to his own judgment. There is obviously a lot of story built up here to untangle...
Reveal Spoiler Nice story. the description of the characters is well written. Don't look at those harsh comments and write what is on your mind. All the best.
I really liked the storyline of the story and its a different kind of but an amazing story, I have ever read. Just amazing author, Just love it and support you.
the Characters are really well written and I am purely jealous of the author's ability to weave words so well! A fantastic job... surely adding it to my library (PS. The female lead is my favourite!)
The first few chapters didn’t hold my interest. Much has to do with the repetitive grammatical errors; the crazy capitalization and lack of punctuation made reading difficult.
Wonderful story and an actually strong woman? Is that possible or do my eyes deceive me? No, it's really there and I am here for it. Excellent job author.
This book is amazing! I can see how much the author has put her efforts for each characters and the world building. The first few chapters established the characteristics of each characters and boy each one is unique! FL - Love her! Rather than saying that she is a strong woman, the author showed us how she is strong and smart. Ml has his charms and both are mature and I mean the word mature. They act their age and the positions they hold. If you are someone who likes logically right story, this one is for you. And the author has a very unique descriptive way of writing that makes the story flow. Try this book! You will love it! Good luck, author. ❤️
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Truth be told, I didnt read the blurb cos it seemed too long. But with one mind I opened the book itself and I am surprised at what I saw. Such good written book with language so relatable. Not only that, the opening is so captivating that I hadn't bath an eye to rush down to review. I added book to my library and I recommend you do the same too cos I will sure follow this book until the end.
.................................................. Over whelming story. it is written so well. I really like how the author gives their best in writing the story. so far so good. and also I can't wait for more in the future . love the author very much.
The story can be enjoyable if the number of cursing words are lessen. I understand the point of cursing but it is used too exessive that made the experience in reading the novel slightly dimming. I understand the male lead is a weakling and has a trauma but again it is being made too much. I hope he changed and becomes a real man and husband.
The overall story is good. FL is savage and merciless, but loves her family. ML is 'Loyal' and had no previous flings which is quite rare. It's a story of forming a beautiful POWER COUPLE.
Nice discription and plotting of characters. Author is doing a good presentation of world background of the novel. I read initial chapters and really liked it. Thumps up. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is cute and interesting! I like the characters. It's a really unique arranged marriage story. It also made me laugh out loud! The author has a very fresh and unique style!
😍😍😍 I LOVE THESE SORT OF STORIES! And so happy to have come across this novel!! From chapter one I was hooked right from the start!! I love how the FL is strong and independent!! Can't wait to continue reading this. Thank you author for writing such a good novel and keep on writing!! 💪✍️ you got this!
This book is so good! The writing is great and flows smoothly. The characters are well-developed, and the pacing is just right. If you're a sucker for mafia romance stories, you'll love this!
Guys! First of all , I'm sorry if my story is not making any sense. The storyline was in my mind for a long time and not log ago I finally convinced my self to put it into words. To say it was easy, would be an understatement . Because I know how hard it is to write and wait to get recognition from you guys. If writing is hard then not getting recognition from readers is harder. I was never this self conscious but a confident and optimist thorough and thorough but now it's crumbling and I'm left with last bit of sanity. Just read first few chapters, tell me you like it and if not criticize me as much as you want and tell me to stop writing shity books and that I don't deserve to be a writer. I am pleading just read first few chapters and then decide if the novel deserve a small space in your library. thank you tanu