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This is a hidden gem!!! I didn't expect much since it only has 200k reads but it's good
Frankly I love for once it's not a fanfic on tensura with the main mc who is not rimuru so just for his 5 stars (the comment is translated by automatic correction with French as a basis)
This is basicly tensura but the mc is a true dragon from the beginning. This fanfic is solid 7/10. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good start Keep going on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Cosmic Beings
The writing quality of my novel is okay at best. My vocabulary isn't large, so some sentences may seem weird. The story development is atrocious, but that was when I decided I actually wanted to write my own story and not rewrite the whole of Tensura. I don't really remember if I said any character designs, but if I did, they were bad. And don't even get me started on the updating stability! It may not be as bad as some people, but the chapters won't come any time soon, I bet you that. I don't think I did a good job on giving people correct information on the background of Tensura.
This is a hidden gem!!! I didn't expect much since it only has 200k reads but it's good
Frankly I love for once it's not a fanfic on tensura with the main mc who is not rimuru so just for his 5 stars (the comment is translated by automatic correction with French as a basis)
This is basicly tensura but the mc is a true dragon from the beginning. This fanfic is solid 7/10. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good start Keep going on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Cosmic Beings
The writing quality of my novel is okay at best. My vocabulary isn't large, so some sentences may seem weird. The story development is atrocious, but that was when I decided I actually wanted to write my own story and not rewrite the whole of Tensura. I don't really remember if I said any character designs, but if I did, they were bad. And don't even get me started on the updating stability! It may not be as bad as some people, but the chapters won't come any time soon, I bet you that. I don't think I did a good job on giving people correct information on the background of Tensura.