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The Talentless Inheritor

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Author: SeverTheHeavens

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A world where 『Inheritors』, special people born of lineages that trace back to a 『Primogenitor』 are favored above the rest, they hold abilities inherited from their predecessors that can change reality.

Creating fire out of nothing, summoning a dragon out of nowhere, destroying structures with only the mind, just a few of the outstanding abilities that 『Inheritors』 hold.

These 『Inheritors』 are gathered in special schools to hone their abilities before being sent to the outside world and in one of such schools is a boy, frail yet hardworking, despite having been born of a good lineage, had no potential to inherit and deemed incompetent.

This is the story of a boy beaten down by the very society he lives in rising to power.

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amaturewriter

First off this bk is interesting and I have no idea why it dosnt have a larger audience, author has made up his own world and whilst [so far] it isnt explained that much [C6] its interesting, The chps are decent and so is the content. BUT, the MC annoying and pathetic, and some things dont make sense. -MC is a cripple but is the son of a powerful family, and despite being looked down upon, his mother has high status and isnt treated badly and she loves him dearly. So it dosnt make sense why MC has a ***** personality, yes, I get being insecure, but this dude is a *****...I mean he has his mom to watch over him no?,,,if rape was overlooked by the house cause they fear families, surely despite being a cripple, MC too would be protected no?. I mean the teachers and students all walk over him. I get not fearing him but his family, his mom? -This MC isnt very smart, meaning, he gets ashamed of being protected by his teacher, cause teacher dosnt allow him to fight with the class genius. Idiotic cause how can u fight the class genius when u a cripple. -MC dosnt look for other means to get stronger, only does when he was told by the genius,, cause otherwise he might have to stay away from his friend. The MC has very submissive personality thats annoying will turn of most readers, he cant stand up for himself and he holds back his strength in fights..like love a MC that hides power, but here its retarded. Also MC hates hurting others and getting hurt himself, a retarded concept seeing as he himself knows how power is the law in his world, I mean he himself states how some girls were ' raped ' but were not helped,, etc cause the rapist was a powerful person. PLus MC has **** to lose, meaning he has his mom, his friend [ whom he cares], this is just stupid. Read C6 and I quit. MC is annoying, not smart and a plain *****, Author, I am not ordering just suggesting: Change ur MC and rewrite the story bru, Dont think I am saying ur current work is ****, its not. Its interesting, and u got something Dope here, but ur MC is such a turn off. He kinda follows the less common cliche MC route of a weak MC that dosnt do ****, and just more often than not wins, cause of plot and ****. [seems like that]....if u can rewrite. Eitherway GL **: I read what I wrote and despite how it sounds, it inst a bash, I am sorry if I hurt ya

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