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Sebastian, a village chief’s son, and the most hated person in his village. Born without magic and thought to be a bad omen. One day, his village was attacked and all the villagers were killed except their children. Revenge-stricken, Sebastian swore he would kill all of the attackers. Armed with a sword, Sebastian takes all of the children to a forest where his life will change forever. He meets a stranger, who takes them in and trains them. With his newfound strength, will Sebastian strive down the path of hero or a villain?
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Write a reviewI love this story, the main character & I love how some of the powers refer too JJK, I hope we go more in depth with other side characters, & but overall everything is perfect
Author OniBeast
(2+1+1+3+1)/5=1.6 I'm sorry as I agree. writing a story is hard. however this story seems sooo random! ________________&&&&&&_______________ we have a random vampire attack. ok ________________&&&&&&_______________ we have a panicking mc. OK ________________&&&&&&_______________ apparently the mc has been trained to fight. ok, the first real fight can be a shocker. ________________&&&&&&_______________ then we have werewolves. kind of makes sense but then again it does not.... are all the rescuers werewolves? it's not stated but implied. and it seemed like the rescuer used healing magic or nature based magic. ________________&&&&&&_______________ remember the vampires? some were killed by a knight who might've had an unactivated werewolf bloodline. or not and somehow no one's surprised when a human turns without anyone actively turning him. honestly deplorable awareness in a war based community. ________________&&&&&&_______________ oh the werewolves? the ones that haven't given us much information yet? they're suddenly primordial werewolves..... and the vamps are regular? their strengths are based on some criteria that hasn't been explained yet while the werewolves sound badasds without any feats yet..... ________________&&&&&&_______________ .... weird thing is I don't know if this qualifies as brain-dead and I'm losing braincells .... but i don't like the story either....