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I really like the creativity of this novel. I enjoy reading the different trails and the thought that went into every detail. But, I wish that the author would make a better effort to clean up and polish his work so that what they have imagined is clearly conveyed through the effective use of Grammer and vocabulary. This is my personal opinion, but maybe the author should focus on the advancement of the story, rather than spending 2 to 3 chapters explaining intimate nights. I just feel that the mature scenes don't need that much detail, and maybe you could shorten it down so that we can get back into the story and enjoy the book. There are more ways to show romance than in the bedroom. Other than that, great detail and good luck on the future chapters.
Sometimes I can't tell if this novel wants to be more adult oriented, dark or pure action. This isn't a bad thing per say. after going through 169 chapters I have to say it's quite an enjoyable novel. The title, did throw me off a bit but I enjoy what it tries to do.Our MC The Reaper is pretty much above average. Yeah he seems overpowered at first until he gets smacked with reality that he's just a small fish in a bigger pond. That realization was okay. At some point I was even looking forward more to the adult scenes than the trials. Why? Besides it felt like the MC was actually becoming more human. As weird as it sounds the MC is basically more brawn than brain in his skill area. He isn't exactly smart at social situations which is quite infuriating in the beginning. Heck I'm here still hoping he gets with Emma (the main heroine I'm guessing and his future babe) and stops acting like a emo child. But I get it he's stressed. Funny enough even without the adult scenes this novel would be pretty well even if it wasn't Included. Gotta admit it's a 8/10 for Enjoyment. Would recommend it to people who like those small adult scenes, talented MCs but aren't overpowered and assassins.
i enjoyed the story, but I'm confused as to why it's listed as complete but the last handful of chapters is still locked behind privilege.
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Really good story. Felt like it was sped up towards the end and could have ended a little better, but overall great characters and good storytelling.
other than silent step , he has no other skills of assassin. Information is key to survival, and he has none. instead of gathering common knowledge, he is showing others that he has no knowledge. If you are killed by ur mentor, u develop trust issues, but here he is acting as if every 3rd girl is her wife . I feel u should have mentioned he is just a killer . it is really irritating
My friend, the author, your novel is beautiful and good[img=recommend][img=recommend], but I heard that you will add a harem to the story, and this really disappointed me, because I hate harems. I hope it does not spoil the story. 😔🙂
The story is interesting and if it weren’t for the simplistic female characters I’d keep reading. Why are they behaving more like a litter of jealous puppies than individual humans? It’s pretty common in this platform, but is it necessary? I do really like the story - very interesting considering the genre!
great book you should make it into paper back book you will have a bigger following
it's a good novel so far . I have read it till 40 chapters and i like the story characters . also spell names are also cool. the story also has a sense of mystery that the reader will definitely want to explore on his own while reading. that's it from me . thanks for this webnovel.
I'm looking for a recommendation for an action-adventure novel without drama and romance, with a smart, selfish protagonist who just wants adventure and fighting without complicated things like betrayal or revenge.
Hello author! I'm interested in starting to read the novel, but first I would like you to ask me a few questions, please, my questions are as follows: who are the members of the MC's harem (if you can please say their names) and if there will be ntr (I hope not)... please answer me
Everything else is quite good, but I just hate Aiden's attitude, I understand why he's like that, but it's a bit much a bit unbearable to read
book seems good from what I have read, locks at chapter 29 and to catch up would cost about $55 and if you want privilege that's another $70.... no thanks that's just crazy.
E legal a história que vc criou porem o mc e muito burro pra alguém que era uma assasino muito famoso, ele é muito burro e outra um assasino não depende apenas de passos silenciosos e habilidades de adaga um assasino tem muitas habilidades por exemplo armas frias e de fogo conhecimento de venenos artes marciais entre outras pra uma história chamada assasino mais forte ele bem fraco sem os poderes do sistema
So far I have reached chapter 150 and this far my only complaint - which still is annoying is for the worlds strongest assassin - he is very indecisive … surely that should spell death as an assassin especially when it comes to romance - I hope this gets sorted as it’s only part of the story that is really lacking … why can’t we have an mc that is a boss
this is one the most amazing books I have read in here,i love the MC he isn't brain dead and actually acts like a normal human being if he had the same skills and the characters don't feel obnoxious at all( i have read the first 30 chapters so far), will update yall with how i think about this as time goes.
So from what I have read. The story is pretty decent. Characters are fleshed out and there is a world that I am eager to explore. But I believe that there are quite a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes. The mistakes really take the immersion out of the reading. I hope the author improves on his mistakes. But other than that, I am enjoying this story.
It’s interesting and thr plot is intriguing... I wish I can get more chapters asap... Please keep updating, author [img=update][img=update][img=update]
it's amazing really. This is like a totally new type of reincarnation novel, not the ones that are common and so on. Grammer is spot on, I could almost enjoy those words. it was very well written and looking forward for more! good luck and keep writing 😊
The novel is very good, what I liked most was the writer's ingenuity in the description, so that you find yourself immersed in reading without realizing it،
Hello all, author here. Here are some things you need to know about me and this novel! 1)To start, this is my first time writing a novel which means that I might make some mistakes here and there, which is normal because I am a human. 2)This novel will be at least 1000 chapters long I have some plans for it which I will not reveal as of right now. I hope you will at least try to read the first few chapters of this novel to decide whether it is for you or not. 3)I am still thinking about whether or not there will be a harem in my story, but if there is one. I assure you that it will not be forced and will not ruin the story. 4)As I am a new author, my writing skills and my writing experience will grow as I write this book and I am excited about this journey, 5)If you find errors in this book, please point them out so that I can modify them as soon as possible. 6)Lastly, I hope you will enjoy reading this novel since I am writing to share this story with every one of y'all and put a smile on your faces!
I really like the creativity of this novel. I enjoy reading the different trails and the thought that went into every detail. But, I wish that the author would make a better effort to clean up and polish his work so that what they have imagined is clearly conveyed through the effective use of Grammer and vocabulary. This is my personal opinion, but maybe the author should focus on the advancement of the story, rather than spending 2 to 3 chapters explaining intimate nights. I just feel that the mature scenes don't need that much detail, and maybe you could shorten it down so that we can get back into the story and enjoy the book. There are more ways to show romance than in the bedroom. Other than that, great detail and good luck on the future chapters.
Sometimes I can't tell if this novel wants to be more adult oriented, dark or pure action. This isn't a bad thing per say. after going through 169 chapters I have to say it's quite an enjoyable novel. The title, did throw me off a bit but I enjoy what it tries to do.Our MC The Reaper is pretty much above average. Yeah he seems overpowered at first until he gets smacked with reality that he's just a small fish in a bigger pond. That realization was okay. At some point I was even looking forward more to the adult scenes than the trials. Why? Besides it felt like the MC was actually becoming more human. As weird as it sounds the MC is basically more brawn than brain in his skill area. He isn't exactly smart at social situations which is quite infuriating in the beginning. Heck I'm here still hoping he gets with Emma (the main heroine I'm guessing and his future babe) and stops acting like a emo child. But I get it he's stressed. Funny enough even without the adult scenes this novel would be pretty well even if it wasn't Included. Gotta admit it's a 8/10 for Enjoyment. Would recommend it to people who like those small adult scenes, talented MCs but aren't overpowered and assassins.
i enjoyed the story, but I'm confused as to why it's listed as complete but the last handful of chapters is still locked behind privilege.
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Really good story. Felt like it was sped up towards the end and could have ended a little better, but overall great characters and good storytelling.
other than silent step , he has no other skills of assassin. Information is key to survival, and he has none. instead of gathering common knowledge, he is showing others that he has no knowledge. If you are killed by ur mentor, u develop trust issues, but here he is acting as if every 3rd girl is her wife . I feel u should have mentioned he is just a killer . it is really irritating
My friend, the author, your novel is beautiful and good[img=recommend][img=recommend], but I heard that you will add a harem to the story, and this really disappointed me, because I hate harems. I hope it does not spoil the story. 😔🙂
The story is interesting and if it weren’t for the simplistic female characters I’d keep reading. Why are they behaving more like a litter of jealous puppies than individual humans? It’s pretty common in this platform, but is it necessary? I do really like the story - very interesting considering the genre!
great book you should make it into paper back book you will have a bigger following
it's a good novel so far . I have read it till 40 chapters and i like the story characters . also spell names are also cool. the story also has a sense of mystery that the reader will definitely want to explore on his own while reading. that's it from me . thanks for this webnovel.
I'm looking for a recommendation for an action-adventure novel without drama and romance, with a smart, selfish protagonist who just wants adventure and fighting without complicated things like betrayal or revenge.
Hello author! I'm interested in starting to read the novel, but first I would like you to ask me a few questions, please, my questions are as follows: who are the members of the MC's harem (if you can please say their names) and if there will be ntr (I hope not)... please answer me
Everything else is quite good, but I just hate Aiden's attitude, I understand why he's like that, but it's a bit much a bit unbearable to read
book seems good from what I have read, locks at chapter 29 and to catch up would cost about $55 and if you want privilege that's another $70.... no thanks that's just crazy.
E legal a história que vc criou porem o mc e muito burro pra alguém que era uma assasino muito famoso, ele é muito burro e outra um assasino não depende apenas de passos silenciosos e habilidades de adaga um assasino tem muitas habilidades por exemplo armas frias e de fogo conhecimento de venenos artes marciais entre outras pra uma história chamada assasino mais forte ele bem fraco sem os poderes do sistema
So far I have reached chapter 150 and this far my only complaint - which still is annoying is for the worlds strongest assassin - he is very indecisive … surely that should spell death as an assassin especially when it comes to romance - I hope this gets sorted as it’s only part of the story that is really lacking … why can’t we have an mc that is a boss
this is one the most amazing books I have read in here,i love the MC he isn't brain dead and actually acts like a normal human being if he had the same skills and the characters don't feel obnoxious at all( i have read the first 30 chapters so far), will update yall with how i think about this as time goes.
So from what I have read. The story is pretty decent. Characters are fleshed out and there is a world that I am eager to explore. But I believe that there are quite a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes. The mistakes really take the immersion out of the reading. I hope the author improves on his mistakes. But other than that, I am enjoying this story.
It’s interesting and thr plot is intriguing... I wish I can get more chapters asap... Please keep updating, author [img=update][img=update][img=update]
it's amazing really. This is like a totally new type of reincarnation novel, not the ones that are common and so on. Grammer is spot on, I could almost enjoy those words. it was very well written and looking forward for more! good luck and keep writing 😊
The novel is very good, what I liked most was the writer's ingenuity in the description, so that you find yourself immersed in reading without realizing it،
Hello all, author here. Here are some things you need to know about me and this novel! 1)To start, this is my first time writing a novel which means that I might make some mistakes here and there, which is normal because I am a human. 2)This novel will be at least 1000 chapters long I have some plans for it which I will not reveal as of right now. I hope you will at least try to read the first few chapters of this novel to decide whether it is for you or not. 3)I am still thinking about whether or not there will be a harem in my story, but if there is one. I assure you that it will not be forced and will not ruin the story. 4)As I am a new author, my writing skills and my writing experience will grow as I write this book and I am excited about this journey, 5)If you find errors in this book, please point them out so that I can modify them as soon as possible. 6)Lastly, I hope you will enjoy reading this novel since I am writing to share this story with every one of y'all and put a smile on your faces!