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the writing is good but the mc all way make The same mistakes never learn her lesson like she know she not strong enough and how did she not died one she always face super strong opoonent and she always got captured and the story it keep putting more information down that im so confused. P.s i like the writing style maybe make the mc smarter Because she always weak and still went in and fight just to be Captured also dont Threw the information left and right. And thank you
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Lets just pretend that I did this while I was drunk, okay. Person 1: This story's pretty great right, I mean the author is sort of shameless and weird, but it ends up being a pretty decent story. Person 2: Couldn't agree with you more, I bet the author has a fantastic and flowing head of hair. Person 1: You mean the author does have fantastic hair, with that beautiful hairline complimenting it. Person 2: You saw the author, but the author's a recluse, you couldn't of. Person 1: Well I didn't see the author, but I could tell by the author's great use of descriptive words. If you have any questions or HELPFUL criticism, don't be afraid to comment. Because I appreciate any comment that's not overly mean.
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the writing is good but the mc all way make The same mistakes never learn her lesson like she know she not strong enough and how did she not died one she always face super strong opoonent and she always got captured and the story it keep putting more information down that im so confused. P.s i like the writing style maybe make the mc smarter Because she always weak and still went in and fight just to be Captured also dont Threw the information left and right. And thank you
Very good book :) diamond hidden in the rough fbiddbbdjsndjxjdndjdkdbxjdkdbdjsisnxbxjdbdndjdnndjdjdbdjsisndhdusjbsjsjdhdjdbdbdjdb
Lets just pretend that I did this while I was drunk, okay. Person 1: This story's pretty great right, I mean the author is sort of shameless and weird, but it ends up being a pretty decent story. Person 2: Couldn't agree with you more, I bet the author has a fantastic and flowing head of hair. Person 1: You mean the author does have fantastic hair, with that beautiful hairline complimenting it. Person 2: You saw the author, but the author's a recluse, you couldn't of. Person 1: Well I didn't see the author, but I could tell by the author's great use of descriptive words. If you have any questions or HELPFUL criticism, don't be afraid to comment. Because I appreciate any comment that's not overly mean.
Hope there is more! this is a great story in my book 📖 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎