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Mukesh mysteriously transmigrated into the world of supernatural where Ancient Gods ruled the land. He possessed the body of Eric Lancaster who had died by drinking poison when he failed to graduate.
Being complete unknown to this, let's see how Eric will gain supernatural powers. How will he solve the puzzle of his reincarnation? Can he return to his home?
{The God Of Empty Throne}
{The God Of Giant}
[As this is my first time writing a novel, I hope you guys will like it.]
Disclaimer - The cover photo isn't mine. I gave credit to the real owner, I am not the owner of the cover photo. If the owner wants me to remove it, just let me know.
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I have been reading your novel, and I quite like it. The story building is beautifully written, and how you describe areas around your characters very good. And I actually quite enjoy the conversations between Linda and Caroline with Eric. It’s quite entertaining to read. I would advise you though to write more dialogue, then description to make the book more alive just like someone once told me. One thing you should be more concerned about, is the pacing in your story. I understand you were trying to build it up by chapter 13, which I noticed. But I felt that it could have already picked up when you mentioned about the skull on the door. I can’t remember which chapter it was I believe it was five. But that alone sparked, some interest. There could’ve been more done with that, by building it up from chapter 5, then hammering down with more action between chapters 13 to 18 if you wanted.
Excellent Story with Good Long term Prospects. What else can one ask for ? Good Material, Mysterious Worldbuilding, Amazing Story tapestry.
Nice start, Author! Your work is a diamond in the rough and holds a lot of possibilities... i suggest adding more descriptive words and your on your way, Keep up the good work![img=recommend]
its kind of gives western magic world vibes its slow growing but it takes moment to explain charactersits overall a good thing to kill time
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