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Valentine Xuelan Townsend is one of many girls adopted from China by American parents. What makes her different is that she is the daughter of Xueshan, the god of snow and the human girl he fell deeply in love with.
Now that Val Xuelan's twenty-one, her nascent powers are emerging, unknown forces are trying to kill her, various suitors from the Heavens, Earth, and Hell are trying to woo her, and a genetic database says that her birth mother's parents have been found, and they want to make contact with her.
Add in a few prophecies, an insane goddess, really disgusting monsters, a stuffed toy rabbit that comes to life, some gorgeous clothes, a meteorology internship in Shanghai, and some really nasty weather--.
Plus the occasional good faceslap, because who doesn't love a good faceslap?
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Even though the story is just starting it really feels so real! The actions and the circumstances that's happening around the protagonist's is connected to the experiences that most of people around the world are experiencing. But please update 😃 will be looking forward to it 😉
The plot is good, one can see it will fan out in the future chapters. The character development and writing proficiency is amazing although there are some grammatical errors, but the story makes up for it. If someone is looking for anything new, then this is your cup of tea. Good work👍
This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter six. I won't write anything about what the story is about, because at chapter six we're still at the prologue. It looks like the real story will begin somewhere around chapter ten, but I just don't know. What we have looks like it'll develop into a Cinderella type of story, with gods in the background rather than a fairy godmother. I'll head directly for the stars. Writing: Five stars. Basically perfect. Updates: With just six chapters I'll just hand out the five stars. There really aren't enough chapters for an opinion. Story: Five stars. Superb progression this far. Note that we're still at the prologue. I have absolutely no idea how this will pan out later on. Character: Five stars. There are surprisingly many of them. Of course most sidecharacters are stereotypes or archetype, but we're just six chapters in. The main character as well as the main character for the pre-story are wonderfully developed. World: Five stars. Once again it's really too early to form a solid opinion, but what's there now looks very good. Lastly, while I have no regrets about this all five star review, this is really much too early for reviewing. The story has yet to settle into its internal rythm where a more educated opinion about pacing and world can be voiced.
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This novel has a very interesting premise to it. I've always been interested in those who can use Ice. I think you can do lots of cool things with it. The story is lovely as well. And well like you said who doesn't like faceslap. That's so satisfying to read
I loved the story. It grasped me from the very beginning. I've always been a very big fan of ice users. But that wasn't the only thing that drew me. From the character development to the plot, everything is so exquisite. Though I don't understand how the girl so readily agreed to marry that God. XD Keep up the good work. Looking forward to read more chapters.
The story seems good so far. I enjoy how descriptive it is and the writing is quite good. I implore you to space out your paragraphs more to make it less compact, Other than that I like it keep it up!
Whoah. This book is incredibly awesome. The storyline is beyond words. I just couldn't bring myself to drop the book. I practically read all through the night. Nice work dear author
This is a review for chapters 1-18 Writing Quality ✩✩✩ You have basic grammar errors, but not too many. Your errors mostly fall under punctuations, preposition usage, wrong plural and compound form, and other word choices. Sometimes you tend to cluster your paragraphs, which can make readers want to skim over it and miss important details of the story. You have strong skills in writing details, that gives readers clear visual images of the setting and actions of the characters. Stability of Updates ★★★★★ I always give five stars for the stability of updates. I believe that the pace of updates should not affect a novel's rating. Authors also have lives and should not be pressured into faster updates. The fact that you shared your story with readers deserves praise and encouragement. Story Development ✩✩✩✩ The pace of the story is fast at the beginning, but I find that this is common in webnovels. The pace is steady later and moves at a good tempo. Although there was some repetition, there is no inconsistency or contradictions in the story. The story is developing in a nice way, but make sure you don't lose sight of where you want your story to go. If the pace is too fast, you can easily lose grasp of the development of the plot and your characters. Character Design ★★ When Fenlan agreed to leave with Xueshan, I think her reasons for leaving behind her life and family is too weak. It didn't make me sympathize with her, which left me a little confused on what to think about here. Although 'love at first sight' is common in most novels, especially when it comes to gods or immortals, it isn't something I wanted to see here. It would have been great if there was a deeper reason for him choosing Fenlan. I found Shaonu to be another cliché character. Basically, a jealous love rival who will try to sabotage the relationship between the two leads. The other characters I found to be enjoyable. Although some are predictable, they each have a purpose in the story, which is good. World Background ✩✩✩✩ Your descriptive details bring your world background life. It appeals to readers and makes them want to know more. I am especially interested in the world in Heaven and the characters that come from there. But since the story is just starting, the world background has room to grow. Conclusion ★★★ / ✩✩✩✩✩ In conclusion, your novel has potential. As a reader, it can be a novel that I enjoy reader depending on its future development. I'd have to wait and see where the story goes. ……...……...……...…... Thank you for sharing! If you have a question about your review, feel free to contact me. - Bai Qiuyue (白秋月) Contact Information E-mail: riverautumnmoon98@gmail.com Discord: https://discord.gg/vaP2R8D Discord Tag: #9061
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I don't often give out 5-star reviews, and while we are only 10 chapters in - it might be a bit early, but what the heck. The writing is perfect, the character design is great, and so far the story is progressing really well. I am dying to see where you go with this.
Since so many other people have done it, I am going to review my own work! I think it's great, of course, and that you should read it. At present, I am trying to update at least five times a week, but I also work, so it may be challenging to keep up. I hope to get a good stockpile of chapters built up over this weekend. Thank you and enjoy!
This is very well written. In fact, it's pretty amazing how you manage to make me hate Brandi yet feel sympathy for her at the same time, and that's just one example. I'm not sure it belongs in Romance, but I trust that you will get there eventually.
Wow. This is probably the best written original novel I've read on this site so far. I usually associate Webnovels with simply written stories and rather superficial plots, But damn this was very well written and fleshed out, I thought I was reading something more traditional. Props to the author for writing such great quality chapters and managing to upload regularly! I look forward to seeing how the story develops more.
Hello, your novel has been assessed and reviewed by Virtual Bookshelf. A review excerpt is as follows: Technical & Writing Style: No real criticisms here. Your punctuation and grammar is correct throughout, and you use a variation of sentence structures to make it interesting. Your paragraphing is also well done. The dialogue too doesn’t dominate the character’s interactions and is interspersed with their thoughts, feelings, and gestures. You have good descriptions where necessary. The only part that interrupted your consistency is the word “crèches” in chapter 4. While it means nursery, it is British and originally french, so it doesn’t fit in a Chinese novel. It’s ok to use the word nursery instead. Characters: Xueshan, Ren – Although the snow god’s proposal seems rather sudden, this isn’t uncommon for gods of all cultural myths to “love at first sight.” The differentiation of the “her own country’s gods were perfect gentlemen in comparison,” was nice. He has a good sense of humor, and she is likable and relatable in her struggles and concerns. Shaonu – In chapter three, her declaration to ruin the couple is somewhat laughable for her as the antagonist; it’s typical of a jealous woman, but the way she speaks is rather fresh; although, it seems in general, that is how the gods speak here. “should demons in hell crack my bones to suck out the marrow, I will see them suffer first.” Even though she plays an integral part in spurring the initial predicaments, she’s somewhat of a forgettable character. Chang-o, Pi-hsia-yuan-chun, the rest at the wedding – These names are rather unique btw, even for a Chinese name. The first two’s characters aren’t covered completed, but it is enough for the events at hand. .........(cont.) The full review: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/02/02/review-the-snow-gods-lost-daughter-charlotte8/ After three chapters, you may request to be assessed again. Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)