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On the colonised world of Cymhurron, a deranged, self-absorbed artist makes his wayward journey to a foregone city to make a blood-sacrifice to a long-dead god.
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Just finished reading. I found your piece to be different and not derivative of other weird fiction I’ve read. I really liked the effort you put into naming your characters, and you’ve really put heart and soul into the building of Cymhurron. Keep it up.
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This is a genuinely interesting story from the setting, to the main character and the writing style. It's very, very melodramatic with interesting writing and language choices. It might also be a parody. I mean, I'm pretty sure that its not meant to be one, but it kind of reads like one in some places when the melodrama just tops itself with all the dramatic monologuing and almost makes fun of the pretentious style of the writing. It's very well constructed with great use of parallels between setting and characters with awesome action pieces broken up by suspense. Author clearly has a mastery over pacing here, but in some places, it's almost like the main character and setting are being made fun of by the language. There's obvious great use of symbolism and references, but in some places, I can't help but stop to laugh. I'm sorry if this isn't supposed to be a parody and is supposed to be deadly serious through and through, and I know for a fact now that subtlety is a lost cause on this site, but there's some really good potential here to a classic so don't waste too much time on this review... so yeah.
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The story is suspenseful and keeps you reading for more. Author is creative and this work has a mystery to it. Also the english is good. Sometimes the paragraphs are long but surprising it flows well. It will be good if there is a faster update.
The story takes the reader along for a ride, with it's atmospheric writing, on a journey inside the world of a man who has become disillusioned with the people around him and has acquired enlightenment. The reality is quite different from what this deranged man perceives. And to determine the truth the reader can only see things from his perspective and make their conclusions about what is truly happening. For a sci-fi horror-esque short story this is an interesting read. I'd recommend people to give it a try as it would definitely be worth their time.
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The wording of the novel reminds me of older literature that I’ve read. The language isn’t what contemporary books would normally use, but that doesn’t stop me from being intrigued by it. The plot is brand new from my perspective; the horror mixed in with the specific words makes you imagine creepy scenarios. And the main character isn’t some nice person, which is different from what a lot of books go for. All in all, it was a pleasant read, and I hope that the author keeps up the good work ! ( ´ ▽ ` )