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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Soooooo many pov's.it is easy to forget about what novel it is about. Stupid author. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmjmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
please update author san it has been a year since you last updated. i really love your novel T.T ...........................................
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Its very good, its so very good, its so very very good, mooooooooore, moooooooooore, moooooooooooooore, I hope you dont drop it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
since its still on Haitus 2 stars for updating stability otherwise very good story and mostly here for the story. XD but hope you come back soon to this book granted might just reread it anyways thats how good it is.
Author was very creative in his work. The first chapters are great and didn't have much faults. But later on, the content goes downhill. There are a lot of ways that the content can be improved. Still, despite the cons of the novel, I didn't drop and read till the latest chapter. A bit cringy but not very triggering.
i just hope author continues this story. It was so good when it started and when it lasted
El Mc es un tonto en toda regla, en un mundo donde el sistema es el que te da poder, porque no usar el sistema para ser mas fuerte, y muchas veces piensa que solo el entrenamiento el cual no tiene nada que ver con su sistema lo hará mas fuerte, si no sube de nivel no se volverá mas fuerte, mas por la exp si no haces ejercicios/actividad relacionado con su sistema es solo perder el tiempo. un mundo con guerreros que no pudieron matar a los enemigos, y solo con un sistema y gran nivel pudieron matarlos, y este Mc parece que no cree que el sistema lo hará mas fuerte.
[ Google Translate ] I'm pretty sick of seeing mc idiots, be it in manga, anime, and novels. To all of you who love character development, I read novels to cheer up the exhaustion in my heart rather than make me feel even more annoyed.
I like it. Now to fill up the rest of the characters ppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
started looking ok until goes off say how she had her first time with someone else blah blah annoying would give 0 starts if I could. Hope he makes a better one as has potential, but it not for me at all.
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I understand the author's desire to improve their writing so that they can do the story, characters, and world justice, but the current quality is more than enough for me. I would happily read more now rather than waiting to maybe read something a bit technically better later on.
This novel is an absolute gem in the rough, I really hope this person gets back into the writing mood and churns out some more chapters. Please write more!!!
One of very few harem novels I actually kept coming back for. Even with some rushed chapters it's still a good read. Thank you for the interesting system.
I hope this work will come back soon, don't drop it, I want to see the teacher at his mercy, and his sister too, as the tag has ****** but there was nothing with the sister, meaningless, and I would also like him to cuck everyone who appeared throughout history, those two whores mostly
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I do not know where you get that it is very complicated but hey everyone. Hoping that you produce more chapters soon and enjoy writing them at the end of the day is what matters Peludin is goddess
This MC Is simping for his best friend who already has a boyfriend... she only leaves her boyfriend after finding out that he cheated on her and mc accept to become her rebound and plot armor make her fall in love such bs main girl Was loving someone else All this time, her bf also always bully mc Yet she didnt do anything about it **** this shit
great novel. great characters, great plot and great development. This novel has great potential. Keep up the good work!!!!
tbh I have to go to the store and get it coz I don't know if I can help in any way I can get a ride to the airport on u am so sorry I didn't get back
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Google translate. If I was asked to rate this web novel, I would give it 1 star. Not every person can write the way the author writes. Scripts of this level are usually rated at 4 and 5, even there are worst works that are given 5 stars because the people on such sites are omnivorous - that's why it is. I am also omnivorous. I'm looking forward to new chapters, because this novel is cool, but I still rate it at 1 point. Everything is fine except Lexy. I understand this - the author wanted to stand out from the others and came up with her - a female character with such a temperament. A temperament that does not fit into the hentai novel. This girl can only fit into this story as a kidnapped girl locked in a basement. When a person expects to see one thing in a novel of a certain genre, but sees another ... But imagine you came to a PC repair shop, and there your PC is thrown into the trash bin and offered to wash your clothes? Complete bewilderment - surprise is good when it is in moderation, but when it is already too much, the score of such a PC repair shop drops sharply, right to negative, which becomes disgusting. This is how I feel right now - like an interesting book, like you want to see there, as the main character of XXX everyone, but here it is ... You don't know how it relates to this. Therefore, I will read on, but I will always put an estimate of 1 out of 5 possible.
This is fire 🔥, it's an awesome book, and I loved what happened to that fool(Tony), that's what you get for being a dickhead!!! And Lexis' behavior is a vibe 😂😂😂😂
This a good read. The only few problems I have are with the switching between the first POV to the third person point of view. Aside from that, I think this a great novel. I cannot wait for more!!!!!
vintage and I will not be able to make it sound like you are having a good day and I will be there at least I can do that for you and your family a
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It's surprisingly good. But Jesus's christ this author is infuriating. Manages to slam dunk every cliche and, the pace of writing makes me want to pull my hair out. Not to mention the paragraphs of explaining usless information. it's worth the read, but jesus..
You know I always wonder if this will ever return and it’s been 3 years and I still be waiting lol
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Soooooo many pov's.it is easy to forget about what novel it is about. Stupid author. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmjmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
please update author san it has been a year since you last updated. i really love your novel T.T ...........................................
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Its very good, its so very good, its so very very good, mooooooooore, moooooooooore, moooooooooooooore, I hope you dont drop it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
since its still on Haitus 2 stars for updating stability otherwise very good story and mostly here for the story. XD but hope you come back soon to this book granted might just reread it anyways thats how good it is.
Author was very creative in his work. The first chapters are great and didn't have much faults. But later on, the content goes downhill. There are a lot of ways that the content can be improved. Still, despite the cons of the novel, I didn't drop and read till the latest chapter. A bit cringy but not very triggering.
i just hope author continues this story. It was so good when it started and when it lasted
El Mc es un tonto en toda regla, en un mundo donde el sistema es el que te da poder, porque no usar el sistema para ser mas fuerte, y muchas veces piensa que solo el entrenamiento el cual no tiene nada que ver con su sistema lo hará mas fuerte, si no sube de nivel no se volverá mas fuerte, mas por la exp si no haces ejercicios/actividad relacionado con su sistema es solo perder el tiempo. un mundo con guerreros que no pudieron matar a los enemigos, y solo con un sistema y gran nivel pudieron matarlos, y este Mc parece que no cree que el sistema lo hará mas fuerte.
[ Google Translate ] I'm pretty sick of seeing mc idiots, be it in manga, anime, and novels. To all of you who love character development, I read novels to cheer up the exhaustion in my heart rather than make me feel even more annoyed.
I like it. Now to fill up the rest of the characters ppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
started looking ok until goes off say how she had her first time with someone else blah blah annoying would give 0 starts if I could. Hope he makes a better one as has potential, but it not for me at all.
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I understand the author's desire to improve their writing so that they can do the story, characters, and world justice, but the current quality is more than enough for me. I would happily read more now rather than waiting to maybe read something a bit technically better later on.
This novel is an absolute gem in the rough, I really hope this person gets back into the writing mood and churns out some more chapters. Please write more!!!
One of very few harem novels I actually kept coming back for. Even with some rushed chapters it's still a good read. Thank you for the interesting system.
I hope this work will come back soon, don't drop it, I want to see the teacher at his mercy, and his sister too, as the tag has ****** but there was nothing with the sister, meaningless, and I would also like him to cuck everyone who appeared throughout history, those two whores mostly
Reveal Spoiler I do not know where you get that it is very complicated but hey everyone. Hoping that you produce more chapters soon and enjoy writing them at the end of the day is what matters Peludin is goddess
This MC Is simping for his best friend who already has a boyfriend... she only leaves her boyfriend after finding out that he cheated on her and mc accept to become her rebound and plot armor make her fall in love such bs main girl Was loving someone else All this time, her bf also always bully mc Yet she didnt do anything about it **** this shit
great novel. great characters, great plot and great development. This novel has great potential. Keep up the good work!!!!
tbh I have to go to the store and get it coz I don't know if I can help in any way I can get a ride to the airport on u am so sorry I didn't get back
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Google translate. If I was asked to rate this web novel, I would give it 1 star. Not every person can write the way the author writes. Scripts of this level are usually rated at 4 and 5, even there are worst works that are given 5 stars because the people on such sites are omnivorous - that's why it is. I am also omnivorous. I'm looking forward to new chapters, because this novel is cool, but I still rate it at 1 point. Everything is fine except Lexy. I understand this - the author wanted to stand out from the others and came up with her - a female character with such a temperament. A temperament that does not fit into the hentai novel. This girl can only fit into this story as a kidnapped girl locked in a basement. When a person expects to see one thing in a novel of a certain genre, but sees another ... But imagine you came to a PC repair shop, and there your PC is thrown into the trash bin and offered to wash your clothes? Complete bewilderment - surprise is good when it is in moderation, but when it is already too much, the score of such a PC repair shop drops sharply, right to negative, which becomes disgusting. This is how I feel right now - like an interesting book, like you want to see there, as the main character of XXX everyone, but here it is ... You don't know how it relates to this. Therefore, I will read on, but I will always put an estimate of 1 out of 5 possible.
This is fire 🔥, it's an awesome book, and I loved what happened to that fool(Tony), that's what you get for being a dickhead!!! And Lexis' behavior is a vibe 😂😂😂😂
This a good read. The only few problems I have are with the switching between the first POV to the third person point of view. Aside from that, I think this a great novel. I cannot wait for more!!!!!
vintage and I will not be able to make it sound like you are having a good day and I will be there at least I can do that for you and your family a
Reveal Spoiler It's surprisingly good. But Jesus's christ this author is infuriating. Manages to slam dunk every cliche and, the pace of writing makes me want to pull my hair out. Not to mention the paragraphs of explaining usless information. it's worth the read, but jesus..
You know I always wonder if this will ever return and it’s been 3 years and I still be waiting lol