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The Rise Of A Tribal Deadbeat

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Author: AkshatArpit

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Zok was the youngest son of the Chieftain of the Zukira tribe. But that was all he had going for him. To everyone else, he was known as the tribal deadbeat. Unlike his father and elder brother, he had no talents whatsoever and spent most of his days sleeping and eating.

In a tribe full of great warriors, his existence was frowned upon. No one wanted to associate themselves with him. Until one day a mysterious cave appeared in the Zukira territory.

The sudden appearance of such a cave wasn't a surprise as it was a common occurrence. These caves often had weird markings on them according to which the tribesmen classified them into different difficulties.

This particular cave, however, was peculiar because it didn't have any markings on it. Thus the tribesmen decided to send in Zok along with a couple of others to go and investigate the cave. Zok was reluctant to do so but was forced by his family and under their pressure, he had to go in.

The trio went inside the cave which turned out to be empty. There were no monsters inside, which was peculiar. The only thing inside was a pond filled with acid.

Zok went to check the pond out but a moment later, he was pushed inside it. No one knew that the ones accompanying Zok were the ones who would try to kill him.

However, instead of dying inside the pool of acid, Zok obtained a newfound power. A power that would forever change his destiny. Follow him on his journey for revenge, in the epic story: The Rise of a Tribal Deadbeat.
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    AkshatArpit

    Author here! Now that the contest is over and I didn't win (bummer) I wanted to make a few things clear. 1. I'm not dropping the story. So don't worry about it. 2. The story will be free to read till November so feel free to vote for it till then. 3. Now coming back to the story. The start of the story is slow-paced. Maybe too slow-paced for a few people. 4. Since I focused more on world-building more, the system only appears in chapter 18. If you have questions feel free to drop them as a reply to this review. And lastly, Thanks for reading!

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    I_am_fucked

    I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works

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    ShadowDragoon

    I love how its playing out so far as well as the development of the character and the people around them. Its alos extraordinary how it play out with how he is seen or treated by those around him and how the outside world and sub character background. ⊂_ヽ   \\    \( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)     > ⌒ヽ    /  へ\    /  / \\    レ ノ   ヽ_つ   / /   / /|  ( (ヽ  | |、\  | 丿 \ ⌒)  | |  ) / ノ )  Lノ (_/

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    lucifer117

    Another story from my brother (Not by blood haha). Either way, I have only read up to chap 45, and so far, it is one of the best pieces I have ever read from him (Apart from the rise of a porter). I hope he finds even more success than he has before. Al the best brother!

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    Skaar
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    This novel has a lot of potential. I hope you don't give it up.update it more often.[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

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    teenera

    really gooooooood, just that the problem lie with the author inability to finish this marvelous work,which was a bad ideas since it got me drooling over for more chapters for a very longggggggggggggg time🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐

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    Darky09

    I remember the Rise of the porter, during that time Author was still new, but after reading this, author level has gone from lvl 6 to lv10 (max). He has grown so much. This novel is a hidden gem

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    Daoist0HrvWK

    The novel started good. The beginning and the synopsis seemed like it would be a cliche but it turned out alright Last stopped at chapter 46 The novel went alright but what can a system novel be without females around the MC. The random cave female. She just happened to go to or be in the cave that just opened Less than an hour ago. And it opened in the same region the MC just happened to be the only one training in. Mind you, she is weak and is a burden In the cave that they were in, Thwy just so happened to meet a strong female spirit that is much stronger than the MC but has no evil motives. At the same time, She happens to know the Mc system. Sure it can be explained with prophecy. But then that would mean that the priestess of his own tribe would know about it as well. And as he was walking deeper into the cave. He already mentioned that monsters don’t usually go in. And the monsters deeper inside won’t go out of the cave. So it stands to reason that the first cave should be quite safe. But shocker that isn’t a shocker, He brings the deadweight with him and lo & behold, she gets blessed by the super strong female so she isn’t a total deadweight only a simple deadweight. I just stopped around there. Feels like

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    m2goeas
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    Need more. Enjoying the character and story development. Please and thank you! Great story thus far. As someone of indigenous descent. Overly happy to see a story that is more ''native'' based.

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