Need more work but not bad l guess i liked it a little as a advice you should get more on details to make the reader more into it but overall not bad you should update it too if you have time
Very good story, I love the plot but maybe go more into depth about what is happening. The character herself seems a bit off but otherwise a great story.
Need more work but not bad l guess i liked it a little as a advice you should get more on details to make the reader more into it but overall not bad you should update it too if you have time