The Power of Espada in MHA

LV 4

TheOnlyKing

It's a nice idea but unfortunately the author completely ruins it with the awful grammar. I can't understand what is going on half the time. There is no story development at all but that's to be expected since you can't develop anything without being able to understand what you're reading. I will give the author props on the update rate though (but again, updating every day means nothing if the quality is sub-par). Overall I will say that this fic is a total failure and I urge the author to just repost it in his native language rather than try to appeal to a larger audience by posting it in sub-par English.

LV 5

aSleepyPenguin

(1 Star) Writing Quality: It's machine-translated quality, not even using . ! ? or anything, and the worse part in my opinion is the way he does character speech. An Example: Ken: Hi Random1: Hi (4 Star) Stability of Updates: Meh, I'll see if it continues. (2 Star) Story Development: It's just cannon, hasn't done a thing yet. (Only gave 2 stars because of 1 scene that wasn't cannon) (3 Star) Character Design: Just your average character design. (1 Star) World Background: Little to no info, smaller than cannon. --- Overall, I'll keep reading because I have nothing to do and maybe update this if it improves or gets worse. Hopefully gets better. Good Luck!

LV 4

RaulXD

los poderes de bleach son lo suficientemente geniales para darle una oportunidad. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 13

Dao_of_Melancholy

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LV 12

LeyMerSen

The story is good, though the grammar is horrible. It can't be understood. Hsbsuehebbrjdnrbrbrdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbddbbdbddbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbddbd