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What would happen if Dio had a desired son, to whom he passed on his plan and desires for the way to heaven? What would happen if this son was not an ordinary newborn child?
Disclaimer: I own nothing except my Mc. The picture doesn't belong to me either.
English is not my first language so my writing might seem dry и будет делаться с помощью переводчика.
Constructive criticism appreciated and thanks for reading.
I'm still a beginner here so I will make mistakes. I will ask for a little more patience.
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I don't know how to make reviews, I just liked it 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130
I'm gonna say that I like this novel and enjoy the story. I advise you to continue without caring too much of bad reviews, listening to advices on how to write better can also help. I must say there aren't many JoJo fan fiction with good quality, if you improve the writing speed you may even have more success. Continue like this author, you are doing great 👍, I'm waiting to see this fan fiction become even better.
it's 1 chapter a week but it's okay since the chapter is always long. the story is good i like it. ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
Absolutely amazin...........................................................................................................................
Amazing so far! The way you wrote those first 2 chapters reminds me of a professional writter. Hope you continue writing for a long time because I'm not leaving anytime soon.
it's sad to know that the creator gave up, it was one of the few fics that I liked jojo,I hope the creator changes his mind and brings this story, because I got a bitter taste in my mouth, because it ended up like this suddenly.
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Everything seems to be good. Well, of course, not counting the speed of the release of chapters. I can't really assess the quality of the letter due to the fact that English is not my native language, so this does not greatly affect me. And so everything is fine, I'm waiting for the sequel.
this is some good novel got it their author, a good job you doing well in it, I'm waiting for the new chapters..............................
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Good so far (only first chapter) but olease don’t drop this. There are maybe 2 good jjba fanfics on here and I hope that this book makes it 3.