/ General / The Outrageous General and her black bellied Husband
The Outrageous General and her black bellied Husband
4.47 (26 ratings)
Synopsis
Mu Xiaoyu, a 23 st century military assistant general was betrayed by her little brother, her boyfriend, best friend and left to die. She found herself transmigrated to the body of a 18 year old cripple....her father is dead and the Generals Manor an empty shell of it's former self...
But she went against fate and create a bright future for her mother and grandfather while picking up a stray wolf in sheep clothing name Chang Caoyue.
Muxiaoyu : husband if you marry me no one will dare call you a waste.
Changcaoyue: general who are you calling a waste!
Muxiaoyu: I promise you, Instead people calling you a waste. They will all come begging at your feet filled with regret
Changcaoyue: We will just have to see....
______________________________________________
In a certain someone's bedroom
Caoyue: How did you get in?!
Xiaoyu: I jumped through the window.
Caoyue: .......
Xiaoyu: Husband, let's consummate our wedding night now and get married tomorrow. I will treat you well.
-- Power
Ranking 
-- Power
stone You May Also Like
26Reviews
4.47
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
Its a shame that this story is on hiatus because from what I've read so far its not bad and has a lot of possibilities. I like what I'm reading so far, the challenge is waiting for updates due to author encountering writer's block. My other issue is the fact that the chapters feel too short, two could combine into one but it could be a word restriction thing. Anyway, I hope this story comes back. Take care and good luck
Thanks for the best of my reading time. The story is getting better and better. I really appreciate your good work and the plots are interesting. My best wishes to you. Fighting ๐
I'm not sure if the author is doing this on purpose, but the chapters jump around and there seems to be a disconnection... there isn't enough detail in the characters' story... so you understand events but not personality... why they react to certain attitudes or people's reaction... i feel that the author is just rushing through the chapters because they feel that they have to. But not much thought is going into them. The author seems to have an idea on the plot and who the characters will be. But for me, as a reader, i'm not feeling that connection. The world isn't developed enough and the feelings of the characters feel superficial .. i think this story has potential though.
When will you UPDATE? When you update please make your chapters longer. Well, regardless, I liked the plot though and please continue to update without stopping. I am telling you these cause there are many cases that the story is good but many tend to keep quitting to update and the readers will not be able to read the story they particularly liked. And I like the plot cause it makes people wonder about whats going to happen next ...........and we keep looking forward to it. So, please continue to update. GOOD LUCK!!!
Reveal Spoiler
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฃ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โคโคโคโคโค๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐I love this novel so far......๐๐
Hahaha so far so good this book is getting better and I hope we can get more updates to come, and also thank you author for the amazing work.๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ keep up the good work and update more please
Like Mikey I Like it! Story has good premise. The writer is slowly building a world which has hooked me into wanting more! I will wait patiently to see how the story continues...
Man oh man where do I start!! This novel is really amazing !!!! I really want for this novel to continue but itโs been a while since itโs been last updated, Idk what going on but this novel is worth the read.
Reveal Spoiler
Just reading the first chapter I can tell it will be a wonderful novel. I usually donโt like to do reviews from the chapter 1, letโs face it how would you know if u will like a story by reading the first chapter only. However, I made me interesting on this beginning is the person who betrayed her which I think is going to be an emotional battle to over come in my opinion. I can not wait until I am caught up so I can give a soiled review. However for now, I am excited ๐ to read this novel. Thank you author for sharing your story with us readers.
More chapters pleaseeeee ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Please update more chapters soon, we beg you OK Author? I love your story โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค
I'm already started it hehe by the way I think it has kinda similarity to the other novel that I read yeah??? Although not the same names but the story maybe???? Haha anyways forget about it important is ilove your story author .. keep it going love yah๐๐๐๐
๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐโค๏ธ๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐโค๏ธ๐๐๐ฅฐโค๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฆท๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฆท๐๐๐๐๐
Interesting story I love it! I hope you update regularly author โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค
interesting story, just need to wait for several hundred more chapters before starting to read again..............................................
I m truly impressed by this novel. I seriously can't wait to see more so please make more. Its not enough!!! Its too less. I can see that the path this novel is taking is very interesting, i can't wait till the female mc recovers and also can't wait to know who the ML is. ๐And when will our mc get her sweet revenge. Curiosity is killing me.
Very interesting story. Short chapters that are easier to read and understand, even if the writing is not really right there. On the story, the same plot of almost all novels out there, but this on here seems to be special. Keep on. I'm sure that this will become something amazing.
The stories about girl... .... .... My english is bad so.. I will say that i like this novel... Like it More chapter please And fighting author... ๐
Reveal Spoiler
sorry if i sound repetitive but every new chapter until today chapter 23 make me think that we reader we wish to be criple like the female protagonist and directily became her cant wait to read her future
it's kind of a slow paced story so far, but it's a good story. Written well enough it could be better, but then there's always room for improvement isn't there.