The outcast

Wow.i must say I'm impressed.The plot and character are interesting.The first chapter got me in and I am so addicted.i always come back here hoping to see chapter 6.please post soon.i highly recommend this book.kudos author Tobi. Big fan here.i love you 😍

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PrugnaKerai

This is a great start; I see lots of potential here. I like how you make use of dialogue, I myself find it difficult so I always avoid adopting them in my work. I look forward to reading many more chapters. Keep it up!

This is the best. Love the fact that the main character is a Nigerian.Your writing skills is so unique and perfect.Good work author.keep it up

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TanY

Interesting story so far. Its just the start n the novel is gonna go really good. I want to know more about Michelle. Wish u luck.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Bethel_Gold

Okay, I will say this is a great story, not because it's one of my Nigerian people that wrote it, but because it is a great story. i don't really see many Nigerian stories here but this got me impressed. Alex was mean to Michelle but I hope he gets better. Keep it up Author, looking forward to more chapters

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steph_pesi

An okay read. Enjoyable and really imaginative. The author did a good job with the synopsis and plot development. He brought the book to life.

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Sashly_Levis

This novel has an engaging plot and the execution has fluidity that propels to the next scene quite easily. In other words, it's easy to get hooked and go on reading. Keep on writing, author. All the best.

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Megana4

"The Outcast" started off with a nice, & unique story. I liked all five chapters. Looking forward to reading more chapters. The writing style is well written. I'm in love with Michelle and Alex. I hope they become a power couple and have a happily ever after. I'm connected with Michelle from the starting of the chapter. I and she have a lot in common. I am proud to say that I survived as a bully victim. Highly recommended for reading. Keep it up, author!

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_Jaeee

it is a very interesting story. I can't wait to read more and see what will Michelle's life be in America. The Author did a great job in thinking of a captivating storyline! Looking forward for more, Author!

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pinky_lovely

this is an interesting story, well formed and arranged😊😊 the plot is amazing the choice of of words is superb can't wait to for the next chapter to be uploaded

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tobeeeadewuyi

Author's note. This is my first book please support. This book is all about true friendship, betrayal, true love and a little bit of adventure. Thank you for reading.....

The story struck me.. This is close to reality. The choice of words are nicely written as well as the characters.. I'm sure that the author will justified both culture difference and the reality of the situation... Keep it up author...

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Akintayo_Victoria

The best... Supporting you all the way sis. Mitchelle is someone most Africans abroad can relate with.. And your story line is daebak.. Kudos.. Looking forward to reading this book to the end

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Ndidi_Otuya

i like it. it's so relatable and honest. the way it talks about things we don't otherwise talk about. Slso the main character is strong, i like that as well. great use of words, wonderful book, keep up the good work!

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Joondabest_

amazing work author! im in love with the characterization and work that you're doing great! the grammar and words described to write the novel were totally remarkable! absolutely good work! keep up the good work, author!

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WolfyHime_Writes

Great story... I really enjoyed reading it, I must say this is surprisingly good starting from the synopsis of this story until through the story itself... I am really pleased nicely done author

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Laetita_desi_30

I really enjoyed it. The flow of the story is amazing and the plot so far is really good. I love how it touches on serious issues yet still manages to come off as something enjoyable to read.

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Lancee

A good book. Has great potential. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is beautiful. Good use of words that complement the subject.

This is so good. I am so proud of you baby 😘. Your writing is the best and the plot is interesting which makes me want to read more. Keep going🤗

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Layefa_25

So far so good, I have been compelled by the beautiful mind of the writer. Words are very easy to relate with, a good addition to every Library. A round of applause 👏👏👏