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Synopsis
Shelly Bill, a governor's daughter hated her friend twin brother for something he did in the past. She couldn't let go, so they became rivals. They were never friends at school, always finding fault in each other.
John in the process liked Shelly, but couldn't see the possibility of anything happening between them because she hated him and he was nothing more than a rival to her, so she was never interested in him. The more she treated him badly, the more he liked her.
She was also focused in her future, she was not the best but was working toward that when this new girl came and everything went down. The new girl was in a competition with her, she needed to fight to become the best; was she going to survive it.
There was usually a night camp that holds every three years, it was usually held at south Africa. They were later forgotten at the night camp, they faced a lot of terrible situations, not knowing what to do, where to go and how to find help. They faced a lot of difficulties. what Will be their fate, read to know more.
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Write a reviewIt's an interesting book from the start, the way the author explains everything .. And the characters development is cool .much love other keep up the good work
You present your reader with a charming story, and a lovable protagonist. It’s very easy too feel sympathetic for her even from the start. The only constructive feedback I might give you is that you have some trouble with punctuation, but that’s something an editor or a beta can easily resolve. It’s the kind of story I love to read on a rainy day, bundled up in blankets, with a hot beverage. Well done!
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The book has a good start, well described and characters well outlined. The fact that the author introduced us to the characters in detail is good since it is easier to understand the characters involved that way. The story in itself is interesting. Good job Author and kep it up.
You provide your reader a delightful tale with a sympathetic lead character. Even at the beginning, it's simple to feel pity for her. The only helpful criticism I can provide is that you struggle with punctuation, but an editor reader can easily fix that. It's the kind of tale I enjoy curling up with a hot beverage and reading on a wet day. Good work!
Great premise, a beautifully woven world background and amazing character design. I am enjoying the book. Keep it up, author.
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The book is an interesting journey of a teenager...thought out her life. She discovers love, a friend, compassion and many more emotions within herself. A beautiful read for peace of mind. kudos author