Keira was walking beside Lilac in a slow and orderly pace, lightly holding her elbow, so the guardian angel wouldn't trip over her own long white gown. Slightly behind her, was Ayana, wearing a gray dress, the same color like what Keira and the other servant girls' wearing. It was just like a uniform for them.
Keira handed Lilac a beautiful white stick with a white ribbon around it, which was of only an arm's length and was slim enough for Lilac to carry it with one hand, while her other hand was holding a goblet of red liquid, which she thought was blood at first glance, but Keira calmed her down by saying it was just red wine.
All the guards along the hallway and all the guests behind them, were staring at Lilac intensely. Very intense, that it almost made her hard to breathe.
Please give me feedback about this chapter, as this chapter had been edited. I want to know whether it helps with my grammar mistake and wrong spelling or not.
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