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Lana
I never imagined that my life would change on one fateful night on my way back from work.
Knocked unconscious by an unknown entity. The next time I opened my eyes Boom!!! I was told I was in Ancient Egypt. Crazy right.
Follow the wild adventures of Lana Stone in Egypt as she tries to adjust to her new environment, know more about her true identity, find her true love and unravel a thick conspiracy among the Egyptian Gods.
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It's an action packed book filled with encounters with gods and goddesses, adventures in a different world and unveiling of deep secrets.
It has a nice a development and the thing that its really interesting here, is the usage of the Egypt culture — which is something I really like. To improve: Writing: It has some problems with punctuations and long paragraphs that break the readability. I detected as well some minor issues related to tensing and verbing mismatches. All in all, keep up the good work :)