/ Fantasy / The Last Angel System
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The Demons won the War against the Angels and settled down on Earth. The Demons now live together with Humans. But unknown to them after thousands of years, their greatest fear is about to return to this demonic world of sins.
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Thanks to everyone who reads this Story. This is the first time that I am writing a Story and I'm trying to Improve. English is not my first Language so pleace have mercy.
The updates will be slow because I still have an Apprenticeship to do :)
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Credit for Cover goes to the Artist (whom i sadly don't know) but when the Artist wants me to take it down just msg me.
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Feel Free to leave a Review if you have any ideas on what i could do better please leave a constructive critique. Thank you.
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Write a reviewCongrats on writing your first story, it seems to develop well ^^ hope you have fun writing so we have more to read. It's really well written and as I know you personally, I know you have a lot of knowledge about the scenery you want to write about.
Omg! The plot is good! Please upload more! Let the Crusade begin! Purge the sinners Deus Vult! Deus Vult!Deus Vult!Deus Vult! Deus Vult!Deus Vult!Deus Vult! Deus Vult!Deus Vult!Deus Vult! Deus Vult!Deus Vult!Deus Vult! Deus Vult!Deus Vult!
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Hey guys you know the rules and so do I A another schameless 5 Star Author self review nothing new. What do you wanna know? I am a complete knew Author and this Novel os the first thing I am writing no experience on my behalf. I am Dyslexic. And English is not my first language. But I try my best.