/ Fantasy / The Inklings
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Clair Elyids is a 16yr old girl who used to look forward to her family's Sunday night sunset gazings. until they were brutally murdered by goblins. her peoples mortal enemy. because you see Claire is Fae, three years later she tries to get into the queens personal kill squad so she can find the goblins who killed her family. but what happens when you are your enemy. after the great war, tensions are high,enemy's become friend's. lives are at stake. there;s more secrets and downplay that are left unchecked. someone has to pay for all the wrong in the world, but are the goblins really at fault.
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The story development is pretty interesting so far with the personality and character of Claire being sort of understandable. The writing isn’t bad, but some of the sentences that need punctuations, like commas and periods, in them but instead only have straight text. Also the text boxes are quite. This isn’t that bad, but it does make it hard to read some things, especially if you read off a phone. The worst part about long text boxes are that if you lose your spot, it takes quite a bit of work to find where you just were. Try spacing out the sentences a bit more and if need be, only have 2-4 short sentences within a paragraph and double space afterwords. There are not enough chapters for me to judge on stability, so I might comment on this at a later date. The world background was pretty decent but I can’t tell exactly what type of world it is. Is it modern, Medieval, Post-apocalyptic, Or something else? Also are there any other races than far and goblin? Or is this story based in a world with only these two races. There are only 5 chapters out right now, so I don’t know if these questions are answered in the future. But I do know that I look forward to what the this novel holds as it shows a lot of promise. An interesting plot with a non-human character is always my type of novel👍
Wow, I'm getting a lot vibes from this book! Would recommend. Not enough chapters though. So far everything is perfect. I have no complaints, this is my type of book.