The Hyuga Gamer

My dude I do believe you have something going for you. If you do really like this, I would keep it up. it could get you something good in the future. Who knows maybe you’ll be writing and directing your own anime, from your own manga, from a book

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Endless_Evolution

as far as i read , i like this novel but it's a bit weird when MC is male then become female but!! , that interesting when read MC became Hinata with shy complex , hah... 😏😐😑😶🙄😥

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Fallensnug

This novel has potential and I do not want to see it go to waste. Please continue if you can to the best of your ability. I really want to see how this story unfolds with this mc.

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The_Tower

I am giving his a 5 star rating because its writing quality is better than 95% of the storys on here, but be careful reading this because its a male soul choosing to become a female and the proptly continues crushing on Naruto. So, future reads be warned.

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Irie_Miyuki

So far this is an amazing story. I hope many more people read it because even with its short number of chapters it is quickly becoming my favorite Naruto fanfic.

I gotta say I really like you hinata story the way the mc was about to be reborn as hinata hyuga but instead his soul got absorb with hers which made hinata change a little with the game system. Also that she know the canon of what going to happen it's so good hope you'll keep updating it and stay safe.

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oab

I would like this story more if she/he overcome her crush on Naruto in the near future... yes, he is influenced by her character, but she is also influenced by his! as much as I like fanfics about Naruto world... I don’t like THE Naruto (character), he is basically useless. He mainly only uses two jutsu’s! TWO!!! Or rather two and a half... 2,5! (variants of the rasengan). And her/his presence on team 7 would and should make ripple/butterfly effect on the story! (If she really will be part of that team) I really like the OC-Hinata idea, but it really should bring major differences to the story... well not if the OC character is working in the background/shadows and only take an active role in the 4th war... Also the idea that an OC is close with Naruto isn’t very original anymore... it is really overused in fanfics... In the stories about an OC in naruto world it is the OC who should be the centre of the story, but for some reason many authors basically make the OC an sidekick of Naruto and it’s more about the OC helping in improving Naruto (character) than the OC! Obviously the OC are also super strong but it is still mostly about “helping naruto” thing in the end... I really hope this story won’t be like that... but I can already feel it will... 😕

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ShadowFlux1909

Author has given this book up from the start he only keeps updating it to promote his discord server. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Hardrada_

Honestly this is great. The start with him falling into Hinata's character is fantastic as it allows her not to be some super OP person from the get go but be upgrading along side the maincast, minus the pink trashcan, she always falls behind. Hinata's character change from being shy to the point of extreme to shy but focusing on becoming a great ninja is believable due to the transmigration setting. There's no cheat strength which is nice. Plus she's going to be the brickiest brick that ever bricked when dealing with Naruto. I would expect Naruto to swap his liking to Hinata from Sakura sooner as they are both in squad 7. He would start trying to impress her after Hinata and the transmigrator's personalities have merged which makes the new Hinata into the brickiest brick that ever bricked. This would lead to a bit of internal struggle within herself that would take her growing in the body of Hinata(which remember is growing throughout the story) to finally accept Naruto when they are adults. The one area where I feel this has so far been missing potential is the Hyuga clan. Due to the personality shift of Hinata she should start impressing her father more, especially after becoming the 2nd leader of squad 7 behind Kakashi which should be leading her to have some personality shifts. This should result in her staying the Heir of the Hyuga which can create some interesting story development later. I just really want to see more of the family dynamic. On an unrelated note to the story, if I had to make a Naruto transmigration character tier list, Hinata would be S-Tier. Her only negatives are perhaps high pressure to do well from her family and her shy personality. The family pressure can be circumvented and shyness can be conquered. Once you start listing her upside it becomes ludicrous extremely quickly. She is not a main character so she doesn't have to live up to being a savior of the world as much as say Naruto or Sasuke would She can scale with the byakugan alongside Naruto and Sasuke better than the alternative characters. She would always have her role on the team for scouting and eventually medical work unlike Sakura who we know as a joke. She has the backing of the Hyuga clan so more training and funds(she is seriously rich btw, especially if you can impress her father)

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LucyAlterEgo

because the gender bender of this page always has to be. yuri... Why!!! ................................................................................................................................................................................. out of that very good novel :D

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Graham_Rutz

Are you going to continue this story?

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NBitch

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ! Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ! Pleaseee, update this story soon! I can’t wait more ! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Roselian

En general me gusta la novela, el nuevo anfitrión no remplazó del todo a Hinata ni al contrario. Sinó que mejoró a la Hinata original al darle un objetivo y el material para llevarlo a cabo. Y la forma que trato los sentimientos originales de Hinata por Naruto me gustó mucho... Y algo personal, me gustaría que Karin sea la novia de la protagonista ;)

yummy goodness very good keep posting and keep the same quality or better and youve got a good story

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Graham_Rutz

Are you going to continue the fanfic if not you really should put that in the description.

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TheViciousVillain

It's really nice pls continue It's really nice pls continue It's really nice pls continue It's really nice pls continue It's really nice pls continue It's really nice pls continue It's really nice pls continue It's really nice pls continue It's really nice pls continue

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Daddy_yhwach

My man please don't drop it again it's really good............................................ .....pleaseeeeeeee....................please...............

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mkfiroz98

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Invinncible

Honestly, this story had so much potential. But I hate the part where MC isn't even in the story. Instead of MC reincarnating in Hinata, it is basically Hinata with future knowledge and gamer system. Even if their souls fused and created a new Hinata, MC's feelings should have some affect unlike when MC's personality is basically Hinata.

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Medalha

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