Synopsis
“Believe in something with all of your heart, even if it means losing everything in the process. “
“And I believe in running the world. I want everything in this world, I want to be admired, I want to loved and I want to desired. “
“Even if it means losing everything in the process! “
A boy called Tenshi Ayama’s life is gutted to shreds when the most important person to him – his mother – an influential government official - dies in a suspicious accident.
It didn’t help that, she was his entire life. After all, his motivation and determination to succeed in life was all for her, nothing else mattered to him more than her.
Tenshi’s entire ambition dies as he turns into a fat slob, a depressed fat slob which his former childhood persona would’ve hated.
Yet the thing was, that he believed in unconditional love, and he was utterly betrayed by the person he loved – his childhood friend Haruno Ichiho.
The same day, he found a watch dropped by a crow – a golden and fabulous watch that has an amazing feature of being able to bend people’s minds into submission.
Watch as he supports his waifus in fulfilling their dreams, perfecting their personalities and fixing their flaws. And sometimes ruling and killing over his political opponents with amazing *humor.
*Humor not guaranteed, but dark humor is and will be always present
Extra Tags - Insane Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Slow Pace.
[Caution - contains excessive sex in the later chapters.]
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I stake my god-like stellar reputation again to write a review. Do you want to see snu~snu on super beauties? Do you want hypnosis with different Sex scenes? Do you want mc to kill his enemies? Search no more. Constructive criticism: 1) naked thigh stockings in mature beauty with sexy thighs or in onee-chan characters😏. 2) diverse personalities other than yandere. 3) sexy foreign childhood female's cherry🙄😏 4) some ffm or fffm sandwich😏 5) Not abandoning or sharing his Sex slaves if they are super beautiful. But, girls like haruno and sakura's sister can die😈👿 6) no netorare/rase. Even with slaves....as long as they are not Bitches. 7) Onee-chan incessstttttt and her V-card😍 8) Not too dark/twisted personality. Atleast, he should not abandon his girls.
As far as I am in the novel, I can say that the mc is properly fleshed out and also has a great personality. Callous and calculative, and has no problems in manipulating someone else's emotions to his own use. Even though he has a powerful tool such as a watch that can hypnotize people, he is always cautious when using it. As fair as I have read, mc also has a couple of screws loose, just like a psychopath, he likes everyone that reminds him of his mother. (evidenced by Tenshi referring that he likes and will help Sakura just because she smells and also has a personality just like his mother.) Every single character has a backstory and adream, it's like they have a life outside of serving the Protagonist. Sakura? She wants to be an actress(might be somewhat connected to the fact that she was ignored and coldly treated by her mother since her childhood) Amano? He's a big mafia boss but he's reluctant to confess to his crush due to his confidence issues. Nero? I won't spoil you on that one 😉 Tenshi? Not much revealed, but it's stated that he used to be much happier back in his childhood and also wanted to be an actor due to a certain someone. The grammar's good.
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Tenshi has a mostly... Sour personality, like you bite into an expired lemon. But he is also so fleshed out, and you can see why and how he can act and plan as he does. And the girls he's hypnotized so far both have their scars and their own stories that make them feel alive, and it seems like through his interactions he will slowly start to be able to trust others again. I can't wait for more, to see if his personality will become more rotten with certain events happening, or if he will be able to grow out of the shadow his mother has in his heart and the scar left by Haruno. Maybe he'll eventually be able to truly feel love again. I check this daily for updates, sometimes even twice a day. I am seriously waiting on pins and needles for this story. You've got me hooked, man.
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The story is different than others, so if you are tired to read the 10th clone of whatever, this is really a new story. The writing is good, not without errors, but it feels fluent. The basic idea of this system seems good so far (somewhere before chapter 10). I think this is a good book, it is just so that I don't like the "speed" of the story. Everything takes forever. Someone having ***... pages. Imagining something... pages. Walking somewhere... pages. Just going from his room to the bath can take many pages. So, I think it is a book many will like because there are many good points about it, but I personally do not like it. I still give 2 stars to story development, because - even when I don't like the speed of the story's progression - I like the new ideas of the story and I totally like the way the protagonist/author sees sexual activity as a normal activity instead of using "pervert this" and "pervert that" because someone likes some and/or is having ***.
[I'm not one to shy away from criticizing someone] Oh wow, hmm, how can I explain this? Really liked the novel at the start, although he was betrayed thoroughly, he can still pull himself through. Then it gradually starts to go downhill, I personally project myself into the MC. So I try to justify their wrongdoings and stupid crap they do. But this one? Nope, he has an average backstory with his mom dying and all, then his family fell apart and then stuff happens. period. The start of the novel dwells on the fact that he got betrayed by his 'love', cmon man, it's just a girl *shrugs* But the MC just suddenly become this psychotic emotionless edge lord who kills just because. I would understand if he is in a warren period or even going through unimaginable tragedy, but he just becomes like that suddenly. No buildup or anything. There's nothing to define him. The point is, although I've read some darker **** and edgier things than this novel, their characters make sense, this one? Not really. I don't enjoy it, specifically from the latest chapter. I get it if it's adults who do that but...Nibba, it's kids? He even has his ****ty reason to go with it. Good writing, but too edgy for my taste, try too hard to be philosophical but some of the things said here does not cohere to real life. *phew* I like this novel as you can see, but it really has been hard for me to avoid the fact that this is terrible.
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I have read my fair share of novels and I can happily say that this series is a serious gem and deserves to be spread around. There are very interesting characters and the story development is great. I just hope the author will keep consistent updates and not drop there series and I can't wait to see how the story progresses!
Started off interesting, then author adds in lots of fillers to extend the length of story. The story becomes unfocused and just all over the place. Wouldn't recommend as it feels like the author doesn't know what kind of story he is trying to tell.
Hypocrite mc. Author just keeps on going from one situation to another which involves abuse and rape everytime. The MC is getting more and more hypocritical and does one scene ever get completed? You have one story in one chapter and it jumps to another in another chapter. If the main topic is not revenge, which I think it is not then finish the revenge thing so we can move on from all the rape and abuse **** so that we can see what the **** he is actually going to do after the revenge is done. Don't just jump from a story to another. You should read trassford's trading club.
This novel has different story from other hypnosis stories.Every character have their own personalities,and the victim off the hypnosis did not become mindless and still can think by their own.the system also is interesting,not just a machine that help the host.Also,when will Tenshi train martial arts ? Note:This is my first ever review,sorry if there anything wrong with it.English is not my native languange,sorry if there are some problems.
Constant updates 😚 Big juicy chapters 😚 No longer some cliched revenge fantasy (I hope) 😚 Interesting idea 😚 No locked chapters 😚 What are you waiting for?
A random review in the sea of words 😅 Ok let’s begin...😖 It’s ok, good and quite frankly a real vibe kind of tackling on the realistic sense of how the world works...😛 Though i think the author began mixing and matching many different disorders of mental/physical sicknesses into the blender, Adding a dab of philosophical words and a pinch of superpowered martial arts... and done... I give you the novel of the the day🤓 Story wise,,, I can’t say yet... 🤕 there’s too much back and forth going on that theres nothing really interesting that happens. Besides blackmail, planning for revenge and hypnotism it’s kinda moving slow. 🤔 But not to slow... It’s kinda moderate...😬 The plot is coming together slowly but surely...😪 Anyways...🤮 I had fun reading this novel,🙂 I had fun seeing manipulations,😇 I had fun getting revenge,😋 I had fun looking into their minds,🙃 I had fun almost every time I read this novel...🤗 Anyways warning to those easily triggered... If your triggered easily then I don’t recommend this novel.😚 This is not safe for kids 🤪 Even for young pubescent boys 🤩 Open your minds and just read😑 There’s not lessons here except to just read 🤥 I end here and hope this gets some likes 😈
The MC is actually not right in the head, psychopathic tendencies, oedipus complex, and severe obsessive disorder.. well it result in a flesh out character i guess. The girls are also felt real with their detailed backstory, not just another onahole. Though based on the story, i dislike what the MC are currently doing.. proscratinating.. instead of munchkining the hell out of the system to get stronger as fast as possible as there are threats out there that can be beaten easily as long as his stats are OP.
Sorry had to drop it. Was 2 dark for some reason (depression) just keep it out of your novels...i lost my straws when i found his sis wasnt a virgin. One of the things i was looking for and it turned out she was already taken...... Also its like chapter 50 and hes only lvl12 whiles others are in the hundreds......it was good while it lasted 😥😞😥😞
I tried...I tried very very hard...to dislike this series that is and I miserably failed to do so. Let me explain why I at first, wanted to dislike this series: I believed that hypnosis is a concept of pseudo-rape veiled to appear as consensual. Now don't get me wrong, my trust on Hypnosis didn't increase but my heart is now totally captured by this novel. Have you ever seen a hypnosis novel have character development? Even the main character isn't a bland and hateful character, I pity him and can justify the actions he does. I repeat, every single event where the mc seems heartless and hypocritical, he isn't, mainly because of his heart demons. Tenshi IS NOT AN HYPOCRITE! The story is good, very very good!
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This is one of those rare series where the main charecter is actually harder to get a read on. As he changes so much in the first two days of the story. I am considering re reading the initial chapters because I feel there are many contradictions in the charecters thoughts and his actions. Also we are told different things about certain stances depending on the situation. Now I can't tell if this is the author perposefully throwing us contradictions as to make indecisiveness and hypocrisy charecter traits. Or is its just poor exicution of the charecter by the author. This aside I am really enjoying this novel and the MC inconsistencies is my only issue so far. Stateing your view, only to change it hours later is not growth. I also feel like the time line for the story is too unrealistic.
Hehehe.........finally. A YANDERE NOVEL FINALLY APPEARED BEFORE ME. Please keep writing (or typing), there really aren’t enough of these kind of novels (well novels containing this aspect). And thank you!
Finally, other Art that I couldn't wait for Update... As Reader, I'm Pleased with more interesting PLOT with taged "Series" behind it. More Mature Stories in this series is indication for the Author progress in writing. G O O D J O B . . .
Dang good please keep up the good work. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Well theres nothing much to say in this novel. The story is great and im also looking forward to the future developments. And also please update more.. 😎😎😎 NO PRESSURE INTENDED!!! KEEP UP AUTHOR
Intentional 1-star and spoiler rating to attract attention. Sorry if you've been fooled. This is a rewrite of TGWH, and the reason I did so were due to the immense amount of mistakes I made and the redundant fillers I created—nothing to hide, and nothing to drastic. Now, I didn't intend to make this review at first. But I had to, because some readers just jump to conclusions and don't even bother to think before writing one-star reviews— and that's not even my main reason. The problem some people have is the fact that I made the protagonist evil this. True evil, like, really really, evil. And there are plausible justifications for his behavior, it's not like he just woke up one day and decided to **** on his father for fun and kill babies for giggles. Before you comment on the protagonist's behavior, at least wait before his backstory is revealed and fleshed out — that's the first message of this review. Things removed and redone in this version are stated below - #Revenge - the Haruno matter will be finished more faster in this version. I wanted to write more in this review, but I'm lazy and I don't want to, so go ahead and **** yourself.
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