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it is very repetitive and your mail mother f***** man character is an idiotic and arrogant b**** and he can't even think properly before taking an action any fee is his development phase even than he should be calm not doing some kind of idioting things that he has done in this chapter he does whatever comes to his mind he is an idiot not a logical and strategic thinker he is just a Brooke with the little bit of luck till now because I don't know what is going to happen is next chapters or upcoming chapters can become a good person or strategic thinker with some kind of fatal mistakes because of his f****** idiotic sheets that he is doing and if he does not change then the story is doomed to be stopped in the middle because I have seen many stories like that
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Hey there, author here, hope you like the novel. Don't know how to rate my own book so 5 stars. Leave a comment if you enjoyed or think anything should be changed. CURRENT UPDATE FREQ : 1 Chapter a day 18:30 central
it is very repetitive and your mail mother f***** man character is an idiotic and arrogant b**** and he can't even think properly before taking an action any fee is his development phase even than he should be calm not doing some kind of idioting things that he has done in this chapter he does whatever comes to his mind he is an idiot not a logical and strategic thinker he is just a Brooke with the little bit of luck till now because I don't know what is going to happen is next chapters or upcoming chapters can become a good person or strategic thinker with some kind of fatal mistakes because of his f****** idiotic sheets that he is doing and if he does not change then the story is doomed to be stopped in the middle because I have seen many stories like that
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Hey there, author here, hope you like the novel. Don't know how to rate my own book so 5 stars. Leave a comment if you enjoyed or think anything should be changed. CURRENT UPDATE FREQ : 1 Chapter a day 18:30 central