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Synopsis
In the glittering world of London's elite, the Whitmore family reigns supreme - until a mysterious stranger, Victor Mallory, arrives and upends everything.
The Whitmores become entangled in Victor's web of secrets and lies, With a gripping blend of high-stakes thrills, simmering romance, and suspenseful twists, Can the Whitmores survive Victor's machinations unscathed?
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“The ends justify the means when it comes to fulfilling my goals.”
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1. There will be no set word limit, according to need some chapters can be large and some small.
2. Read at least 12 to 15 chapters before giving a review.
3. Some scenes can be detailed so be prepared.
4. Be attached to any characters at your own risk.
5. There will be many businesses, which means deals, and long negotiations, so be prepared.
Disclaimer -All characters and settings are fictional, any similarity with reality is purely coincidence.
PS: It's my first work, I'm hoping it turns out well. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome. Grammar and English should be fine, but I'm not sure how good the dialogues and scenarios will be. Hopefully, I'll improve as this novel progresses forward.
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Only giving full reviews so that some public can come and chat with me so that we can together criticize this as i alone cant do it as it will me lonely and i dont want feel lonely, Beleive it
Heys been reading for a while , and really not expected to like it much due to realism , as i generally prefer more fiction with magic reincarnation system , you know what I am talking about , but yeah it got me hooked
The circle has expanded from just Whitmore playing house to their impact to others , the fear in Alistair as mentioned Whitmore power is great , I surely want to see one scene where they will get the chance of displaying their power.
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I don't know whether you listen to my suggestion or if was already there , but i wanted focus on james , and he came into focus but with it cam focus on whole shaw family, i feel going forward focus will be on it .
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The way whitmore family status and power is being shown , I am guessing that they have significant say in government status if shown any in the future in novel . Business aspect is already shown , a political will make it more fire .
Hello big brothers here I am again to point out some things , some past has been shown of mc but nothing concrete or related to other main characters but It is surely shown that victor Mallory is a persona of mc Andrew Sherman ,it can be the only one or one of the many
Reveal Spoiler Here one more 5 starts review to promote it more some brothers have increased since the lonely me but we have more to go .as such give 5 star so it starts showing the rating
It is well written for a beginner,beginning is good pace is slow but every 2-3 chapter some thing happens which keeps us hooked , first victor checking the mansion ,then his anger ,then his coming for meeting at exact time , then his business proposal , and then the tremors ,it build tension slowly
Some scenes feel like exactly copied and some feel like changed and some scenes original but i want some more focus on james shaw the scion of one of the elite family
To me this novel/author tries to hard to be "deep" like the writing style, this is supposed to be serious novel but when I'm reading it it comes of as comical. Atleast as far as I've r I've read, that all am gonna say as I did not get far in reading it.
It's my friend that is writing it ,he is in love with novel ,fiction and tries to live in them ,forgetting about real life and now he is trying to create his own world so others can live in it so support