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Quality of writing is okay, pero ang characterization and the highlighting of the events are lackadaisical. Nangangailangan ng intense improvement ang bawat paragraph. Use more descriptors, not all the time occurences lamang ang dapat i-underline, the setting is as vital as what is happening.
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Good job po, hindi po madali ang mag sulat lalo na kung kathang isip mo lamang.. tanging imahinasyon mo lamang ang nag papatakbo sa iyong istorya...