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Me gusta cuando el protagonista esta a favor del harem. Y no le molesta mancharse las manos con sangre. Empezó bien, toca seguir leyendo a ver qué pasa
Well it is not my first asoiaf fan fiction novel....and I have read quite a few of them before this novel. This novel while having an excellent idea failed to keep me interested due the over usage of expositions and mediocre conversations. It is quite fast paced and could have been a wonderful novel if it was allowed to develop slower.
love love love. I hope the author picks it up again It is one of the best novels I have read. The Author is a genius 10/10 would recommend reading.
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To be honest, the idea is interesting, but the presentation is not very good. Remove emoticons first, and never use them at all. And the story is very childish, if you remove all those 18+, etc. I wish you good luck, develop.
I don't want to say rude things but i can't. When i read some foundation or slow phase start will be there but in first chapter itself he became a god (6years old) from mortal (new born child). When i know Mc want to establish a religion i know he going to arrogant, selfish Mc. GOT got its own level phase but Mc will act like saint but he is already evil. Every world has it's own rules and limitation. When someone break it there is no essence for story only pure barbaric thinking. Then is a thin line between what is evil and good. But if i think i am doing good but remember for others it is may seem as evil. Sorry, i expected some improvement but her Mc mentioning the Barry's intelligence made me wonder why expected something. With great expectations, comes the great disappointment. I give low score because of damaging the essence of GOT. Overpowered people are unwanted in GOT. I want to hardworking not lazy MC who got everything easily and ruled the world. Can we respect, him. No, never. Only the person devoted weakness for the welfare are respected until now.
this is art!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................................................................
good, I like this AU GOT fanfic, some things make u laugh, other u read and think nani? what? O.O? dafak?, well I recommend to relax, smoke,drink something and read broder bcoz thats the way.
I don't even know what to say, it's not just a wish fulli thing, it's like the quintessence of that.....................................................
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Hello there,maturenovel. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
Yeah! no he became a goody two shoes and that is not my stile. So there's that but other than that it is relatively a good read. __________________________________________________________________
Calm before storm, young man reincarnated as Aegon Targaryen (Jon Snow) with powers over speed, sea and plants. Soo much to do with so little time, and meeting with Night King is established and can't be shifted.
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
personally the powers are kinda nice choices though I would have used the powers of swamp thing since he's connected to one force while aquaman is to another and the speed force as well all 3 forces are interesting and I would be interested in reading about them together but a got like world just doesn't seem like a good place for them
It's kind of wish fulfillment for me. I want to read fanfics or novels that brings different elements from another word like modern to ancient ; magical world to secular word or vice versa. Those things I find are enough to satisfy my thirst. So, I am planning to try myself.
In this fanfic, I introduce NEW WORLD i.e the unknown world at other side of the Sunset Sea, west of the Westeros. The Far North will be connected with the NEW WORLD like Iceland is connected with American Continent. NEW WORLD is a continent of MAGIC. So, you do not have to worry about MC having lots of superpowers.
Reveal Spoiler Me gusta cuando el protagonista esta a favor del harem. Y no le molesta mancharse las manos con sangre. Empezó bien, toca seguir leyendo a ver qué pasa
Well it is not my first asoiaf fan fiction novel....and I have read quite a few of them before this novel. This novel while having an excellent idea failed to keep me interested due the over usage of expositions and mediocre conversations. It is quite fast paced and could have been a wonderful novel if it was allowed to develop slower.
love love love. I hope the author picks it up again It is one of the best novels I have read. The Author is a genius 10/10 would recommend reading.
..................................................................................................................................................................
To be honest, the idea is interesting, but the presentation is not very good. Remove emoticons first, and never use them at all. And the story is very childish, if you remove all those 18+, etc. I wish you good luck, develop.
I don't want to say rude things but i can't. When i read some foundation or slow phase start will be there but in first chapter itself he became a god (6years old) from mortal (new born child). When i know Mc want to establish a religion i know he going to arrogant, selfish Mc. GOT got its own level phase but Mc will act like saint but he is already evil. Every world has it's own rules and limitation. When someone break it there is no essence for story only pure barbaric thinking. Then is a thin line between what is evil and good. But if i think i am doing good but remember for others it is may seem as evil. Sorry, i expected some improvement but her Mc mentioning the Barry's intelligence made me wonder why expected something. With great expectations, comes the great disappointment. I give low score because of damaging the essence of GOT. Overpowered people are unwanted in GOT. I want to hardworking not lazy MC who got everything easily and ruled the world. Can we respect, him. No, never. Only the person devoted weakness for the welfare are respected until now.
this is art!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................................................................
good, I like this AU GOT fanfic, some things make u laugh, other u read and think nani? what? O.O? dafak?, well I recommend to relax, smoke,drink something and read broder bcoz thats the way.
I don't even know what to say, it's not just a wish fulli thing, it's like the quintessence of that.....................................................
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Hello there,maturenovel. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
Yeah! no he became a goody two shoes and that is not my stile. So there's that but other than that it is relatively a good read. __________________________________________________________________
Calm before storm, young man reincarnated as Aegon Targaryen (Jon Snow) with powers over speed, sea and plants. Soo much to do with so little time, and meeting with Night King is established and can't be shifted.
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
personally the powers are kinda nice choices though I would have used the powers of swamp thing since he's connected to one force while aquaman is to another and the speed force as well all 3 forces are interesting and I would be interested in reading about them together but a got like world just doesn't seem like a good place for them
It's kind of wish fulfillment for me. I want to read fanfics or novels that brings different elements from another word like modern to ancient ; magical world to secular word or vice versa. Those things I find are enough to satisfy my thirst. So, I am planning to try myself.
In this fanfic, I introduce NEW WORLD i.e the unknown world at other side of the Sunset Sea, west of the Westeros. The Far North will be connected with the NEW WORLD like Iceland is connected with American Continent. NEW WORLD is a continent of MAGIC. So, you do not have to worry about MC having lots of superpowers.
Reveal Spoiler