Reviews of The Dungeon System by SirGlue - Webnovel

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Kenlinvert1

Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!

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AnthonyCerbic

I know 3.6 I gave the story looks like low score, but its only because of many novels on this site get unrealisticly skewed scores like, all 5 stars on some cheap Chinese cookie-cutter cultivation. Its 3.6 but its on a fair scale of 1-5, not the usual 4.5-5, OK? Anyway, a pretty decent start for the story. A bit weak on the "hook" - like, there's no world to save, there's no imminent peril to deal with - but fairly interesting still, kinda slice-of-life-ish. Writing style is unpolished and lacks flavor, but not horrid and hopefully will improve with time; MC is sympathetic and promising. Basically, I am looking forward for more chapters, so its already better than 95% of the usual crap.

4yr
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Kenlinvert1

Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!

4yr
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AnthonyCerbic

I know 3.6 I gave the story looks like low score, but its only because of many novels on this site get unrealisticly skewed scores like, all 5 stars on some cheap Chinese cookie-cutter cultivation. Its 3.6 but its on a fair scale of 1-5, not the usual 4.5-5, OK? Anyway, a pretty decent start for the story. A bit weak on the "hook" - like, there's no world to save, there's no imminent peril to deal with - but fairly interesting still, kinda slice-of-life-ish. Writing style is unpolished and lacks flavor, but not horrid and hopefully will improve with time; MC is sympathetic and promising. Basically, I am looking forward for more chapters, so its already better than 95% of the usual crap.

4yr
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