The Dungeon Horde

LV 15

Sancho

I've been reading and supporting this novel since its first chapter release and with no doubt in my mind can i say i wont be putting it down till the very end. This story's writing and editing are a little rough to read at times, but if you look past it, the world and characters they've created are what drives me personally to not want to wait for the next chapters release. The character goes from being nothing to extraordinary, but you actually see the develpment and hardship the MC goes through. It's not another novel were they jump 500 levels in one chapter, or you're rooting for the enemy to just kill him off because the MC is too strong. I would suggest everyone read this novel, or at the very least the first few chapters. By then, you will find that you've already read to the last chapter and want to find out what's to come next. Great work on what you've done so far and i can't wait for what's to come.

LV 4

Gerrit_Valkering

First off, I do enjoy the story and wish I could score it better, but if I'm honest this is as far as it gets. Second, a tip: I read this story on a mobile app. Due to that, the insurmountable text wall becomes much more readable. I don't know if the same would apply to tablets, but on laptops or desktops the lack of proper punctuation and paragraphs will hurt. The MC also seems to say everything he wants to say in one go, 'tell me about this, this and this, then list all the options for this'. This makes everything feel rushed and pushy. Updates seem to have stopped, with no comment from the author if it is on hiatus, if it will resume or if it has been dropped. The story is quite standard dungeon master type, but I do like dungeon masters who actually act like one and who use their brain more than the goodie goodie two-shoes beta dungeon masters. The MC is more ruthless than others would make him, but I don't find it disturbing. He grew up isolated, discarded and owes nothing to other people. When you're looking through a screen it's easier to watch someone get injured. Don't know if he'd wield the knife himself though. The MC is, however, the only actual character so far. There are a few potential candidates for more development, but at this point in the story he is the only 'person' and still underdeveloped. Some of the candidates are monsters. I kinda like the world. After apocalypse earth, with a mix of fantasy and technology. Extra credits for getting the army involved, it shows the author remembers that this is a world that knows to look after itself and doesn't take the appearance of any dungeon for granted. The monsters are also summoned from somewhere 'real' and not out of thin air, I look forward to the troubles and complications this can cause. My tips for the author is to first unravel the old chapters. Either do it yourself or ask help from someone you know, or ask help from someone online. Paragraphs and punctuation matter. A conversation has a tempo, the MC can ask for them in turn, ponder on the answer, consider his options for a second and ask his next question.

LV 10

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LV 12

Silently_Reading

Gotta work on the punctuation marks. But it is an interesting read, please update more. It really have a lot of potential, I finished reading this and I want more of it.