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The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
4.76 (19 ratings)
Synopsis
There are different types of forbidden love. For example, when a sister loves her brother in a romantic way or when two blood relatives have erotic thoughts towards each other. But there is no love as forbidden as the love between an angel and a demon. It's just like black and white; they have zero similarities.
What if this demon is the devil? The king of demons. After Lucifer's deception of mankind, the great and powerful wizards combined their magic and harnessed it to bind the devil in a coffin. But they knew of the devil's strength, so they sent a beautiful woman to his chambers. A woman whose beauty a man could never refuse. Through her, they were able to bind the devil in a coffin and left him inside a cage, magically locked by magical barriers to ensure he would never escape.
But what happens when an angel walks into this cave after breaking the barrier?
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I like that it's quite fast paced, and the character's interactions were entertaining. Great job!
Amazing, can't wait to see what happen more. But I think you can write more about the world, it will help the reader know more about what you are writing. (^_^)
Amazing, I like the fast paced development. It's a great read, i'm happy i added it to my library. Please when's the next chapter coming out?
When I read the first chapter I really liked it, it is very well written, you can imagine what happens at every moment of the novel, the characters are well done, the emotions are very good I will add it to my collection
Gosssshhhh . I so much love this book. Angel and a Devil! it's worth it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A beautifully crafted love story between a devil and an angel, blending themes of forbidden love. A must-read for fans of forbidden romance! ♡♡♡
This synopsis is intriguing and has a strong hook. You've successfully captured the forbidden romance aspect and the high-stakes conflict between angels and demons.
This is a review when the book is at its early days. Writing quality, 4 stars. I took away one star because in chapter two, I felt like the dialogues were very sharp, but not in overall. Story development, five stars because there wasn't deliberate words dragging over a single scene, events are well sequenced and related to one another. Honestly I feel this is where the author expertises, considering this is her first work. If she could emphasize on putting more effort towards story development, her talent would be pronounced. Character design, two stars. I couldn't understand the goals of the characters, their motivations and they lack distinctive mannerisms. Update stability, five stars because it can vary. World background, three stars. As said, story development is the author's main strength. The world background... Well places were mentioned. I hope this is helpful.
I love the story so far. The dynamic between the angel and Lucifer is also interesting, and I can’t wait to see what happens next!^^
Absolutely loved it! The forbidden love angle between an angel and the devil is so intense and unique. The story's twists kept me hooked throughout!
The story is interesting and the characters are well introduced. Though there still requires improvement on your sentence structures and transition, I wish you the best on your book author
The book is definitely well written being able to describe what the characters feel and their emotions at every since. The dialogue might be quite a lot it makes the interaction between characters more entertaining to read. Also, I saw another review saying the lack of description with the surrounding or world-building. It is indeed true so it's better to deal with this topic now at the early stage of the story. It's a good book so keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. I highly recommend it.
It's an amazing novel it has intriguing plot,the characters are nice and the story keeps me hooked so all together it's a wonderful novel though I do believe it can be better🙃 Still Good job author
I think my book is good and well written. Give it a try,you won't regret it . don't forget to add to collection read and review power stones and chapter comments are welcome happy reading ! 😊