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I've only read 13 chapters but it's very good and engaging. It's reads more of a novel than a webnovel. Great job from the author. .
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.
Writing quality is great and the plot is really great. I like the flow very great keep writing like you're doing. the characters are really great.
A very unique story to be honest...never come across such books but they say all hidden gems are not in top ranking! That's the case here too. A fantastic read and I'll recommend it always
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It's very well written. Personally I love the MC's witty humor and in many moments in the novel where I find myself Exhaling air from my nose and kind of chuckling to myself. Mr. Moon's way of talking is just the peak of depicting personality, and I'm just very sad that I don't get to see these kinds of things so often. The World concept is also very interesting, one that I've never really seen before so I'm really excited to see where this is going. There's really nothing to criticize. I'm just really sad to see how you so confidently shoot yourself in the foot by making the chapters past 10 paid. I read the chapters and I can see how you deserve it, but most people will just think you're some kind of snob with an over-inflated ego. Honestly, I felt the same when I first saw it as well. I found myself seeking excuses to hate ur story, because some part my head decided u were an asshole XD just because you made one small decision that made you look like one. pain
I'm amazed by the writing quality and it made me lured into the story more and more. I can't say much since the rest of the chapters are locked, but I read 10 chapters of the book, and it blows my mind. All I can say is, just read the book on your own and you won't regret it!
Your story have an interesting concept. I never see a story like this before in webnovel. Your writing is good! The words are not repetitive and you describes the scenes with exellence. I will only point out your synopsis. For me, it's quite long and wordy. Maybe you could shorten it or phrase some words better? Keep up the good work author!
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What I like the most about the story is the unique plot that it can offer, apart from all the fantasy transmigration/isekai genre I have been seeing these days. After reading the synopsis, I became enlightened about what to expect and what to know about the story. The book cover alone is enough to tell that to the readers. The prominent thing that I wanted to point out for the improvement of this novel is -Less usage of informal writing to describe the scene. This does not hinders the reader from understanding the book-and in fact, it might be engaing to some extent. But, when done regularly, it might pose a disturbance of thought process while reading the story. Overall, the story is good and the plot is there! Kudos for the author![img=recommend] -
I just read few chapters and what should I say, I am unable to keep your story down. The first thing I liked about this book are the descriptions, it was just spot on. And the second best thing, characters. These characters and their reaction felt so realistic. Keep up the good work, I would like to read more of it.
Good job Mr. Author! This is really well written, and you managed to keep me reading, even though I am not a big fan of this genre. Keep up the good work! Overall 5/5
This novel oozes experience from every side. This is honestly spectacular, a skill of writing that I myself would aspire too. Just wow author, this is awesome. I hope this can get more attention
Good job, author! I must say I don't usually read stories like this one, but it is just so hooking. I love how you express all the character's thoughts and feelings as the story progresses, and that is the main thing that makes this novel so entertaining to read. Keep up the good work!
I think it's really funny in a sort of Percy Jackson sort of way. It's interesting and I'll save it for when I find an alternative method to get coins without using the app because the app is hard to use (o.o I'm just bad with phones). I didn't really notice anything wrong with the grammar or anything, so I'm leaving that to people who can spot it better... The only thing that kind of made me go 'eh?' was the MC because I'm very very very very (like 100%) sure that I've never seen a fourteen year old go that sarcastic? It's sort of Percy Jackson-like sarcastic. And maybe it's because I'm blinded by my age, but most of the people I meet in a similar age gap dislike extreme sarcasm and the others are just mingling. I don't know, this is in USA and I'm from Canada so maybe USA people are different, but at least here in Canada, there isn't that much... ... idk people say libras are the ones with all the sarcasm so libraness. Also, um, do teachers in schools really say young man? I don't know, all my teachers say, "Hey, Ada, what's this..." or something like that. Most teachers, the really creepy ones are all, "Lettuce talk about mental health and never actually help you when you are genuinely nervous because we're hypocrites", the other ones are like my math teacher who is just, "Nice juicy questions." And while funny if you don't feel the need to listen, boring if you do need to listen. And are boys really that obsessive about girls? Most of the boys in my class are just... "Grades, grades, grades, we're better than the girls." I'm not totally sure, but I just found that the characterization, especially for a fourteen year old in high school, didn't sound right? Or I'm just nitpicky and unobservant to notice them actually do that... But it sort of bothered me how it deviated from how people talk to others in real life, or the story isn't going in that direction and the main focus isn't that. Other than that, I liked how everything sort of just started off with a bang and I'll try to get some coins to actually buy some chapters because the summary says Miss Bubbles and that sounds like some kid holding a weird bubble machine swinging it around. It was nice to read and funny OvO
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Great novel! This reads like a professional wrote it. Each character is well crafted, and the chapters move at a pace that leaves you on the edge of your seat the whole time. This is a spectacular piece of writing and I can't recommend it enough!
I got really hooked in this story even though I still havent read alot of chapters. This is my cup of tea, I qm into fantasy and it gets my curiosity going. Has lots of potential. Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]
This novel was so freaking awesome. The grammar was polished and no tidbits blocking the way of my reading experience. I am very happy to have such reading experience and this novel was the one of the best examples for me to learn. Kudos and Peace! ✌️
am... okay, this story is intriguing, I thought at first that it is a horror novel but turns out a fantasy one, for the writing quality I guess it's good (I really can't say too much about quality because I, myself weren't good ). What I want to say is, the story is fascinating and it is recommended...
I did only read a couple of chapters, but I can't really say anything bad about this book nor its story. It had a well-crafted world filled with interesting a unuique characters. Not to mention the writing style,, which is fantastic.
Great book! Interesting story line, I am still at the beginnings of the book but this deserves a five star rating. There are some grammar issues but nothing major. Nothing much to say except I am enjoying this, keep up the good work ✌
The author has made the brave descision to tell this story from a first person perspective. Not an easy thing to do, but they have done it effortlessly. The grammar is perfect from what I can tell. The story develops at quite a fast pace from the get go, you are launched almost straight into the action! Very well written and an enjoyable read so far! Good job!
Captivating writing and narration. Light to read and easy to digest. An interesting and rather spooky Cover. Not much to complain about, I would recommend it.
Well written... Rarely do I read a novel where the language is normal. After all, web-novel is full of authors whose second language is English. That doesn't mean they do not write well, only, each of them have their own quirks.... this novel builds the world cleanly with first three chapters, the dialogs are well with in the context even when characters are babbling. you can see the world in front of your eyes.. well done, Author. Try it! you wont regret it.
Very interesting premise of a book, not too sure I've read anything like this (might be my lack of wider reading from Wuxia). The writing style and tone is very set, in a good way, that makes it easy to follow. Looking forward to how this story unfolds.
The book is wonderfully written and gives insight to the world and the types of characters as well. It also has a very interesting concept backing it making it all the more interesting.
I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm already hooked. Your writing style is excellent, and I wouldn't bat an eye if I found this in an actual library. The description of the world allows me to see exactly what you had in mind, I didn't find even a single grammatical error. I'll keep reading, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
The novel is a rather interesting one. The premise in itself isn't completely new but it's on I don't see often. The author handles it well and does it justice. The main character Is rather quirky in the way her narrates that makes him feel rather relatable. Overall it's just a good novel overall.
A first class novel! I love the inner thoughts. The humor, the development, the uniqueness, everything is awesome. Just read the first chapter and you will get hooked:)
my god this is so nice! totally paperback/hardbound book quality! I must admit that I clicked on it thinking it was horror ('cause I was in dire need of inspiration) but I was pleasantly surprised by the writing. the way the main character narrates is very engaging and humorous. i love it!
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I've only read 13 chapters but it's very good and engaging. It's reads more of a novel than a webnovel. Great job from the author. .
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.
Writing quality is great and the plot is really great. I like the flow very great keep writing like you're doing. the characters are really great.
A very unique story to be honest...never come across such books but they say all hidden gems are not in top ranking! That's the case here too. A fantastic read and I'll recommend it always
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7 or contact kerawood.review@gmail.com
It's very well written. Personally I love the MC's witty humor and in many moments in the novel where I find myself Exhaling air from my nose and kind of chuckling to myself. Mr. Moon's way of talking is just the peak of depicting personality, and I'm just very sad that I don't get to see these kinds of things so often. The World concept is also very interesting, one that I've never really seen before so I'm really excited to see where this is going. There's really nothing to criticize. I'm just really sad to see how you so confidently shoot yourself in the foot by making the chapters past 10 paid. I read the chapters and I can see how you deserve it, but most people will just think you're some kind of snob with an over-inflated ego. Honestly, I felt the same when I first saw it as well. I found myself seeking excuses to hate ur story, because some part my head decided u were an asshole XD just because you made one small decision that made you look like one. pain
I'm amazed by the writing quality and it made me lured into the story more and more. I can't say much since the rest of the chapters are locked, but I read 10 chapters of the book, and it blows my mind. All I can say is, just read the book on your own and you won't regret it!
Your story have an interesting concept. I never see a story like this before in webnovel. Your writing is good! The words are not repetitive and you describes the scenes with exellence. I will only point out your synopsis. For me, it's quite long and wordy. Maybe you could shorten it or phrase some words better? Keep up the good work author!
Reveal Spoiler What I like the most about the story is the unique plot that it can offer, apart from all the fantasy transmigration/isekai genre I have been seeing these days. After reading the synopsis, I became enlightened about what to expect and what to know about the story. The book cover alone is enough to tell that to the readers. The prominent thing that I wanted to point out for the improvement of this novel is -Less usage of informal writing to describe the scene. This does not hinders the reader from understanding the book-and in fact, it might be engaing to some extent. But, when done regularly, it might pose a disturbance of thought process while reading the story. Overall, the story is good and the plot is there! Kudos for the author![img=recommend] -
I just read few chapters and what should I say, I am unable to keep your story down. The first thing I liked about this book are the descriptions, it was just spot on. And the second best thing, characters. These characters and their reaction felt so realistic. Keep up the good work, I would like to read more of it.
Good job Mr. Author! This is really well written, and you managed to keep me reading, even though I am not a big fan of this genre. Keep up the good work! Overall 5/5
This novel oozes experience from every side. This is honestly spectacular, a skill of writing that I myself would aspire too. Just wow author, this is awesome. I hope this can get more attention
Good job, author! I must say I don't usually read stories like this one, but it is just so hooking. I love how you express all the character's thoughts and feelings as the story progresses, and that is the main thing that makes this novel so entertaining to read. Keep up the good work!
I think it's really funny in a sort of Percy Jackson sort of way. It's interesting and I'll save it for when I find an alternative method to get coins without using the app because the app is hard to use (o.o I'm just bad with phones). I didn't really notice anything wrong with the grammar or anything, so I'm leaving that to people who can spot it better... The only thing that kind of made me go 'eh?' was the MC because I'm very very very very (like 100%) sure that I've never seen a fourteen year old go that sarcastic? It's sort of Percy Jackson-like sarcastic. And maybe it's because I'm blinded by my age, but most of the people I meet in a similar age gap dislike extreme sarcasm and the others are just mingling. I don't know, this is in USA and I'm from Canada so maybe USA people are different, but at least here in Canada, there isn't that much... ... idk people say libras are the ones with all the sarcasm so libraness. Also, um, do teachers in schools really say young man? I don't know, all my teachers say, "Hey, Ada, what's this..." or something like that. Most teachers, the really creepy ones are all, "Lettuce talk about mental health and never actually help you when you are genuinely nervous because we're hypocrites", the other ones are like my math teacher who is just, "Nice juicy questions." And while funny if you don't feel the need to listen, boring if you do need to listen. And are boys really that obsessive about girls? Most of the boys in my class are just... "Grades, grades, grades, we're better than the girls." I'm not totally sure, but I just found that the characterization, especially for a fourteen year old in high school, didn't sound right? Or I'm just nitpicky and unobservant to notice them actually do that... But it sort of bothered me how it deviated from how people talk to others in real life, or the story isn't going in that direction and the main focus isn't that. Other than that, I liked how everything sort of just started off with a bang and I'll try to get some coins to actually buy some chapters because the summary says Miss Bubbles and that sounds like some kid holding a weird bubble machine swinging it around. It was nice to read and funny OvO
Reveal Spoiler Great novel! This reads like a professional wrote it. Each character is well crafted, and the chapters move at a pace that leaves you on the edge of your seat the whole time. This is a spectacular piece of writing and I can't recommend it enough!
I got really hooked in this story even though I still havent read alot of chapters. This is my cup of tea, I qm into fantasy and it gets my curiosity going. Has lots of potential. Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]
This novel was so freaking awesome. The grammar was polished and no tidbits blocking the way of my reading experience. I am very happy to have such reading experience and this novel was the one of the best examples for me to learn. Kudos and Peace! ✌️
am... okay, this story is intriguing, I thought at first that it is a horror novel but turns out a fantasy one, for the writing quality I guess it's good (I really can't say too much about quality because I, myself weren't good ). What I want to say is, the story is fascinating and it is recommended...
I did only read a couple of chapters, but I can't really say anything bad about this book nor its story. It had a well-crafted world filled with interesting a unuique characters. Not to mention the writing style,, which is fantastic.
Great book! Interesting story line, I am still at the beginnings of the book but this deserves a five star rating. There are some grammar issues but nothing major. Nothing much to say except I am enjoying this, keep up the good work ✌
The author has made the brave descision to tell this story from a first person perspective. Not an easy thing to do, but they have done it effortlessly. The grammar is perfect from what I can tell. The story develops at quite a fast pace from the get go, you are launched almost straight into the action! Very well written and an enjoyable read so far! Good job!
Captivating writing and narration. Light to read and easy to digest. An interesting and rather spooky Cover. Not much to complain about, I would recommend it.
Well written... Rarely do I read a novel where the language is normal. After all, web-novel is full of authors whose second language is English. That doesn't mean they do not write well, only, each of them have their own quirks.... this novel builds the world cleanly with first three chapters, the dialogs are well with in the context even when characters are babbling. you can see the world in front of your eyes.. well done, Author. Try it! you wont regret it.
Very interesting premise of a book, not too sure I've read anything like this (might be my lack of wider reading from Wuxia). The writing style and tone is very set, in a good way, that makes it easy to follow. Looking forward to how this story unfolds.
The book is wonderfully written and gives insight to the world and the types of characters as well. It also has a very interesting concept backing it making it all the more interesting.
I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm already hooked. Your writing style is excellent, and I wouldn't bat an eye if I found this in an actual library. The description of the world allows me to see exactly what you had in mind, I didn't find even a single grammatical error. I'll keep reading, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
The novel is a rather interesting one. The premise in itself isn't completely new but it's on I don't see often. The author handles it well and does it justice. The main character Is rather quirky in the way her narrates that makes him feel rather relatable. Overall it's just a good novel overall.
A first class novel! I love the inner thoughts. The humor, the development, the uniqueness, everything is awesome. Just read the first chapter and you will get hooked:)
my god this is so nice! totally paperback/hardbound book quality! I must admit that I clicked on it thinking it was horror ('cause I was in dire need of inspiration) but I was pleasantly surprised by the writing. the way the main character narrates is very engaging and humorous. i love it!