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ok so i passed the 20 chapter mark and so far the only problem i have with the story is the mc aswell as arthur's character , firstly the mc is wayyy to naive and emotional , as a reincarnate especially in one preparing for a war , he should atleast be able to control his emotions considering anyone he considers a loved one can most likely die and he shouldnt be as attached to this world as the author made it to be, he acts as if it's a personal grudge. i know the author said that his emotional outburst would be explained but to me it just seems like unnecessary drama aswell as a nerf , secondly in the original story sylvie was a very large factor in getting arthur out of certain predicaments and a huge part of his growth and survival and i don't understand how he'll survive certain situations without her (his first meeting with a retainer "jagrette" of the uto fight) and if the mc takes over those fights then how is arthur suppose to become powerful enough to even help in the war ?. honestly there are alot of holes in the story imo. the mc annoys me alot but i'll continue reading to see how things playout and change my review rating depending on how it goes . 👍
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Author please don’t drop this, this is the best tbate fanfic I’ve read hope you come back soon 🙂↕️
It's a great fic, but there haven't been any updates for a long time, I hope it hasn't been abandoned! I recommend reading it, one of the best tbate fics I've ever read
one of the most well writen tbate fan fiction in my opinion, but the author give all the power up he needs and he is still weak also he is mentally unstable ☠️, and it seems like there is a second soul I don't get why many authors always do this BS and there are too many unnecessary drama too
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Very good story so far, I look forward to more chapters!👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
Excellent, wonderful, keep writing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥳🥳🥳🥳 👍👍👍👍🥰🥳🥰🤩🤩👍🥰👍🤩👍🥰🥳🥰 🤩😍😍🤩👍🥰🥳
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Autho r who is the Female Lead in the story ....,.. ............................................
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Great story, please continue writing it. It’s currently my favourite fic I’m reading now
Wonderful. I hope the writer continues the story and does not stop. I hope you continue, my brother......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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i love it so far i can't lie, the character to every thing else would definitely read the whole things if it was completed. So please finish it. you have my support bro
This review is from chapter 11. I love the story so far. Top notch writing barely any grammar and spell mistakes. The story development is promising with how the plot will separate from the original. Can't wait for the butterfly effect to finally show. Character representation is amazing. Dialogues are nice done, and the author has a good idea with power levels. I am looking forward to the action scenes.
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it's pretty new so I can't say much about development and update stability but it's amazing so far. The author seems to have a deep understanding and love for tbate. Keep up the great work! 👍😁
please don't leave this fic. I love it and hope for you to return soon
ok so i passed the 20 chapter mark and so far the only problem i have with the story is the mc aswell as arthur's character , firstly the mc is wayyy to naive and emotional , as a reincarnate especially in one preparing for a war , he should atleast be able to control his emotions considering anyone he considers a loved one can most likely die and he shouldnt be as attached to this world as the author made it to be, he acts as if it's a personal grudge. i know the author said that his emotional outburst would be explained but to me it just seems like unnecessary drama aswell as a nerf , secondly in the original story sylvie was a very large factor in getting arthur out of certain predicaments and a huge part of his growth and survival and i don't understand how he'll survive certain situations without her (his first meeting with a retainer "jagrette" of the uto fight) and if the mc takes over those fights then how is arthur suppose to become powerful enough to even help in the war ?. honestly there are alot of holes in the story imo. the mc annoys me alot but i'll continue reading to see how things playout and change my review rating depending on how it goes . 👍
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Author please don’t drop this, this is the best tbate fanfic I’ve read hope you come back soon 🙂↕️
It's a great fic, but there haven't been any updates for a long time, I hope it hasn't been abandoned! I recommend reading it, one of the best tbate fics I've ever read
one of the most well writen tbate fan fiction in my opinion, but the author give all the power up he needs and he is still weak also he is mentally unstable ☠️, and it seems like there is a second soul I don't get why many authors always do this BS and there are too many unnecessary drama too
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Very good story so far, I look forward to more chapters!👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
Excellent, wonderful, keep writing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥳🥳🥳🥳 👍👍👍👍🥰🥳🥰🤩🤩👍🥰👍🤩👍🥰🥳🥰 🤩😍😍🤩👍🥰🥳
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Autho r who is the Female Lead in the story ....,.. ............................................
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Great story, please continue writing it. It’s currently my favourite fic I’m reading now
Wonderful. I hope the writer continues the story and does not stop. I hope you continue, my brother......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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i love it so far i can't lie, the character to every thing else would definitely read the whole things if it was completed. So please finish it. you have my support bro
This review is from chapter 11. I love the story so far. Top notch writing barely any grammar and spell mistakes. The story development is promising with how the plot will separate from the original. Can't wait for the butterfly effect to finally show. Character representation is amazing. Dialogues are nice done, and the author has a good idea with power levels. I am looking forward to the action scenes.
great so far[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
it's pretty new so I can't say much about development and update stability but it's amazing so far. The author seems to have a deep understanding and love for tbate. Keep up the great work! 👍😁
please don't leave this fic. I love it and hope for you to return soon