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I'm really intrigued by the fact that this is based upon a fight between the leads and their chemistry. Beta fighting the alpha and all just so new and interesting idea. Looking forward to it and how the stuff unveils!
Hai kak aku mampir di karyamu yg satu ini wihh keren bgt kak sungguh sangat menarik ceritanya bikin penasaran alurnya juga bagus banget mudah dipahami dan bikin ingin baca terus semangat kakak
Diana and Arya dating five years and she still doubt. The fact about Diana like Ryan 😂 Oh no, it's bad for Arya. He has temperament. Poor you 😌
I wish I came across this earlier. I love it and Evey chapter just makes me yearn for more. keep it up author. I believe I am not alone in this journey.
Alpha vs Beta?! The only time I've seen this happen is in Teen Wolf. I like the idea of conflict between characters, the personalities are strong and distinct and definitely worth following the story.
Since this isn't the first book by this author that I've read, I know the author is talented. In addition, the description is accurate. Plot is engaging and interesting. The title's simplicity is appealing. I've only read a few pages so far, but I'm eager to read more. Write on, please!
The synopsis is nice both the character settings I almost feel am present in the book already the synopsis alone will make you want to know about the adventure
a very intriguing story. and the twist very interesting. I want to continue reading more. deffinetly!! Diana really is like a majority of people. always revealing what others want to see.
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😮 Wow!! Amazing synopsis, I just started reading and I thought Diana was the good guy, anyway, the plot is so dope and unique with well written chapters, I'm so hooked, Great work author, I'm rooting for you🙌🙌🙌 I definitely need new stuffs in my system.
I really like the storyline, the characterization of each character and also the setting. Each character has its own characteristics that can make an impression. I cannot wait for next chapter [img=update]
really terrific and unique novel ,I'm definitely adding this to my lib , love this and I'm looking forward to more from the author 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
When I read the first few chapters I sided with Diana and was shipping him with Ryan because Arya sounded horrible, then a few chapters in the tables turned and Ryan sounded like a horrible person, and now I'm not sure... I guess I just have to keep reading and see where the story goes...
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very good fantasy story. I can imagine what it's like in their world. top already 👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🔥🌸🌸💮💮💮🤗🤗🤗😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Wow, your work is great! I love your writing style and the way you convey your imagination to the readers. stay healthy, thor!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Very interesting! The story hooked me right from the beginning! The characters will suck you in. Definitely recommend this one! Give it a read!
4.8 stars. Everything is 5 stars except world background because it's too early to judge it and it seems like a plain modern world. I was actually shocked by the first chapter but now I've gotten used to it as romance novels seem to have much more realistic characters in it. (sorry i couldn't find 'the concubine from 21st century- english' i checked in original works and searched in the search tab, but couldn't find it. Sorry)
I like this story, very interesting and makes me so curious with Arya and Ryan. This book is really good and recommended, keep writing Author.
Okay, all I can say is I'm loving this already. 👌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💖💖💖❤️And you should try it too. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️
this story is very recommended and very interesting for to read. I always support you thor. iam waiting the continued of this story[img=recommend]
The romantic nuance combined with fantasy makes this novel interesting to read. Anyway, I recommend this novel for you to read. Don't forget to leave a comment so that the author is enthusiastic about his work ✨🙏✌️🔥
The premises of the story is great, as well as the plot and character development. There's more room for development in terms of writing and grammar. But it didn't hinder me from reading more. it is still very interesting and I'll say a great story entirely.
There were generally more grammar errors that could hinder the pace of reading and understanding. Author could go back and do some editing, especially the gender pronouns (girl=she, her hers)( boy=he, him, his). The story is nice and the characters are well made. The storyline is unique and has a lot of potential about friends and family.
The story had an interesting premise and highlights a lot of incidents which occur around us and even in our lives. The character development is also good and the switching body theme makes more fun to read.
What an interesting plot. Love and betrayal; parts of a fantastic recipe for a dramatic romance story. Each character has such distinct yet alluring traits that build up and push forward this interesting story.
wahhhh seru.... ceritanya menarik kak. di awal sudah di beri konflik yang pasti buat penasaran.. semangat author.... lanjutkan 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
padahal ceritanya seru kayanya, tapi. karena keterbatasan aku dalam bahasa English, jadinya aku gak ngerti jalan ceritanya, harus di translate dulu ke bahasa Indonesia
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Wah cerita yang menarik. Di awal bab author nya sudah menyuguhkan konflik yang kedepannya pasti bakal menarik. Wajib lah buat di tambahkan ke koleksi 😃😇😇
good story development, amazingly built characters and good plot twists. i had some issues with dialogues at first but you get used to it fast. hood job author 🥰
I'm really intrigued by the fact that this is based upon a fight between the leads and their chemistry. Beta fighting the alpha and all just so new and interesting idea. Looking forward to it and how the stuff unveils!
Hai kak aku mampir di karyamu yg satu ini wihh keren bgt kak sungguh sangat menarik ceritanya bikin penasaran alurnya juga bagus banget mudah dipahami dan bikin ingin baca terus semangat kakak
Diana and Arya dating five years and she still doubt. The fact about Diana like Ryan 😂 Oh no, it's bad for Arya. He has temperament. Poor you 😌
I wish I came across this earlier. I love it and Evey chapter just makes me yearn for more. keep it up author. I believe I am not alone in this journey.
Alpha vs Beta?! The only time I've seen this happen is in Teen Wolf. I like the idea of conflict between characters, the personalities are strong and distinct and definitely worth following the story.
Since this isn't the first book by this author that I've read, I know the author is talented. In addition, the description is accurate. Plot is engaging and interesting. The title's simplicity is appealing. I've only read a few pages so far, but I'm eager to read more. Write on, please!
The synopsis is nice both the character settings I almost feel am present in the book already the synopsis alone will make you want to know about the adventure
a very intriguing story. and the twist very interesting. I want to continue reading more. deffinetly!! Diana really is like a majority of people. always revealing what others want to see.
Reveal Spoiler 😮 Wow!! Amazing synopsis, I just started reading and I thought Diana was the good guy, anyway, the plot is so dope and unique with well written chapters, I'm so hooked, Great work author, I'm rooting for you🙌🙌🙌 I definitely need new stuffs in my system.
I really like the storyline, the characterization of each character and also the setting. Each character has its own characteristics that can make an impression. I cannot wait for next chapter [img=update]
really terrific and unique novel ,I'm definitely adding this to my lib , love this and I'm looking forward to more from the author 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
When I read the first few chapters I sided with Diana and was shipping him with Ryan because Arya sounded horrible, then a few chapters in the tables turned and Ryan sounded like a horrible person, and now I'm not sure... I guess I just have to keep reading and see where the story goes...
Reveal Spoiler very good fantasy story. I can imagine what it's like in their world. top already 👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🔥🌸🌸💮💮💮🤗🤗🤗😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Wow, your work is great! I love your writing style and the way you convey your imagination to the readers. stay healthy, thor!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Very interesting! The story hooked me right from the beginning! The characters will suck you in. Definitely recommend this one! Give it a read!
4.8 stars. Everything is 5 stars except world background because it's too early to judge it and it seems like a plain modern world. I was actually shocked by the first chapter but now I've gotten used to it as romance novels seem to have much more realistic characters in it. (sorry i couldn't find 'the concubine from 21st century- english' i checked in original works and searched in the search tab, but couldn't find it. Sorry)
I like this story, very interesting and makes me so curious with Arya and Ryan. This book is really good and recommended, keep writing Author.
Okay, all I can say is I'm loving this already. 👌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💖💖💖❤️And you should try it too. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️
this story is very recommended and very interesting for to read. I always support you thor. iam waiting the continued of this story[img=recommend]
The romantic nuance combined with fantasy makes this novel interesting to read. Anyway, I recommend this novel for you to read. Don't forget to leave a comment so that the author is enthusiastic about his work ✨🙏✌️🔥
The premises of the story is great, as well as the plot and character development. There's more room for development in terms of writing and grammar. But it didn't hinder me from reading more. it is still very interesting and I'll say a great story entirely.
There were generally more grammar errors that could hinder the pace of reading and understanding. Author could go back and do some editing, especially the gender pronouns (girl=she, her hers)( boy=he, him, his). The story is nice and the characters are well made. The storyline is unique and has a lot of potential about friends and family.
The story had an interesting premise and highlights a lot of incidents which occur around us and even in our lives. The character development is also good and the switching body theme makes more fun to read.
What an interesting plot. Love and betrayal; parts of a fantastic recipe for a dramatic romance story. Each character has such distinct yet alluring traits that build up and push forward this interesting story.
wahhhh seru.... ceritanya menarik kak. di awal sudah di beri konflik yang pasti buat penasaran.. semangat author.... lanjutkan 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
padahal ceritanya seru kayanya, tapi. karena keterbatasan aku dalam bahasa English, jadinya aku gak ngerti jalan ceritanya, harus di translate dulu ke bahasa Indonesia
Reveal Spoiler Wah cerita yang menarik. Di awal bab author nya sudah menyuguhkan konflik yang kedepannya pasti bakal menarik. Wajib lah buat di tambahkan ke koleksi 😃😇😇
good story development, amazingly built characters and good plot twists. i had some issues with dialogues at first but you get used to it fast. hood job author 🥰