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For the harem dont overdo it( around 3 or 5 is max for me beyond that is just gotta catch em all) and pls dont make sinbad a simp. I cant see him becoming a simp tbh. By the way good work, this one is kinda accurate for young sinbad and quite interesting I'd say.
This Fanfic is incredible Sinbad dental seems in character and definitely fits into the world of One Piece. well, do defiantly check out your offer work.
Love it so far (ch 16) canβ wait for more, please donβt drop! πππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππππππππππ
do a p@treon my friend, write more chapter, I bet a lot of people will be ur patron. suggestion, let him be a womanizer at first but last with one or two women only. and your fanfic is fantastic!
I donβt know how the story will turn out but itβs amazing so far and I hope you continue to write more chapter and more frequently Shsjjh
this is could be one of the best fanfiction on this site but the slow update had destroyed her after all, no one wanna put a novel in his library and wait for a month to get just a middle chapter
Update pls β¦..!;!37;!:!;@;7:!2$36383$451893$3!;:$92)993?28/93)362(2!48,6204!48,92βavsufmv6!3!29:63!38,72&3!29:βehaiag,62&3?%?{!|+~>;&!;}7?34*&?;|\35%^$?<<57*β¬!)~{33,,,??!&&&9+Β£!/62&:
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You did very well in the description of the fight. However, the story has its flaws. 1 the protagonist has the body, not the soul of sinbad, he will not be given any spiritual attributes. 2 weather devil fruit if so, it would be a logia-type devil fruit that gives the user the ability to turn into a cloud man (ι²δΊΊι, Kumo Ningen?). This fruit was consumed by Ana, a musician from the Freak Pirates. 3. To be the most similar to Sinbad, the best would be a fruit of the bible zoan of Quetzalcoatl. He is one of the most important gods in Mesoamerican culture, sometimes considered the main divinity of the Mexica pantheon. God of life, light, fertility, civilization and knowledge. Sometimes also lord of the winds and ruler of the West. It is also the Third Tezcatlipoca, associated with the color white. he can also fly, control ambient energy, and manipulate wind and air. In addition, he has the ability to manipulate environmental magical energies with a multitude of effects, as well as teleport under certain conditions. (the clouds that can be made in this case can be created with the fruit of the bible) 4. Sinbad is always direct and never lies. One thing to keep in mind is that if you lie, the lie becomes the truth. The story is going well, it's mostly advice, but I hope you read it and take it into account (use the translator for this, sorry for the confusion)
The High King of the Seven Seas: the Four Blues, both Halves of the Grandline and the Calm Belt. The Miracle born into this World, the one destined to become a Great King... SHINDOBADDO!!!!
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bagus fanfic nya, dan pemilihan buah nya juga bagus, ada kekuatan Sinbad dari Magi tanpa perlu pakai perlengkapan Djin. semoga author tidak drop fanfic ini.
Cool its Sinbad ...............................................................................................................................
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HarΓ©m: Boa Hancock, Yamato, Nico Robin, Smoothie, Sarah Fortune, Ghislaine Dedolia, Kozuki Hiyori, Shirahoshi, Baccarat, Viola....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
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Be grateful mortal, because this young master gives you a 5 star, don't you date drop this novel or i will send you to Jesus ...............
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I love the idea of Sinbad as MC. Keep it up!ππππππππππππππππo(οΏ£β½οΏ£)ο½ good( ^οΌ^ )β±~~ γ(*ΰΉΒ΄β°β―`ΰΉ)β‘ ππππππππππππππππ
Itβs too early to say if the story is good or not.The grammar and spelling is ok,some mistakes here and there.Only here because of how unique A sinbad OC and one piece world interact and seeing the potential of starting the story at the day of Rogerβs execution Since itβs about 24 to 22 years before the start of luffyβs journey and canon starting i hope the story doesnβt just do a massive timeskip after and actually do an original journey in that world,it would be harder but the story would be greater All the stars given are for Sinbad
Its a cool story. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππfive stars
Interesting story ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
5 stars for Sinbad ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So the MC is an singularity like sindbad and David jehoaz abraham from magi and have the strongest talent and potentiel with haoshoku no haki, boshushoku no haki and observation haki. But does he have a spetial constitution like big mom or kaido ?
Reveal Spoiler For the harem dont overdo it( around 3 or 5 is max for me beyond that is just gotta catch em all) and pls dont make sinbad a simp. I cant see him becoming a simp tbh. By the way good work, this one is kinda accurate for young sinbad and quite interesting I'd say.
This Fanfic is incredible Sinbad dental seems in character and definitely fits into the world of One Piece. well, do defiantly check out your offer work.
Love it so far (ch 16) canβ wait for more, please donβt drop! πππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππππππππππ
do a p@treon my friend, write more chapter, I bet a lot of people will be ur patron. suggestion, let him be a womanizer at first but last with one or two women only. and your fanfic is fantastic!
I donβt know how the story will turn out but itβs amazing so far and I hope you continue to write more chapter and more frequently Shsjjh
this is could be one of the best fanfiction on this site but the slow update had destroyed her after all, no one wanna put a novel in his library and wait for a month to get just a middle chapter
Update pls β¦..!;!37;!:!;@;7:!2$36383$451893$3!;:$92)993?28/93)362(2!48,6204!48,92βavsufmv6!3!29:63!38,72&3!29:βehaiag,62&3?%?{!|+~>;&!;}7?34*&?;|\35%^$?<<57*β¬!)~{33,,,??!&&&9+Β£!/62&:
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You did very well in the description of the fight. However, the story has its flaws. 1 the protagonist has the body, not the soul of sinbad, he will not be given any spiritual attributes. 2 weather devil fruit if so, it would be a logia-type devil fruit that gives the user the ability to turn into a cloud man (ι²δΊΊι, Kumo Ningen?). This fruit was consumed by Ana, a musician from the Freak Pirates. 3. To be the most similar to Sinbad, the best would be a fruit of the bible zoan of Quetzalcoatl. He is one of the most important gods in Mesoamerican culture, sometimes considered the main divinity of the Mexica pantheon. God of life, light, fertility, civilization and knowledge. Sometimes also lord of the winds and ruler of the West. It is also the Third Tezcatlipoca, associated with the color white. he can also fly, control ambient energy, and manipulate wind and air. In addition, he has the ability to manipulate environmental magical energies with a multitude of effects, as well as teleport under certain conditions. (the clouds that can be made in this case can be created with the fruit of the bible) 4. Sinbad is always direct and never lies. One thing to keep in mind is that if you lie, the lie becomes the truth. The story is going well, it's mostly advice, but I hope you read it and take it into account (use the translator for this, sorry for the confusion)
The High King of the Seven Seas: the Four Blues, both Halves of the Grandline and the Calm Belt. The Miracle born into this World, the one destined to become a Great King... SHINDOBADDO!!!!
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bagus fanfic nya, dan pemilihan buah nya juga bagus, ada kekuatan Sinbad dari Magi tanpa perlu pakai perlengkapan Djin. semoga author tidak drop fanfic ini.
Cool its Sinbad ...............................................................................................................................
Legalπ§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·
HarΓ©m: Boa Hancock, Yamato, Nico Robin, Smoothie, Sarah Fortune, Ghislaine Dedolia, Kozuki Hiyori, Shirahoshi, Baccarat, Viola....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Be grateful mortal, because this young master gives you a 5 star, don't you date drop this novel or i will send you to Jesus ...............
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I love the idea of Sinbad as MC. Keep it up!ππππππππππππππππo(οΏ£β½οΏ£)ο½ good( ^οΌ^ )β±~~ γ(*ΰΉΒ΄β°β―`ΰΉ)β‘ ππππππππππππππππ
Itβs too early to say if the story is good or not.The grammar and spelling is ok,some mistakes here and there.Only here because of how unique A sinbad OC and one piece world interact and seeing the potential of starting the story at the day of Rogerβs execution Since itβs about 24 to 22 years before the start of luffyβs journey and canon starting i hope the story doesnβt just do a massive timeskip after and actually do an original journey in that world,it would be harder but the story would be greater All the stars given are for Sinbad
Its a cool story. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππfive stars
Interesting story ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
5 stars for Sinbad ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So the MC is an singularity like sindbad and David jehoaz abraham from magi and have the strongest talent and potentiel with haoshoku no haki, boshushoku no haki and observation haki. But does he have a spetial constitution like big mom or kaido ?
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