The 26 and friends

LV 2

Scarlet_Wolf96

Interesting story. Even though at first I was confused about the concept of this story, slowly I understood. although I'm not completely, but at least I've read up to chapter 115 and it makes me forget about lunch time. This story seems light but able to attract the attention of readers. Most of what I like about this story is the funny moment time from several chapters. (I've forgotten which chapters 😅) Good job, authors.

LV 1

Taylor_Valk

Hello, Author Claws here (Ps, Taylor). I know my Synopsis doesn't add a lot of what is exactly happening story wise, so after 371 chapters; here we go. Ruby: Reborn as 14-year-old girl, wakes up to see that all she knew has changed; and not for the good. No one recognizes her, or what the Upfront has done to protect them. The remaining few Kids that are alive are treated worse than animals. As for the people, she meets the Heartchilds, who are willing to take her in, but as her memories flood back, she says to herself that she is not going to waste this second life she has been giving. On a track to clear up her past and make new friends along the way, she will learn what true trust is, and how far people are willing to go for something they themselves don't even know where it ends. Will Rubys newfound friends be the break she needs, or will they just hold her back from her true purpose? This story is setup as a fantasy life story. The technical term is fantasy progression, or age progression, but I like life story. Sounds so much cooler, and easier to learn. For everyone who says geez, it takes 26 chapters to end a day; that is the truth. 26 chapters; 26 letters; a lesson to be learned everyday. If it seems like the next day is just a recap of the day previous, or the newspapers and characters discuss what just happened, then surprise. That is what this is. No single character is going to miracously learn everything all at once. The chapters are shorter, yes; because Web novel says if you want to be a novelist; you need long filler chapters in order to keep people happy. I say, no you don't. Their are days where Ruby is battling monsters, and then other days where she is just hanging out with Darius and her new friends, either attending a bake sale, or a runathon; or something. Cause that is why she came back. To live anew, but with all these memories; she knows she has to leave, but doesn't want to. Plan is to write this series until the day I die hopefully. 5-8 chapters a day. Or, until Darius turns 60 some :) Thoughts? Should I continue this story, or leave it on the shelf? And sorry for feeling like I abandoned AOH. AOH is completed. Don't want to ruin it further; and the characters have already gone from present, to future, to past, and back to a new present. It would just be repeating scenes at this point, with new arcs. Hope you understand. Questions, comments, thoughts, and concerns are very welcome, so please. *Huge virtual hug*