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Review is solely based on the free chapters. Who wouldn't want an opportunity to better their health and living conditions? I'm sure everyone wants to experience the whole rags to riches scenario. Seth, MC, doesn't really go from rags to riches, but goes from poor to middle class through his and his family's efforts. In a sense, the author does a great job at depicting how certain groups of people are treated and that is the sad reality. There are many who disregard those with a disability and it's sad. But aside from that, it seems like Seth gets better. Might continue reading to see his progress and I am curious as to what happens to their world because of the asteroids. Regardless of what I wrote, don't forget to test the waters yourself. There are 40 free chapters and that's more than enough to figure out if you like the story or not!
First of all I got to chapter 33.. the end of the first volume and all I can say is what a waste of time… Everything else is good other than story development and character design for me.. read 33 chapter of mc being a useless bystander.. no action, no excitement, just hope and dream fed by author.. will till locked chapters will update review if anything even changes..
absolutely love the story and the world design also how you expand the world and don't tunnel vision the story the only thing that can be considered bad is some bits of bad Grammer here and there but you can still understand what the characters are saying
This novel is definitely interesting, I would love to see where it goes from here. This novel does have some glaring flaws though. The pace is very fast, it feels like the author has good ideas on what to do but in many places he forgot to write them, which makes the reader feel like they missed something and have to reread a bit to try to understand. The characters aren’t very well developed after a point. The Mc jumps from one thing to another and decides very randomly on what needs to be done. The Mc is said to be incredibly smart, but it goes back and forth between him being obsessive with something that would minority benefit him and him being intelligent and understanding. For example the whole art bit; Seth gets incredibly obsessed with it though it does help him in a few ways, there are many things that he could’ve done better instead. He takes no care for his physical body despite knowing that his brain is simply too amazing for his body and for him to do anything better he has to get his body to be more up to par. Then there is the months that Seth spent on obsessively working on becoming a false chief of a fake town he made of sculptures. He has next to no real reason to do that and nearly dies to do it. meanwhile he gets better at next to nothing for that entire time. And when he does get a chance to practically have his choice of any occupation as a class, instead of choosing something that would be helpful to him in both the short and long run, he chose to be a noble which even till the end barely had any real effect or helped him. The characters are not well fleshed out and aren’t very understandable in many to most situations. The world building is very interesting and I would want to see where it goes. But as mentioned earlier, it feels like the author has some good ideas but he doesn’t always write down what is going on or explain why a character would do something. The writing quality isn’t great either. There are many typos and it definitely feels like the further you read the less this novel has been proofread to clear up the writing. It feels like the author was just trying to get as much done as possible in a time limit without worrying about what was being written. All in all, it’s an interesting story. Despite my several misgivings about it I would still like to see more about it and read where the author takes this.
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This is very unique, not like the classic ''in-game skills are appearing in the real world''. I can't say much cause I'm in chap 40 but I'm really enjoying so far
highly disappointing even after 150 he still does not have a class and events happen so fast.
I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players. I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case. I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better. I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.
I love this novel, Many novel have crippled MC at start, but within few chapters Most MC get cured and power up like super Saiyan. It's unique to see a MC struggle for so long. The world background is also great, it's chilling imagining his stay at A class for one day, the ruthlessness of the upper class after blackout was just too much and it showed us the glimpse of the true world background up close. This MC is unique as he struggling with all his family and his family is also struggling with him, they also showed great support to him while struggling with their own agenda . his families are not just for show in few openning chapters, and their presence is still great for the overall development of the novel, as they appears in chapters regularly. but update period is really lacking ...
I started reading this book, 1. Had many chapters. An 2. Had decent reviews. Every review talked about how great this story is….an tbh it has some good qualities. But I just finished reading the first arc an I’m not sure this is for me. I’m finding it difficult to associate with the character, story moves kind of slow, seems to be lots of open ended ‘figure it out for yourself’ plot holes (that may or may not be answered.) Idk I want action, blood, killing, death and destruction. Not to read about a disabled crippled boy starting an art studio because he discovered he can get stronger by playing the game; only for his mommy to ban him because she treats him like a green house flower; even after he told her his findings….idk good story but man is it slow….I’ll try to force myself to push forward in the story…who knows maybe it’ll get better.
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I haven’ read that far but the kid is crippled it doesn’ t fix when he goes into vr he gets trampled on the story is not going good
from a first look, it's an extremely familiar overall worldscape (vr capsules, haptic feedback for training purposes, time dilation, a weak MC who flukes out, etc), however the author fleshed those out in rather intriguing ways, the only downside, I'm guessing the author isn't confident in English and for some reason doesn't use any grammar or spellchecker features, which I can almost guarantee will break any immersion the intrigue built up... that said, I was hooked until 150 and that's only because the author clearly and obviously hasn't realised that's an earlier chapter... which worries me because people were reading it before me and apparently they didn't notice...
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I honestly love everything about it, it's genuinely a good book and I'd recommend it to anyone tbh(though I don't really have anyone to recommend it to its the thought that counts).
Good novel to read MC starts off weak. It show his struggle to get strong I can’t wait to see how the temporal pearls affects the game and world
I wouldn’t usually give 5 stars to everything when review but the quality I most definitely enjoy, the updates couldn’t be any more stable then what they are now, it could be more yes but once people start doing more especially after getting contracted they tend to burn out. I’m happy with getting something everyday so thats why I gave this a 5 rating. I gave the story development 5 because I like how things are turning out so far, with out giving or trying not to give spoilers, let’s just say we know the some paths for the future already concerning the game, the real world, and the asteroid(im ending her so read to find out more) but I also gave it a 5 because it’s not predictable I know those 3 things will definitely be important later but I don’t know why yet so it draws you in with thinking(for me what would I do if I was in the situation) the character design I gave a 5 because at first I was like who can this MC get passed his innate defects, will spoiler his innate talents and the 3 things I mentioned earlier. And it’s still early enough that we are meeting others coming to know more about them as story goes(it’s not just stable in updates but the rate of development in my opinion) lastly background is a 5 because again we have the info but we don’t know the reasons for everything we are giving enough to speculate and comeback for more. Give it a shot if you don’t like it at least try to get to the part after he was forced to do a certain thing as thats in my opinion when every thing starts to pick up the true development because that moment leads to other pivotal ones we’ve gotten so far. Thank you for reading this far TLDR? It’s stable the main character is flesh out and though it’s still early we use budding side characters or supporting characters that could be vital. story moves at a moderate pacing giving you the world background of the world the characters and how everything came to be at the current point in story doing a good job to further help boost its development. All in all you get the info but it’s don just right that there’s still mystery and allure to drag you in
Okay maybe it’s not perfect but i can’t see the flaws so 5 star ehm It’s a good read the only flaw I have with it is that there aren’t a lot of chapter and you can’t rate that cuz the update stability is good :/
I have currently read up to the latest chapter as of the time I am posting this, writing quality is very good and I haven’t found many mistakes so far, the updateing is pretty consistent, story development is good since there is already a goal to be achieved by the mc and others and although the idea of the in-game abilities becoming real is cliched and has already been done this one is somewhat unique from my knowledge and it will be both exciting and entertaining to see how the mc develops, the world background hasn’t been explained in great detail but there has been some information given about the world’s background and how it could develop so overall the world background is adequate and doesn’t affect the story’s quality, this book as a whole is quite good and I would recommend giving it a read and to preserve with it since the start is a little confusing/slow but it gets better as you go along
Haven’t read the story yet just the synopsis But this genre is overused ok the asteroid making the vr possible is original but the « OMG MY GAME SKILL ARE NOW REAL LIFE SKILL » or « NO WAY THE GAME IS BECOMING REALITY » is like the Chinese arrogant young master in cultivation novel
Shameless review and 5 stars, I have been pregnant with this story for some time now, and for that I know it will be amazing and unique read for any one that was lucky to stumbled upon it. The Novel tell the story of Seth Enoch, a boy with below average Constitution, and due to that abnormal body of his, in slight fatigue he will lose consciousness or even went to coma. What else will that poor guy do with his life apart of Gaming Vr Games that don't require his physical cooperation. And he became good at it, until an accident happened which his mother banned him from playing. Years later another game was introduced but special and have no apparent imperfection. Seth dived again. Seth confirmed the game unusual and mysterious feel and for many reason he believed that they were not diving in game but rather their mind was being transported to another world and for that he assumed that he can copy their technology to his World or even used something to invoke beyond natural phenomena. He went on a Quest of his own to prove or disprove his assumption while also trying to brought their technology to his World. _____ The MC is smart, genius even. But it was not all about winning, he fail to win better prizes and his handicap will hindered him a lot in game and real life but he will use his head to find solutions. ***** Regarding whether the game is another world or not, read the novel and found out. You will not be disappointed!
Review is solely based on the free chapters. Who wouldn't want an opportunity to better their health and living conditions? I'm sure everyone wants to experience the whole rags to riches scenario. Seth, MC, doesn't really go from rags to riches, but goes from poor to middle class through his and his family's efforts. In a sense, the author does a great job at depicting how certain groups of people are treated and that is the sad reality. There are many who disregard those with a disability and it's sad. But aside from that, it seems like Seth gets better. Might continue reading to see his progress and I am curious as to what happens to their world because of the asteroids. Regardless of what I wrote, don't forget to test the waters yourself. There are 40 free chapters and that's more than enough to figure out if you like the story or not!
First of all I got to chapter 33.. the end of the first volume and all I can say is what a waste of time… Everything else is good other than story development and character design for me.. read 33 chapter of mc being a useless bystander.. no action, no excitement, just hope and dream fed by author.. will till locked chapters will update review if anything even changes..
absolutely love the story and the world design also how you expand the world and don't tunnel vision the story the only thing that can be considered bad is some bits of bad Grammer here and there but you can still understand what the characters are saying
This novel is definitely interesting, I would love to see where it goes from here. This novel does have some glaring flaws though. The pace is very fast, it feels like the author has good ideas on what to do but in many places he forgot to write them, which makes the reader feel like they missed something and have to reread a bit to try to understand. The characters aren’t very well developed after a point. The Mc jumps from one thing to another and decides very randomly on what needs to be done. The Mc is said to be incredibly smart, but it goes back and forth between him being obsessive with something that would minority benefit him and him being intelligent and understanding. For example the whole art bit; Seth gets incredibly obsessed with it though it does help him in a few ways, there are many things that he could’ve done better instead. He takes no care for his physical body despite knowing that his brain is simply too amazing for his body and for him to do anything better he has to get his body to be more up to par. Then there is the months that Seth spent on obsessively working on becoming a false chief of a fake town he made of sculptures. He has next to no real reason to do that and nearly dies to do it. meanwhile he gets better at next to nothing for that entire time. And when he does get a chance to practically have his choice of any occupation as a class, instead of choosing something that would be helpful to him in both the short and long run, he chose to be a noble which even till the end barely had any real effect or helped him. The characters are not well fleshed out and aren’t very understandable in many to most situations. The world building is very interesting and I would want to see where it goes. But as mentioned earlier, it feels like the author has some good ideas but he doesn’t always write down what is going on or explain why a character would do something. The writing quality isn’t great either. There are many typos and it definitely feels like the further you read the less this novel has been proofread to clear up the writing. It feels like the author was just trying to get as much done as possible in a time limit without worrying about what was being written. All in all, it’s an interesting story. Despite my several misgivings about it I would still like to see more about it and read where the author takes this.
Reveal Spoiler This is very unique, not like the classic ''in-game skills are appearing in the real world''. I can't say much cause I'm in chap 40 but I'm really enjoying so far
highly disappointing even after 150 he still does not have a class and events happen so fast.
I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players. I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case. I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better. I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.
I love this novel, Many novel have crippled MC at start, but within few chapters Most MC get cured and power up like super Saiyan. It's unique to see a MC struggle for so long. The world background is also great, it's chilling imagining his stay at A class for one day, the ruthlessness of the upper class after blackout was just too much and it showed us the glimpse of the true world background up close. This MC is unique as he struggling with all his family and his family is also struggling with him, they also showed great support to him while struggling with their own agenda . his families are not just for show in few openning chapters, and their presence is still great for the overall development of the novel, as they appears in chapters regularly. but update period is really lacking ...
I started reading this book, 1. Had many chapters. An 2. Had decent reviews. Every review talked about how great this story is….an tbh it has some good qualities. But I just finished reading the first arc an I’m not sure this is for me. I’m finding it difficult to associate with the character, story moves kind of slow, seems to be lots of open ended ‘figure it out for yourself’ plot holes (that may or may not be answered.) Idk I want action, blood, killing, death and destruction. Not to read about a disabled crippled boy starting an art studio because he discovered he can get stronger by playing the game; only for his mommy to ban him because she treats him like a green house flower; even after he told her his findings….idk good story but man is it slow….I’ll try to force myself to push forward in the story…who knows maybe it’ll get better.
Reveal Spoiler I haven’ read that far but the kid is crippled it doesn’ t fix when he goes into vr he gets trampled on the story is not going good
from a first look, it's an extremely familiar overall worldscape (vr capsules, haptic feedback for training purposes, time dilation, a weak MC who flukes out, etc), however the author fleshed those out in rather intriguing ways, the only downside, I'm guessing the author isn't confident in English and for some reason doesn't use any grammar or spellchecker features, which I can almost guarantee will break any immersion the intrigue built up... that said, I was hooked until 150 and that's only because the author clearly and obviously hasn't realised that's an earlier chapter... which worries me because people were reading it before me and apparently they didn't notice...
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I honestly love everything about it, it's genuinely a good book and I'd recommend it to anyone tbh(though I don't really have anyone to recommend it to its the thought that counts).
Good novel to read MC starts off weak. It show his struggle to get strong I can’t wait to see how the temporal pearls affects the game and world
I wouldn’t usually give 5 stars to everything when review but the quality I most definitely enjoy, the updates couldn’t be any more stable then what they are now, it could be more yes but once people start doing more especially after getting contracted they tend to burn out. I’m happy with getting something everyday so thats why I gave this a 5 rating. I gave the story development 5 because I like how things are turning out so far, with out giving or trying not to give spoilers, let’s just say we know the some paths for the future already concerning the game, the real world, and the asteroid(im ending her so read to find out more) but I also gave it a 5 because it’s not predictable I know those 3 things will definitely be important later but I don’t know why yet so it draws you in with thinking(for me what would I do if I was in the situation) the character design I gave a 5 because at first I was like who can this MC get passed his innate defects, will spoiler his innate talents and the 3 things I mentioned earlier. And it’s still early enough that we are meeting others coming to know more about them as story goes(it’s not just stable in updates but the rate of development in my opinion) lastly background is a 5 because again we have the info but we don’t know the reasons for everything we are giving enough to speculate and comeback for more. Give it a shot if you don’t like it at least try to get to the part after he was forced to do a certain thing as thats in my opinion when every thing starts to pick up the true development because that moment leads to other pivotal ones we’ve gotten so far. Thank you for reading this far TLDR? It’s stable the main character is flesh out and though it’s still early we use budding side characters or supporting characters that could be vital. story moves at a moderate pacing giving you the world background of the world the characters and how everything came to be at the current point in story doing a good job to further help boost its development. All in all you get the info but it’s don just right that there’s still mystery and allure to drag you in
Okay maybe it’s not perfect but i can’t see the flaws so 5 star ehm It’s a good read the only flaw I have with it is that there aren’t a lot of chapter and you can’t rate that cuz the update stability is good :/
I have currently read up to the latest chapter as of the time I am posting this, writing quality is very good and I haven’t found many mistakes so far, the updateing is pretty consistent, story development is good since there is already a goal to be achieved by the mc and others and although the idea of the in-game abilities becoming real is cliched and has already been done this one is somewhat unique from my knowledge and it will be both exciting and entertaining to see how the mc develops, the world background hasn’t been explained in great detail but there has been some information given about the world’s background and how it could develop so overall the world background is adequate and doesn’t affect the story’s quality, this book as a whole is quite good and I would recommend giving it a read and to preserve with it since the start is a little confusing/slow but it gets better as you go along
Haven’t read the story yet just the synopsis But this genre is overused ok the asteroid making the vr possible is original but the « OMG MY GAME SKILL ARE NOW REAL LIFE SKILL » or « NO WAY THE GAME IS BECOMING REALITY » is like the Chinese arrogant young master in cultivation novel
Shameless review and 5 stars, I have been pregnant with this story for some time now, and for that I know it will be amazing and unique read for any one that was lucky to stumbled upon it. The Novel tell the story of Seth Enoch, a boy with below average Constitution, and due to that abnormal body of his, in slight fatigue he will lose consciousness or even went to coma. What else will that poor guy do with his life apart of Gaming Vr Games that don't require his physical cooperation. And he became good at it, until an accident happened which his mother banned him from playing. Years later another game was introduced but special and have no apparent imperfection. Seth dived again. Seth confirmed the game unusual and mysterious feel and for many reason he believed that they were not diving in game but rather their mind was being transported to another world and for that he assumed that he can copy their technology to his World or even used something to invoke beyond natural phenomena. He went on a Quest of his own to prove or disprove his assumption while also trying to brought their technology to his World. _____ The MC is smart, genius even. But it was not all about winning, he fail to win better prizes and his handicap will hindered him a lot in game and real life but he will use his head to find solutions. ***** Regarding whether the game is another world or not, read the novel and found out. You will not be disappointed!