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This is just too good if u can skip racism or prejudice of mc against Black people
This story is cool bro update it fast and it has all the elements of Hollywood I read 100 chapters in one. Breath and I enjoyed it thoroughly it's worth a read give it a try you won't regret
hope mc got harem don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
please ton down the romance scene, more than 80 percent of the story are just romance, if I wanted romance, I would just read a romance novel, not a system novel
Although this is 18+ fic I am trusting you that there will not be a harem and it's just one at a time.
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The story progression is good so far with thr plot and the excitement for new chapters still there, thr only thing negative abojt this novel is the subpar lemon scenes. Better write something romantic than write low quality lemons acenes since it doesn't really create any aort of excitement rvrn when reading it when in fact such scenes are supposed to excite us not bore us.
I would have put 5 stars but the author is not telling us where to to find the original [img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked]
This is a crime against us, writer. What is the name of the original novel?plz plz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ()?? & ###*:!)?! :$22#':/?)) =%%%98"'
very good, any recommendations for a similar web novel?..................................................................................................................................................................
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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
This is just too good if u can skip racism or prejudice of mc against Black people
This story is cool bro update it fast and it has all the elements of Hollywood I read 100 chapters in one. Breath and I enjoyed it thoroughly it's worth a read give it a try you won't regret
hope mc got harem don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
please ton down the romance scene, more than 80 percent of the story are just romance, if I wanted romance, I would just read a romance novel, not a system novel
Although this is 18+ fic I am trusting you that there will not be a harem and it's just one at a time.
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The story progression is good so far with thr plot and the excitement for new chapters still there, thr only thing negative abojt this novel is the subpar lemon scenes. Better write something romantic than write low quality lemons acenes since it doesn't really create any aort of excitement rvrn when reading it when in fact such scenes are supposed to excite us not bore us.
I would have put 5 stars but the author is not telling us where to to find the original [img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked]
This is a crime against us, writer. What is the name of the original novel?plz plz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ()?? & ###*:!)?! :$22#':/?)) =%%%98"'
very good, any recommendations for a similar web novel?..................................................................................................................................................................
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you