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please ton down the romance scene, more than 80 percent of the story are just romance, if I wanted romance, I would just read a romance novel, not a system novel
Although this is 18+ fic I am trusting you that there will not be a harem and it's just one at a time.
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The story progression is good so far with thr plot and the excitement for new chapters still there, thr only thing negative abojt this novel is the subpar lemon scenes. Better write something romantic than write low quality lemons acenes since it doesn't really create any aort of excitement rvrn when reading it when in fact such scenes are supposed to excite us not bore us.
I would have put 5 stars but the author is not telling us where to to find the original [img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked]
This is a crime against us, writer. What is the name of the original novel?plz plz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ()?? & ###*:!)?! :$22#':/?)) =%%%98"'
very good, any recommendations for a similar web novel?..................................................................................................................................................................
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
hope mc got harem don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
please ton down the romance scene, more than 80 percent of the story are just romance, if I wanted romance, I would just read a romance novel, not a system novel
Although this is 18+ fic I am trusting you that there will not be a harem and it's just one at a time.
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The story progression is good so far with thr plot and the excitement for new chapters still there, thr only thing negative abojt this novel is the subpar lemon scenes. Better write something romantic than write low quality lemons acenes since it doesn't really create any aort of excitement rvrn when reading it when in fact such scenes are supposed to excite us not bore us.
I would have put 5 stars but the author is not telling us where to to find the original [img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Shocked]
This is a crime against us, writer. What is the name of the original novel?plz plz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ()?? & ###*:!)?! :$22#':/?)) =%%%98"'
very good, any recommendations for a similar web novel?..................................................................................................................................................................
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
hope mc got harem don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]