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Hey guys the story will be on pause for about a week or two cause the monthly subscription has been cancelled because I need my paycheck from my work so that I can continue. It might be sooner too I don’t know pay date always change so yea I will continue again though. 😂 haha Being broke is my skill
I will be posting 10 chapters a day till the raw is no more Thank you guys for not reporting me Hahhahahaha🫡🤭
I don't know why there bad reviews..swallowed star was one of my favorites since the og Mc was mature about the big picture and wasn't all about killing everyone..he was respected by others and he also gave respect. This fiction is awesome since he is also bringing his entire race up..when it's time to transcend, there will probably be more people who transcend meaning they will be able to save more people then the original when the universe meets its eventual end...!!
Tbh this story does not makes sense at all. 1. MC is transmigrated and is strong af but stays with parents( ahem fake parents) who dont even matter since he is not there child. 2. MC waste time by staying home while his real body is in danger. 3. The story does not makes sense, meaning what is the goal of all this character building when he isnt even from same universe? Truth, this story is made by filial son author who does not have any logical sense at all.
guys it is not just you guys that are losing a brain cells, I am reading it only because I can't find other swallowed star fanfic that has English as good as this. If you guys know of such thing, do let me know I will do the hard work of subscribing, copy/pasting and posting. eating healthy and sleeping early will surely help with recovering brain cell.
🤮🤨🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢_________________________________ Yftvycycrcyctcjctcychchctcycg hdhvuvfucycyv y yvy h ych
É a típica fanfic cliche de uma cria6de 4 anos dominando o mundo. Se gosta de ter aneurismas, leia. A revisão não deve ter menos de 140 caracteres.
More pls ............................... More pls .......................... More pls .......................... More pls .......................... More pls .......................... More pls ..........................
Hey guys the story will be on pause for about a week or two cause the monthly subscription has been cancelled because I need my paycheck from my work so that I can continue. It might be sooner too I don’t know pay date always change so yea I will continue again though. 😂 haha Being broke is my skill
I will be posting 10 chapters a day till the raw is no more Thank you guys for not reporting me Hahhahahaha🫡🤭
I don't know why there bad reviews..swallowed star was one of my favorites since the og Mc was mature about the big picture and wasn't all about killing everyone..he was respected by others and he also gave respect. This fiction is awesome since he is also bringing his entire race up..when it's time to transcend, there will probably be more people who transcend meaning they will be able to save more people then the original when the universe meets its eventual end...!!
Tbh this story does not makes sense at all. 1. MC is transmigrated and is strong af but stays with parents( ahem fake parents) who dont even matter since he is not there child. 2. MC waste time by staying home while his real body is in danger. 3. The story does not makes sense, meaning what is the goal of all this character building when he isnt even from same universe? Truth, this story is made by filial son author who does not have any logical sense at all.
guys it is not just you guys that are losing a brain cells, I am reading it only because I can't find other swallowed star fanfic that has English as good as this. If you guys know of such thing, do let me know I will do the hard work of subscribing, copy/pasting and posting. eating healthy and sleeping early will surely help with recovering brain cell.
🤮🤨🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢_________________________________ Yftvycycrcyctcjctcychchctcycg hdhvuvfucycyv y yvy h ych
É a típica fanfic cliche de uma cria6de 4 anos dominando o mundo. Se gosta de ter aneurismas, leia. A revisão não deve ter menos de 140 caracteres.