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this is undoubtedly author's best story. story doesn't drag things are happening in every chapter. not too rushed either good song choices not too unrealistic either just you have to think some artist haven't done some of their works in this world, then there is no any problem in this story. I really look forward to the next chapter everyday.
VERY good so far as long as u dont insert too much drama and keep politics meaning both government and company out it will be awesome. i understand having to put some drama but i just dont want the story to fall into a mess of constant drama just cause it all u can think of to make it keep going. it would be good to have some of the songs wrote out when he sings them and reactions put in between verses just a thought but the way ur doing it aint bad. also it would be good to name the original artist so people can look up an listen to the right song.
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Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀
"You’ve created something truly special. Keep writing – the world needs more stories like this!"
like the newest chapter is the main character just gonna focus on music or is he going do other things in entertainment
"Superstar is a celebration of ambition, resilience, and the pursuit of greatness—highly recommended!"
what the update schedule would love to read more chapters. been a while since I read a good fanfic story
It's a good idea making Ed not part of the world but could be better by making other artists not on the world so there's diversity in his song. Story does get all over at times but if you can speed up the story and start adding a lot of other artist reaction then I think the story would be elevated
Story is nice and I like the Mc and his family, few things kinda is mess and but still story has great potential. I Personally looking forward to read more. ..... .... ... .. .
Well, the concept is great but the conversation is a whole lot messy and there is no sense just things are happening in baseless order, and no world-building and character are building if it can be improved then it will be good but from my experience,e I can say that this novel is getting to hiatus...
really like this ff. Only thing you can do better on is making longer chapters or doing more chapters. ......................................................................
this is undoubtedly author's best story. story doesn't drag things are happening in every chapter. not too rushed either good song choices not too unrealistic either just you have to think some artist haven't done some of their works in this world, then there is no any problem in this story. I really look forward to the next chapter everyday.
VERY good so far as long as u dont insert too much drama and keep politics meaning both government and company out it will be awesome. i understand having to put some drama but i just dont want the story to fall into a mess of constant drama just cause it all u can think of to make it keep going. it would be good to have some of the songs wrote out when he sings them and reactions put in between verses just a thought but the way ur doing it aint bad. also it would be good to name the original artist so people can look up an listen to the right song.
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Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀
"You’ve created something truly special. Keep writing – the world needs more stories like this!"
like the newest chapter is the main character just gonna focus on music or is he going do other things in entertainment
"Superstar is a celebration of ambition, resilience, and the pursuit of greatness—highly recommended!"
what the update schedule would love to read more chapters. been a while since I read a good fanfic story
It's a good idea making Ed not part of the world but could be better by making other artists not on the world so there's diversity in his song. Story does get all over at times but if you can speed up the story and start adding a lot of other artist reaction then I think the story would be elevated
Story is nice and I like the Mc and his family, few things kinda is mess and but still story has great potential. I Personally looking forward to read more. ..... .... ... .. .
Well, the concept is great but the conversation is a whole lot messy and there is no sense just things are happening in baseless order, and no world-building and character are building if it can be improved then it will be good but from my experience,e I can say that this novel is getting to hiatus...
really like this ff. Only thing you can do better on is making longer chapters or doing more chapters. ......................................................................