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A guy died because of God and to compensate him god reincarnated him in danmachi with the powers and all the experiences of all sub-zero.
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I'll be blunt it's a solid idea with a good execution with everything other then the biggest part of any story grammar the grammar is so hard to understand that it takes a minute to decipher if you don't have you trusty rosetta stone to decipher these hieroglyphics then don't read that's a but of a hyperbole I'll be honest yes it's hard to read, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't continue it is good, and I'll continue because I've read worse, but yea
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Really interesting idea but executed terribly and so many cliche’s it’s not even funny If you just kept it being the mc as subzero then it Would be Cool but then you introduced scorpion which is stupid Also there’s the fact that he taught bell cryokinesis which can’t be taught The story is incredibly hard to read and overall just bad I Hope someone who Can actualy speak english and is good at grammer Could Write something similar like maybe a mortal kombat system? Where you can change to the different mortal kombat characters and have there skills,abilities and knowledge? Sounds like a dope idea i have never seen before Anyways overall this fanfic is trash and a waste of time
Ohh the grammar and the wording... its ruins this story... if only the author was better i could give this above 4.5 score. Edit: the grammar made me regret my scoring, so i lowered it even more
My god it like read a machine translation of a novel. If my nose wasn't bleeding before I started reading this, I would've thought I might have an aneurysm trying to read the story.
An amazing idea that was poorly planned and poorly executed. Not really worth a read... If you could even get through the first 2 chapters.
Grammar kills the story and it feels really rushed. no character development super short chapters its just not very good imo but the idea was solid
Scorpion appers out of nowhere.....really dude?....... so much potential wasted...............................................................
Their has only been 2 other ff/novels that made me turn away from reading it and giving it a chance before even reading the full first chapter you're the 3rd.
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with the power and EXPERIENCE of ALL subzero? the first thing I see is a chapter called training but he has the experience so what?.........
good! Honestly i dont really know about where the mc and his friend are from before author informed us, which make danmachi more interesting, i think. hoping for more plots. i dont mind author making lots and lots of problems and new goals or whatevee he wants. just pls dont stick much to anime plots. 😃😃😃
got to be honest not read much but it's a good read and I kind of love how subzero and scorpion are basically best frienemies kind of like baljeet and Buford from Phineas and Ferb
i have not read it but if your having problem with grammar which it seems your are having form the comments you can porb try grammerly or type in microsoft word.**. also heres 5 stasr a little gift from me
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Choji:......Strong Neji:........Very Strong Naruto:...Super Strong Madara:..Peak of Strength People who can read this ff and understand it despite its deadly grammar:..*Que One Punch OST*