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Strongest Swordsman In One Piece El espadachín más fuerte de One Piece Una historia muy buena, aunque el final estuvo muy apresurado, pero es mejor eso que tener un final malo. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
where can I find the free next chapter? will you stop uploading chapters here?
great read. i really enjoy this fic. he's quite OP but still need go learn more
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The story is pretty interesting overall, but the mc turning into a tyrant after he killed hundreds of thousands of people is incomprehensible. And he wasn't really wearing a hypocritical mask before, that part just feels forced tbh, just to make the mc being more ruthless make sense. I would have preferred if he remained in his pirate hunter mentality but with a more domineering attitude instead of turning into a psychopath. You don't need to turn into a mass murderer to be a strong person, this just goes to show how immature the authors mindset is. Anyway that aside, overall its a good read where mc isn't too overpowered but he is strong enough with a combination of reasonable talent combinations, similar to Bigmoms physique but not the same and a more reasonable power, Redfields observation haki is good since in the end its actually an auxiliary power so it doesn't affect power levelling much, swordsmanship is developed decently since there are actually a lot of swordsmen, and the thing that prevents them from reaching the top is talent and physique where mc reaches the physique requirements earlier due to his bigmom type talent. His conquerors is just mutated to have murderous intent which is also not overpowered. His fruit development route is honestly more sensible than shiki since tbh shiki was nerfed af and would have been a bigger threat than whitehead if he had more imagination, since what limits fruit development is imagination, especially for paramecia as can be seen with Kuma who can reach the top with paws but the other people wasted it. I hope you can continue updating this.
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Ill give world bg and update stability a props. 5/5 But man. Writing quality or should I say the translation is poor. Very hard to read .Character development he's becoming a hypocrite. In an unlikable way.Even more so tge character design 👎👎. Ignoring the MC, the side characters feel too bland. Even then I had enjoyed reading it. But not. until ch 150 .
It's worth reading and it doesn't get annoying. In fact, it's satisfying. Mm. There weren't many things left. MC had grown to the point of being the most powerful. Still, the translations stopped at Ch272; here, there are only 218.
I’m currently only at chapter 9 but I can already tell the author of this story is like me when I’m writting an essay and trying to make the words count. The story feels super slow because the author keep repeating the same information over and over again and only make slight changes to the sentence to make it seems different.
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Vorrei leggere finno alla fine questo fanfic. E aspetto che lo finisca presto. Preferisco tutti i tipi di lettura ma questa è stata la migliore
Tentei muito ler essa história. Primeiro tem bastante erros gramaticais e não sou muito exigente. Mesmo assim dá de ler se ignorar bastante. Segundo o autor fala detalhes uniteis. Ele fala de mais sobre crianças. Sim são crianças não importa o quanto eles estão desenvolvidos fisicamente eles são crianças. Eu particularmente não gostei disso. Mas consegui continuar lendo pensando que a idade deles é o que eles aparentam ter. Agora o que me fez largar isso são capítulo sobre à akuma no mi favorita do MC. Primeiro tem bastante coisaa ilogicas com a munch-munch fruit mas dá de ignorar também essa coisa mórbida de synthèse de cadaveres. Agora o cara tem como ter um monte de frutas de diabo que pode escolher por essa habilidade. Ele parece um cara inteligente e escolhe a opção de flutuar. Considerando que sua esgrima é destrutiva o suficiente e ele não precisa de mais poder destrutivo isso pode fazer sentido. Senão fazer flutuar coisas com um toque não parece muito impressionante ao lado da fruta Rumble rumble (ele pode voar com relâmpago). Não entendo o motivo da escola dessa fruta. Agora usar a fruta para fazer météores pode parecer incrível mas é inútil contra um monte de inimigos possíveis. Luffy por exemplo, usuários das frutas logia outro exemplo. Fora isso temos também usuários de haki que podem resistir de certa forma. Agora se a questão é ser um trunfo estratégico, uma opção para ser uma ameaça ao mundo e causar dano em larga escala sem considerar as consequências isso é um bom fruto.
Only female crewmates: check Author being a virgin: check Creating an OP char which ruins the balance at the start: check Being a cringy edgelord who can't portray emotions: check Leaving a 1 star review: check
Sorry but im out. Can't stand the MC. Its okay to be cold blooded, but MC really dont care about human lives and kill them and still blame them cause they are weak.
Yaiiiiiii🥳🥳 I have finally become the first in PS list 🤯🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm a bit disappointed with this story because the writing is pretty bad. The main character is bland, and make feel unmotivated to follow his journey. But then again maybe I will give this an another chance.
Nunca me esperé la presencia de la fruta de Shiki y de Wipol, la inclusión de Perona, Carina, Yamato y muchos otros personajes. Personalmente me gustó mucho como cultivó a las primeras 4 chicas antes de Robin pero después de ella el resto pasó como a no tener importancia más que ser herramientas (como la rehén y la Secretaría) Fuera de eso, esta historia me ha dado muchas sorpresas que la hacen agradable para mí.
Love your ff❤️ I hope it never drops🙏 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
what more can I say than that the story fells like a well planned one not like most which are only rushed without proper details for the readers to imagine a proper world or unnecessary details 😉 so till the latest chapter I read it's pretty good
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It felt like story had lot of good ideas but not had the essence of one piece....felt bit like it follows too much like reporting of mc progress....
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This is Hard to read on any website can't find any translation only picture of the novel Can I ask if you know where can I read a fanfiction about "Marvel Bounty hunter" this novel is like this hard to find any translations
just typical chinese mc - face slapping and no story and character development and perv
Strongest Swordsman In One Piece El espadachín más fuerte de One Piece Una historia muy buena, aunque el final estuvo muy apresurado, pero es mejor eso que tener un final malo. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
where can I find the free next chapter? will you stop uploading chapters here?
great read. i really enjoy this fic. he's quite OP but still need go learn more
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The story is pretty interesting overall, but the mc turning into a tyrant after he killed hundreds of thousands of people is incomprehensible. And he wasn't really wearing a hypocritical mask before, that part just feels forced tbh, just to make the mc being more ruthless make sense. I would have preferred if he remained in his pirate hunter mentality but with a more domineering attitude instead of turning into a psychopath. You don't need to turn into a mass murderer to be a strong person, this just goes to show how immature the authors mindset is. Anyway that aside, overall its a good read where mc isn't too overpowered but he is strong enough with a combination of reasonable talent combinations, similar to Bigmoms physique but not the same and a more reasonable power, Redfields observation haki is good since in the end its actually an auxiliary power so it doesn't affect power levelling much, swordsmanship is developed decently since there are actually a lot of swordsmen, and the thing that prevents them from reaching the top is talent and physique where mc reaches the physique requirements earlier due to his bigmom type talent. His conquerors is just mutated to have murderous intent which is also not overpowered. His fruit development route is honestly more sensible than shiki since tbh shiki was nerfed af and would have been a bigger threat than whitehead if he had more imagination, since what limits fruit development is imagination, especially for paramecia as can be seen with Kuma who can reach the top with paws but the other people wasted it. I hope you can continue updating this.
Reveal Spoiler Ill give world bg and update stability a props. 5/5 But man. Writing quality or should I say the translation is poor. Very hard to read .Character development he's becoming a hypocrite. In an unlikable way.Even more so tge character design 👎👎. Ignoring the MC, the side characters feel too bland. Even then I had enjoyed reading it. But not. until ch 150 .
It's worth reading and it doesn't get annoying. In fact, it's satisfying. Mm. There weren't many things left. MC had grown to the point of being the most powerful. Still, the translations stopped at Ch272; here, there are only 218.
I’m currently only at chapter 9 but I can already tell the author of this story is like me when I’m writting an essay and trying to make the words count. The story feels super slow because the author keep repeating the same information over and over again and only make slight changes to the sentence to make it seems different.
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Reveal Spoiler Vorrei leggere finno alla fine questo fanfic. E aspetto che lo finisca presto. Preferisco tutti i tipi di lettura ma questa è stata la migliore
Tentei muito ler essa história. Primeiro tem bastante erros gramaticais e não sou muito exigente. Mesmo assim dá de ler se ignorar bastante. Segundo o autor fala detalhes uniteis. Ele fala de mais sobre crianças. Sim são crianças não importa o quanto eles estão desenvolvidos fisicamente eles são crianças. Eu particularmente não gostei disso. Mas consegui continuar lendo pensando que a idade deles é o que eles aparentam ter. Agora o que me fez largar isso são capítulo sobre à akuma no mi favorita do MC. Primeiro tem bastante coisaa ilogicas com a munch-munch fruit mas dá de ignorar também essa coisa mórbida de synthèse de cadaveres. Agora o cara tem como ter um monte de frutas de diabo que pode escolher por essa habilidade. Ele parece um cara inteligente e escolhe a opção de flutuar. Considerando que sua esgrima é destrutiva o suficiente e ele não precisa de mais poder destrutivo isso pode fazer sentido. Senão fazer flutuar coisas com um toque não parece muito impressionante ao lado da fruta Rumble rumble (ele pode voar com relâmpago). Não entendo o motivo da escola dessa fruta. Agora usar a fruta para fazer météores pode parecer incrível mas é inútil contra um monte de inimigos possíveis. Luffy por exemplo, usuários das frutas logia outro exemplo. Fora isso temos também usuários de haki que podem resistir de certa forma. Agora se a questão é ser um trunfo estratégico, uma opção para ser uma ameaça ao mundo e causar dano em larga escala sem considerar as consequências isso é um bom fruto.
Only female crewmates: check Author being a virgin: check Creating an OP char which ruins the balance at the start: check Being a cringy edgelord who can't portray emotions: check Leaving a 1 star review: check
Sorry but im out. Can't stand the MC. Its okay to be cold blooded, but MC really dont care about human lives and kill them and still blame them cause they are weak.
Yaiiiiiii🥳🥳 I have finally become the first in PS list 🤯🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm a bit disappointed with this story because the writing is pretty bad. The main character is bland, and make feel unmotivated to follow his journey. But then again maybe I will give this an another chance.
Nunca me esperé la presencia de la fruta de Shiki y de Wipol, la inclusión de Perona, Carina, Yamato y muchos otros personajes. Personalmente me gustó mucho como cultivó a las primeras 4 chicas antes de Robin pero después de ella el resto pasó como a no tener importancia más que ser herramientas (como la rehén y la Secretaría) Fuera de eso, esta historia me ha dado muchas sorpresas que la hacen agradable para mí.
Love your ff❤️ I hope it never drops🙏 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
what more can I say than that the story fells like a well planned one not like most which are only rushed without proper details for the readers to imagine a proper world or unnecessary details 😉 so till the latest chapter I read it's pretty good
Je vois pas la Dif en tre ça et mtl [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Float float no mi hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahaqhhahahqhahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahha
Reveal Spoiler It felt like story had lot of good ideas but not had the essence of one piece....felt bit like it follows too much like reporting of mc progress....
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
92 TAKE THAT!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!
Шикарно спасибо большое за главу жду продолжения🥃🔥🔥🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃😅😅😅😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😅😅😅😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😅😅😅😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😅😅😅😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
This is Hard to read on any website can't find any translation only picture of the novel Can I ask if you know where can I read a fanfiction about "Marvel Bounty hunter" this novel is like this hard to find any translations
just typical chinese mc - face slapping and no story and character development and perv